This document discusses the role of a thesis as an academic avatar that represents the author. It notes that 600 years ago, obtaining a PhD required demonstrating knowledge through oral disputations, but that is changing as theses become written texts. An effective thesis acts as an avatar that must "speak" for the author to examiners, as the author is not present. The document provides advice on writing a strong thesis, including making it clear, precise, concise, well-planned and well-edited. It notes examiners may skim read parts of the thesis, so it is important to engage them throughout. The thesis must demonstrate the author's scholarly capabilities and tell a compelling story to convince examiners they would make an interesting future
2. talk about the medieval origins of
doctoral study
600 years ago
To be a Doctor/PhD, you
need to know everything.
But knowing everything is
easy because ……
Viva-
Voce/Oral
disputation
10. A thesis text is kind of like an
avatar... • It ‘stands in’ for your
scholarly self
• ‘speaks’ your knowledge
and capability as a scholar
(to the reader – and the
examiner) when you
aren’t there.
11. Therefore, to become a
doctor of philosophy…
your scholarly capabilities must
be translated into the medium of
text.
12. Understanding Text
• texts say lots of things but they are really
mute.
You aren’t there; the text avatar is. It has to speak for you.
13. This is why it’s important that the thesis
text is very, very good
14. or as I like to think about it: big, blue, strong and sexy.
15. I wish to be this big, blue, strong and sexy
avatar….
What should I do?
A Clearly Written Thesis
16. What constitutes good writing?
1. Clear : Easy to understand
2. Precise : Says exactly what is
meant
3. Concise : To the point
17. How do we achieve good writing?
• Planning
• Draft writing
• Re-writing
• Proof-reading
• Punctuation
18. The majority of your examination
happens by external peer review.
Examiners are asked to write a report on your
thesis and make recommendations – most of
them are very experience.
Sometimes guidelines are sent to examiners to
help them do this.
... but don't expect the examiner to read, or
follow, these instructions!
19. How do examiners read a thesis?
Many:
Read the abstract or summary
Then read the introduction
Then go straight to the conclusion
Then look at the bibliography...
Then read: either from cover to cover or
skipping around the bits that interest them.
What does this mean for us as writers?
20. Think about this when you are writing - what sort of non
fiction text would you like to read in your spare time?
Where do examiners read your thesis?
Office … after a long busy day
Holiday
In their bed
21. What is a 'good' thesis?
A report of work which others would want to read
Tells a compelling story articulately whilst pre-empting inevitable
critiques
Carries the reader into complex realms; informs and educates
him/her
Be sufficiently speculative or original to suggest you would be an
interesting future colleague
22. What is a 'bad' thesis?
Confused or inadequate theoretical framework
'Merely descriptive’ – a data gathering exercise
Researched the wrong problem
Mixed or confused methodological perspectives
Sloppy presentation
Inconsistency between introduction and conclusion
Lacking confidence in the writing
Presenting work that’s not original
Not being able to explain at the end of a thesis what has actually
been argued in the thesis
23. Your text is your academic 'avatar'
You aren't there to talk to your examiner
Your text has to 'speak' for you
Your text is your academic 'avatar'
You aren't there to talk to your examiner
Your text has to 'speak' for you
24. “The presentation of the thesis falls short….. Substantial
proofreading required”
“The literature review… lack of critical assessment… just a
simple compilation…. Poor argument with many
incomplete sentence”
“The experimental design was not appropriate…. Poorly
explained”
“Many vague statement”
Conclusion
26. Summary
Good writing is appropriate to context
Good writing is easy to understand
Good writing helps examiners
Good writing brings good news
Caveat: It ties with good research design
27. I need more help.
Try these books:
Gruba, P & Evans, D (2001) How to write a better thesis, University of Melbourne Press,
Melbourne
Rugg, G and Petre, M (2004) The Unwritten Rules of PhD Research, Open University
Press, Maidenhead.
Booth, W, Gregory, C and Williams, J (1995) The craft of research, University of Chicago
Press, Chicago
Kamler, B & Thomson, P (2006) Helping Doctoral Students to Write, Routledge, New
York