1. The author doesn't show nike's first steps as a great tour
de force, but as the course of a young entrepreneur's life
The author doesn't show Nike's first steps as a great tour
de force, but rather as the ordinary course of a young
entrepreneur's life
Some of the hurtles that he found along his way in the
shoe industry were the obsticles such as the people that
did not believe he could do it, though he remained
undeterred, which makes the story of his life even more
uplifting.
Though he did encounter a few hurdles, for instance
people around him not believing he would make it, he
remained undeterred, which makes the story of his life
even more uplifting. (not perfect but it flows better)
Crisis, a word that perfectly defines many of the problems
he will crackle through
Crisis management is probably the phrase that best
defines how he troubleshot many of the problems he
encountered along the way
Shoe dog is tagged inspirational.
Shoe dog has been tagged / dubbed inspirational.
After a conversation with his father he agrees to pay for
his adventure
After a conversation with his father, the latter agrees to
pay for his adventure
2. Despite they end up spending more time than the
expected, he finally heads off to Japan his actual
destination but this time alone
Despite their spending more time than expected in Hawaï,
he finally heads off alone to Japan, his actual destination.
He managed to get in touch with a shoemaker factory in
order to negotiate the exclusivity contract to set the ball
rolling of his company
He managed to get in touch with a shoe making factory in
order to negotiate the exclusive contract that will / would
set the ball rolling for his company
With no doubt, he can be considered one of the greatest
pioneers of our time
He is indubitably one of the most remarkable pioneers of
our time
