1. I will considerer it as a bridge drug, especially for
young people whose might be looking for ways of
entertainments and may consider try something
harder…
I would consider it as a “bridge drug”,
especially for young people who might be
looking for new entertainment options and
may consider trying something harder…
To my mind, the current actions has proven
insufficient and is time of looking farther.
To my mind, the current actions have proven
insufficient and it is high time we thought
outside the box / we looked at it from a
different perspective.
A restriction on the quantity allowed to possess
could also be a rational solution.
A restriction on the quantity allowed to be
possessed could also be a rational solution.
Yet, if consumption is becoming more and more
accepted, why commercialization is banned.
Yet, if consumption is becoming more and
more accepted, why is commercialization still
banned?

2. But let us tackle the theme from a different point of
view: are reasons hidden behind this option?
But let us tackle the issue/topic from a
different point of view: are there (any)
reasons hidden behind this option?
Nowadays, drugs are consumed not only, but very
specially, by people belonging to the First World,
whose basic needs are covered by the State, and
that in many cases live unsubstantial lives
Nowadays, drugs are consumed mainly,
though not only, by people belonging to the
First World, whose basic needs are covered by
the State, and who in many cases live
unsubstantial lives
Moving on, my thoughts about this material are
highly clear
Furthermore, my thoughts about this
subject/topic/issue are crystal clear
On balance, my overall point of view to legalisation
is positive due it has more advantages …
On balance, my overall point of view towards
legalisation is positive due to the fact that it
has more advantages / due to its numerous
advantages…

3. Far from falling into the oblivion, cannabis is again a
controversial issue, focus of the ongoing debates
Far from falling into oblivion, cannabis is a
controversial issue again, the focus of ongoing
debates
Humans are like Eva: the more they cannot touch
the apple, the more they would desire to
Humans are like Eve: the more they are told
not to touch the apple, the more they desire
to.
The social concerns about legalization are deemed
to be ethically polemic.
The social concerns about legalization are
deemed ethically controversial.
In my opinion, it is crucial that lawmakers rely their
opinion on empiric evidence from sociodemographic
researches.
In my opinion, it is crucial that lawmakers
base their opinion on empirical evidence from
sociodemographic research.
In spite of that drug has been present along
mankind.
In spite of the fact that drug has been present
along/throughout the history of mankind.
The 80% of the accidents

4. 80% of the accidents
However it could be necessary an educational
programme destinated to show the effects of
marijuana on the human body.
However, an educational programme devoted
to the effects of marijuana on the human body
could be necessary.
Nowadays, there is a huge debate about legalise
marijuana.
Nowadays, there is a huge debate about
whether or not to legalise marijuana.
Whether to legalize marijuana or not has been a
typical debate’s polemic topic for a long time
Whether to legalize marijuana or not has been
a typical and controversial debate topic for a
long time
Most legalization supporters agree that the main
benefit of their issue’s take on application would be
a significant decreasing on the crime rate connected
to illegal drugs stuff.
Most legalization supporters agree that the
main benefit of its application would be a
significant decrease of the crime rate
connected to illegal drug trafficking.

5. Western Countries are wealthy democracies that
claim for their citizen’s rights to choose.
Western Countries are wealthy democracies
that fight for their citizens’ right to choose.
In my opinion, marijuana should be legalized in
Spain because it could benefits people who need
therapeutic treatments, it’d assure the quality of the
product and it’d produce considerable incomes
coming from taxes.
In my opinion, marijuana should be legalized
in Spain because it could benefit people who
need therapeutic treatments, ensure the
quality of the product and produce
considerable tax revenues.
Governments always have to tackle the question
regarding if people can hurt themselves if they
choose to…
Governments always have to tackle the
question of whether people can hurt
themselves if they choose to…