2. http://bethspenceley.blogspot.co.uk/
Beth Drape
Strong Points Weak Points
• For research, style models were used as • Too many fonts on one page
well as a detailed and thorough • Same image used on two pages
questionnaire, asking clients what they • No school magazine
want from a magazine
• Various forms of presentation including
written text, video clips and mp3’s
• Variety of multimedia
• Magazine analysis
• Good layout
• Audience analysis
Suggested improvements – There should be a school magazine on the blog, as this
shows early research and planning. Do not use the same image twice
Research and planning: 20/20 Construction: 55/60 Evaluation: ?
3. http://isladawnjohnston.blogspot.co.uk/
Isla Johnston
Strong Points Weak Points
• For research, style models were used as • Too many fonts on one page
well as a detailed and thorough • Contents page ripped off from NME
questionnaire, asking clients what they • Too much small print text in one go
want from a magazine
• Grammatical errors
• Various forms of presentation including
written text and video clips
• Variety of multimedia
• Magazine analysis
• Good layout
• Audience analysis
Suggested improvements – Keep work more original instead of copying from style
models, spread out text on the feature article, and also double check spelling and
grammar on blog
Research and planning: 20/20 Construction: 50/60 Evaluation: ?
4. http://brandomedia.blogspot.co.uk/
Brandon Stephenson
Strong Points Weak Points
• Various forms of presentation including • Too many fonts on one page
written text and video clips • Very little blogging
• Variety of multimedia • Not much work submitted
• Magazine analysis (sort of) • Cover badly constructed
• Good layout • Contents page badly constructed
• Page numbers in wrong order on contents
page
Suggested improvements – Update blog more often, use less fonts, spend more time
constructing the magazine pages, double check small details like page numbers
Research and planning: 8/20 Construction: 40/60 Evaluation: 0/20
