1. Childhood
Long time he lay upon the sunny hill,
To his father's house below securely bound.
Far off the silent, changing sound was still,
With the black islands lying thick around.
He saw each separate height, each vaguer hue, 5
Where the massed islands rolled in mist away,
And though all ran together in his view
He knew that unseen straits between them lay.
Often he wondered what new shores were there.
In thought he saw the still light on the sand, 10
The shallow water clear in tranquil air,
And walked through it in joy from strand to strand.
Over the sound a ship so slow would pass
That in the black hill's gloom it seemed to lie.
The evening sound was smooth like sunken glass, 15
And time seemed finished ere the ship passed by.
Grey tiny rocks slept round him where he lay,
Moveless as they, more still as evening came,
The grasses threw straight shadows far away,
And from the house his mother called his name. 20
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4. Responding to the poem
Stanza 1
Long time he lay upon the sunny hill,
To his father's house below securely bound.
Far off the silent, changing sound was still,
With the black islands lying thick around.
Important notes:
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5. Imagery
Long time he lay upon the sunny hill,
To his father's house below securely bound.
Far off the silent, changing sound was still,
With the black islands lying thick around.
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6. He saw each separate height, each vaguer hue, 5
Where the massed islands rolled in mist away,
And though all ran together in his view
He knew that unseen straits between them lay.
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7. Often he wondered what new shores were there.
In thought he saw the still light on the sand, 10
The shallow water clear in tranquil air,
And walked through it in joy from strand to strand.
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8. Over the sound a ship so slow would pass
That in the black hill's gloom it seemed to lie.
The evening sound was smooth like sunken glass, 15
And time seemed finished ere the ship passed by.
Setting
'Sound' a body of water (more on this later)
'evening' day ending?
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10. Grey tiny rocks slept round him where he lay,
Moveless as they, more still as evening came,
The grasses threw straight shadows far away,
And from his house his mother called his name. 20
Setting:
'grey tiny rocks slept round him', 'grasses threw straight shadows',
the landscape appears to provide further protectionthere is an atmosphere of
peace
personification: sleeping rocks
Mood:
Serenethe threatening ship has passed by
Evidence: 'rocks slept', 'moveless'
Mentioning the child's father (line 2) and mother (line 20) gives the sense that
they 'enclose' the whole poem (frame), which is concerned with the child,
embracing him, giving a sense of unity in the family, echoed by the unity and
harmony of the landscape.
In the final line of the poem, the repetition of 'his' in 'his house, his mother... his name'
stresses that he really belongs to this place, with these people. Calling his name
emphasises this.
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15. Literary form
influence of ballad form:
word order: 'long time he lay', 'rolled in mist away'
(inversion, as you spotted earlier)
lexical choice (fancy way of saying word choice):
'ere', 'strand'
language in Orkney is at times archaic, retaining words and forms
from the 17th century.
gives sense of ancestry, generations stretching back from this
small boy, increases sense of belonging
Simple form fits the theme of uncomplicated, secure
childhood, and bare landscape
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