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  • 1. Feedback on 1st draft of media film: ๏ƒ˜ Blue bags for forensic shoes ๏ƒ˜ A conversation for the forensic and detective (crime/drama language) ๏ƒ˜ Better to use two cameras so filming can be easier to edit later ๏ƒ˜ Have a written script for the actors to follow ๏ƒ˜ Having a longer pan out of the eye and maybe other shots e.g. hand and legs ๏ƒ˜ Tracking and panning shots to establish the setting and location ๏ƒ˜ Erzaโ€™s costume should be a stereo typical party girl