Error correction 1 politicas 2019

1. She climbed so well the ladder that she found herself in an
almost exclusive male environment
She climbed the ladder so well that she found
herself in an almost exclusively male environment
She told her that if you're a man, succeeding and being
introverted is more compatible that if you are a woman
She told her that if you're a man, succeeding and
being introverted is more compatible than if you are
a woman
Noémie didn't really care about Janice's complains and
shouts because actually, a few days before, she received
an offer from above her crazy and selfish boss.
Noémie didn't really care about Janice's complaints
and shouts because, actually, a few days before, she
had received an offer from her crazy and selfish
boss’s own boss.
Noémie couldn't stop thinking about what her boss Mr
Fabrice said on the last meeting. He said that she's too shy
and she had a big lack of self-confidence.
Noémie couldn't stop thinking about what her boss
Mr Fabrice had said during the last meeting. He said
that she was too shy and had a big lack of self-
confidence.
She was alone in her office, when he cames. Like
everydays he was wearing expensive clothes and to her
place, she could smell his strong fragrance. She was quiet,
waiting he saids something.

2. She was alone in her office, when he came. Like
everyday he was wearing expensive clothes and
from where she was sitting/standing, she could
smell his strong fragrance. She was quiet, waiting
for him to say something.
She was very stressed, expecting the moment he will ask
her to leave the company for the reason that she was too
shy and introvert with the others salarees.
She was very stressed, expecting the moment when
he would ask her to leave the company because she
was too shy and introverted towards the other
employees.
She couldn't stop reminding the violent way Mr Smith
grabbed her arm at the end of the meeting.
She couldn't stop remembering how Mr Smith
grabbed her arm at the end of the meeting.
He told her, in a moralistic way that she had to
strengthen. According to him, she was guilty for beeing
too much introvert and had to learn how to say no.
He told her, in a condescending / patronizing way
that she had to strengthen her resolve /
determination. He accused her of being too
introverted / too much of an introvert and told her
she had to learn how to say no.
This makes 3 weeks that Noémie went to the psychologist.

3. It’s been 3 weeks since Noémie went to the
psychologist.
I was a bit surprised because he looked angry against me.
I was a bit surprised because he seemed angry at
me / looked angrily at me.