This powerpoint presentation shows screenshots of the 2nd draft for my music magazine and clearly states what improvements need to be made to each section to make my magazine as realisting and appealing as possible.

2. What I will improve:
• I will add a background to cover up the white
space
• I will add more pictures to make the front
cover look more like a music magazine and to
make it more attractive

4. What I will improve:
• For the contents page, I will add something to
the bottom left corner to make it more
appealing than just plain black and white
• For the interview page, I will add a picture of
‘Kara Coleman’ to the page, possible in the
middle of the page to link to the main article
and to break up the writing so it isn't so plain

6. What I will improve:
• I will either add some quotes, some more
questions, some more pictures of a
background to fill in the white space and to
make it look more like a real music magazine