The document discusses revisions made to a poster design. The original draft used exterior shots as a background but they did not layer well. Feedback from a focus group noted issues with the stance being wrong and too much empty space on the left, making it look "pretty" rather than informative. The document also notes the billing block looked too sharp and blunt, so revisions were needed.

1. I had originally planned to use these
exterior shots I took as a background
on my poster but when I tried layering
it on my image it didn’t work.

3. This was my first draft (above) of my poster but after
getting some feedback from our focus group, people
felt the stance was wrong with her hand on her hip
and they felt there was too much to the left which
made it look almost ‘pretty’. I also didn’t like how
sharp and blunt my billing block looked so needed
to change this.