This document contains feedback from three reviewers - Ashley McGovern, Paul Coughlin, and Barbara Gregory - on a film project by Sam Gregory-Haigh. Ashley addressed issues with lighting, animation smoothness, and object surfaces. Paul agreed with fixing the animation but left the lighting. Barbara suggested adding a background color, making doors 3D, and including music.

1. Sam Gregory-Haigh FMP feedback form
Completed by Ashley McGovern
Issues Fixes (if applicable)
Too dark at
some points
I fixed this by re-rendering with more lights
Animation was a
bit jumpy in
places
Fixed by adding more frames between each keyframe
Surfaces are a
little off on
some objects
Opened the file in modeler and re sized the surfaces to the optimal size

2. Sam Gregory-Haigh FMP feedback form
Completed by Paul Coughlin
Sam Gregory-Haigh FMP feedback form
Issues Fixes (if applicable)
Lights are not correct at some points I did not change the positions of the lights as I feel that
they are fine
Animation was a bit jumpy in places Fixed by adding more frames between each keyframe
No music in Background Re-rendered with music in the background

3. Completed by Barbara Gregory
Issues Fixes (if applicable)
Needs a background colour when it
zooms out
I feel its fine so I am going to leave it black
Doorways look very 2d Edited the model so that the doors are now 3d planes as
they were 2d planes
Needs some music or sound effects
applied to it
Re-rendered with music in the background