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Opening scene pitch
Stephanie Ryan, Elliot Dinnage, Phil Taylor, James Kearsey

The Outline
Story:
Begins with Alex lying down on the grass face up, his eyes are closed. He
opens his eyes and looks up and see’s a figure looking down on him. The
camera then moves slowly to see the bully’s chest with blood all over his
shirt, the bully collapses next to Alex. Alex passes out. Screen goes black
(Film Title).
Next shot is the view of a ceiling in a long corridor with strip lighting flying
past. Shot switches back to Alex who is on a hospital trolley being
transferred to a emergency ward. He passes out again.
Goes back 24 hours. Alex is sitting outside on his own flicking through his
school notebook, you can see messages like ‘’why won’t they leave me
alone?’’ and ‘’I just want it to end’’. Alex then looks in his bag and strokes
the blade of a knife he has stashed in his bag. The school bell rings and the
bully emerges from the school, Alex tries to run away but the bully catches
him, the bully torments Alex, Alex gets close to tears and bulls the knife,
goes to strike the bully with it.
Screen goes black.
Characters
James – Alex
(victim of intense bullying, plays a sad,
angry character, possible suicidal
tendencies.)
Phil – Bully
(Un-named character, insecure which is
why he bullies Alex possibly? Bullies Alex to
the point where he pushes him over the
edge.)
Location
Reigate College –
County building corridor
Priory Park –
Big field
Possible locations and settings
-Woods
-Running Scenes
-Fields
-Long Corridor
Costume
Bully – Generally darker clothing to show insecurity.
Alex – Normal clothing is fine, possibly slightly geeky.
Props
Fake Knife (Retractable)
Trolley (For hospital scene)
Notepad (Contains Alex’s thoughts and his mental breakdown on the
bullying)
Fake Blood (Stab wound blood)
Script

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Opening scene presentation media-1

  • 1. Group 013 Opening scene pitch Stephanie Ryan, Elliot Dinnage, Phil Taylor, James Kearsey 
  • 2. The Outline Story: Begins with Alex lying down on the grass face up, his eyes are closed. He opens his eyes and looks up and see’s a figure looking down on him. The camera then moves slowly to see the bully’s chest with blood all over his shirt, the bully collapses next to Alex. Alex passes out. Screen goes black (Film Title). Next shot is the view of a ceiling in a long corridor with strip lighting flying past. Shot switches back to Alex who is on a hospital trolley being transferred to a emergency ward. He passes out again. Goes back 24 hours. Alex is sitting outside on his own flicking through his school notebook, you can see messages like ‘’why won’t they leave me alone?’’ and ‘’I just want it to end’’. Alex then looks in his bag and strokes the blade of a knife he has stashed in his bag. The school bell rings and the bully emerges from the school, Alex tries to run away but the bully catches him, the bully torments Alex, Alex gets close to tears and bulls the knife, goes to strike the bully with it. Screen goes black.
  • 3. Characters James – Alex (victim of intense bullying, plays a sad, angry character, possible suicidal tendencies.) Phil – Bully (Un-named character, insecure which is why he bullies Alex possibly? Bullies Alex to the point where he pushes him over the edge.)
  • 4. Location Reigate College – County building corridor Priory Park – Big field Possible locations and settings -Woods -Running Scenes -Fields -Long Corridor
  • 5. Costume Bully – Generally darker clothing to show insecurity. Alex – Normal clothing is fine, possibly slightly geeky.
  • 6. Props Fake Knife (Retractable) Trolley (For hospital scene) Notepad (Contains Alex’s thoughts and his mental breakdown on the bullying) Fake Blood (Stab wound blood)