3. Quick Review
How will you
focus your
essay?
Take a look at what you have
so far: do you have a concept?
A focus for your concept?
Categories?
Types?
4. Concept: Games
Limiter: Playground Games
Types Types
Kids’ games with a ball Kids’ games without a ball
Teenagers’ games with a Teenagers’ games without
ball a ball
Adults’ games with a ball. Adults’ games without a
ball.
5. Formulating a Working
Thesis Statement
Refer to our model essays to see
how others handle a thesis for this
kind of essay
6. In his essay on cannibalism, Ngo offers his
thesis statement in paragraph six:
Cannibalism can be broken down into two main
categories: exocannibalism, the eating of outsiders or
foreigners, and endocannibalism, the eating of members
of one’s own social group (Shipman 70). Within these
categories are several functional types of cannibalism,
three of the most common being survival cannibalism,
dietary cannibalism, and religious and ritual cannibalism.
Ngo’s concept is cannibalism; his focus is on functional
cannibalism.
He has two categories: Endo and Exocannibalism
He has three types: Survival, dietary, and religious/ritual
cannibalism
In his thesis, he carefully forecasts both how he will divide the
information to create topics and the order in which he will explain
each of the topics
7. Anastasia Toufexis begins her essay with her
thesis statement:
O.K., let’s cut out all this nonsense about romantic
love. Let’s bring some scientific precision to the party.
Let’s put love under a microscope. When rigorous
people with Ph.D.'s after their names do that, what
they see is not some silly, senseless thing. No, their
probe reveals that love rests firmly on the foundations
of evolution, biology and chemistry.
Toufexis’s concept is love, and her focus is the scientific
explanation of love—specifically the evolution, biology, and
chemistry of love. In announcing her focus, she forecasts the order
in which she will present information from the three most relevant
academic disciplines—anthropology (human evolution), biology,
and chemistry. These discipline names become her topics.
8. The Challenge: Draft your working thesis in
ten minutes
As you draft your own tentative thesis statement, take care
to make the language clear. Although you may want to
revise your thesis statement as you draft your essay, trying
to state it now will give your planning and drafting more
focus and direction. Keep in mind that the thesis in an
explanatory essay, such as a concept essay, merely
announces the subject; it never asserts a position that
requires an argument to defend it.
Write one or more sentences, stating your focused
concept, that could serve as a thesis statement Forecast
the topics you will use to explain the concept.
9. NGO Toufexis
Cannibalism can be broken down O.K., let’s cut out all this
into two main categories: nonsense about romantic love.
exocannibalism, the eating of Let’s bring some scientific
outsiders or foreigners, and precision to the party. Let’s put
endocannibalism, the eating of love under a microscope.
members of one’s own social When rigorous people with
group (Shipman 70). Within these Ph.D.'s after their names do
categories are several functional that, what they see is not some
types of cannibalism, three of the silly, senseless thing. No, their
most common being survival probe reveals that love rests
cannibalism, dietary cannibalism, firmly on the foundations of
and religious and ritual evolution, biology and
cannibalism chemistry.
10. Your Thesis is a Map to Your Essay
Once you have your working thesis
written, you can make a tentative outline.
Introduction Category 2
Extended Anecdote Type 1
Thesis Type 2
Category 1 Type 3
Type 1 Repeat if Necessary
Type 2 Conclusion
Type 3
11. Homework
Post #27: Make an outline for your concept
essay.
Include a preliminary idea for what kind of anecdote you
might include in your introduction.
Include your thesis
Name at least two categories
Include at least two or three types you may be able to
discuss under each category
Use the format on slide ten if you need
help
Study: Vocab (1-22)
