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The FATt Statement
How to incorporate an outside source for
the first time in an essay
Why FATt?
In academic writing, writers are often
required to incorporate outside sources into
their essays.
For example, you may read an article,
story, novel, book, etc and have to use
elements from that text in your own text.
But we can’t just drop in information out of
the blue.
Instead, we have to follow a certain format,
which we’ll call the FATt Statement.
What happens if you don’t introduce
the outside source…
“Bomb dropping” new information
into your essay from out of the blue
is awkward and confusing.
Your reader has no idea what or who you are
talking about!
For example…
Have you ever judged someone by his or her
name? You may or may not have done so,
but researchers such as Mosher have been
asking this question for a long time.
However, I believe that Mosher’s theories
are invalid.
Imagine you are not in this class, but you
are an outside reader.
Wouldn’t you be asking yourself, “Who
the heck is Mosher?! WHAT DOES THIS
MEAN!?”
Check all the boxes!
What elements do we need when
referring to an outside source?
1. The author: first and last name; then last
name only.
2. The title of the work: underline if it’s a
book, “quotations” if it’s an essay or
article
3. The type of work: essay, article, novel,
etc
4. A summary or explanation of the author’s
main focus or “I Say”
Use a FATt Statement
Samples of FATt
In William Golding’s novel The Lord of the Flies,
the reader watches a group of seemingly civilized,
innocent British schoolboys degenerate into
savages, making the point that the defects of a
flawed society can be traced to their source—the
human heart.
In the essay “How Boys Become Men” by Jon
Katz, he explains that boys growing up must follow
a set of rules, or a ‘code of conduct’ in order to be
considered real men by the time they reach
adulthood. Katz expands on this boy code,
including “don’t snitch,” which means…
But wait! There’s more…
Now that you’ve gone to all that trouble to
introduce your outside source, you don’t
want to just forget about that author…
A good essay not only refers to the author
and text in the intro, but continues to call
back to the text/refer to it throughout the
entire essay.
This shows that you are constantly aware
of your conversation, of what inspired you
to write the essay.

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The FATt Statement

  • 1. The FATt Statement How to incorporate an outside source for the first time in an essay
  • 2. Why FATt? In academic writing, writers are often required to incorporate outside sources into their essays. For example, you may read an article, story, novel, book, etc and have to use elements from that text in your own text. But we can’t just drop in information out of the blue. Instead, we have to follow a certain format, which we’ll call the FATt Statement.
  • 3. What happens if you don’t introduce the outside source… “Bomb dropping” new information into your essay from out of the blue is awkward and confusing. Your reader has no idea what or who you are talking about!
  • 4. For example… Have you ever judged someone by his or her name? You may or may not have done so, but researchers such as Mosher have been asking this question for a long time. However, I believe that Mosher’s theories are invalid. Imagine you are not in this class, but you are an outside reader. Wouldn’t you be asking yourself, “Who the heck is Mosher?! WHAT DOES THIS MEAN!?”
  • 5. Check all the boxes! What elements do we need when referring to an outside source? 1. The author: first and last name; then last name only. 2. The title of the work: underline if it’s a book, “quotations” if it’s an essay or article 3. The type of work: essay, article, novel, etc 4. A summary or explanation of the author’s main focus or “I Say”
  • 6. Use a FATt Statement
  • 7. Samples of FATt In William Golding’s novel The Lord of the Flies, the reader watches a group of seemingly civilized, innocent British schoolboys degenerate into savages, making the point that the defects of a flawed society can be traced to their source—the human heart. In the essay “How Boys Become Men” by Jon Katz, he explains that boys growing up must follow a set of rules, or a ‘code of conduct’ in order to be considered real men by the time they reach adulthood. Katz expands on this boy code, including “don’t snitch,” which means…
  • 8. But wait! There’s more… Now that you’ve gone to all that trouble to introduce your outside source, you don’t want to just forget about that author… A good essay not only refers to the author and text in the intro, but continues to call back to the text/refer to it throughout the entire essay. This shows that you are constantly aware of your conversation, of what inspired you to write the essay.