2. 1-2
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Begin to develop effectiveBegin to develop effective
messages.messages.
Think creatively.Think creatively.
3. 1-3
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Will I really have to write?Will I really have to write?
Don’t I know enough aboutDon’t I know enough about
communication?communication?
What do I need to know about myWhat do I need to know about my
audience(s)?audience(s)?
4. 1-4
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
Business Communication,Business Communication,
Management, and SuccessManagement, and Success
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Now that I have my analysis, whatNow that I have my analysis, what
do I do with it?do I do with it?
What if my audiences have differentWhat if my audiences have different
needs?needs?
How do I reach my audience(s)?How do I reach my audience(s)?
5. 1-5
Workplace CommunicationWorkplace Communication
ChallengesChallenges
Workplace CommunicationWorkplace Communication
ChallengesChallenges
♦ 40 million people in the U.S. alone have
limited literacy skills, including some
college graduates.
♦ States spend more than $220 million
annually on remedial writing programs for
employees.
♦ Corporations may spend $3.1 billion
annually to fix problems from writing
deficiencies.
♦ The cost is $22.13 per page for a typical
letter.
6. 1-6
Workplace CommunicationWorkplace Communication
ChallengesChallenges continuedcontinued
Workplace CommunicationWorkplace Communication
ChallengesChallenges continuedcontinued
♦Globalization is helping increase
employee recruitment from beyond
the local labor pool.
♦Millions of Americans are becoming
eligible to retire. Some of the
millions to replace them have very
different workplace expectations.
7. 1-7
Verbal and NonverbalVerbal and Nonverbal
CommunicationCommunication
Verbal and NonverbalVerbal and Nonverbal
CommunicationCommunication
♦Verbal Communication
Face-to-Face/Phone Conversations/Meetings
E-mail/Voice-Mail Messages
Letters, Memos, and Reports
♦Nonverbal Communication
Pictures/Company Logos
Gestures/Body Language
Who Sits Where/How Long a Visitor is Kept
Waiting
8. 1-8
Myths About Workplace WritingMyths About Workplace WritingMyths About Workplace WritingMyths About Workplace Writing
♦Secretaries will do all my writing.Secretaries will do all my writing.
♦I’ll use form letters or templatesI’ll use form letters or templates
when I need to write.when I need to write.
♦I’m being hired as an accountant,I’m being hired as an accountant,
not a writer.not a writer.
♦I’ll just pick up the phone.I’ll just pick up the phone.
9. 1-9
Business and School WritingBusiness and School WritingBusiness and School WritingBusiness and School Writing
Differ based onDiffer based on
Purpose.Purpose.
Audience.Audience.
Information.Information.
Organization.Organization.
Style.Style.
Document design.Document design.
Visuals.Visuals.
10. 1-10
Internal and External AudiencesInternal and External AudiencesInternal and External AudiencesInternal and External Audiences
♦InternalInternal
SubordinatesSubordinates
SupervisorsSupervisors
PeersPeers
♦ExternalExternal
Customers/StockholdersCustomers/Stockholders
Unions/Government AgenciesUnions/Government Agencies
Press/General PublicPress/General Public
11. 1-11
Basic PurposesBasic PurposesBasic PurposesBasic Purposes
♦Workplace writing can have oneWorkplace writing can have one
or more of these basic purposes:or more of these basic purposes:
To inform.To inform.
To request or to persuade.To request or to persuade.
To build goodwill.To build goodwill.
12. 1-12
Good Business WritingGood Business WritingGood Business WritingGood Business Writing
♦Is clear.Is clear.
♦Is complete.Is complete.
♦Is correct.Is correct.
♦Builds goodwill.Builds goodwill.
♦Saves the reader’s time.Saves the reader’s time.
13. 1-13
PAIBOCPAIBOCPAIBOCPAIBOC
PP What are yourWhat are your purposespurposes inin
writing?writing?
AA Who is (are) yourWho is (are) your audiencesaudiences??
II WhatWhat informationinformation must yourmust your
message include?message include?
14. 1-14
PAIBOCPAIBOC continuedcontinuedPAIBOCPAIBOC continuedcontinued
BB What reasons or readerWhat reasons or reader
benefitsbenefits can you use to supportcan you use to support
your position?your position?
OO WhatWhat objectionsobjections can youcan you
expect your reader(s) to have?expect your reader(s) to have?
CC How will theHow will the contextcontext affectaffect
reader response?reader response?
16. 1-16
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Continue to analyze your audiences.Continue to analyze your audiences.
Begin to adapt your message toBegin to adapt your message to
your audiences.your audiences.
Begin to understand what yourBegin to understand what your
organization wants.organization wants.
17. 1-17
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Who is my audience?Who is my audience?
Why is audience so important?Why is audience so important?
What do I need to know about myWhat do I need to know about my
audience(s)?audience(s)?
18. 1-18
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
Adapting Your Message to YourAdapting Your Message to Your
AudienceAudience
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Now that I have my analysis, whatNow that I have my analysis, what
do I do with it?do I do with it?
What if my audiences have differentWhat if my audiences have different
needs?needs?
How do I reach my audience(s)?How do I reach my audience(s)?
19. 1-19
Kinds of AudiencesKinds of AudiencesKinds of AudiencesKinds of Audiences
♦Initial AudienceInitial Audience
♦GatekeeperGatekeeper
♦Primary AudiencePrimary Audience
♦Secondary AudienceSecondary Audience
♦Watchdog AudienceWatchdog Audience
20. 1-20
PAIBOCPAIBOCPAIBOCPAIBOC
PP What are yourWhat are your purposespurposes inin
writing?writing?
AA Who is (are) yourWho is (are) your audiencesaudiences??
II WhatWhat informationinformation must yourmust your
message include?message include?
21. 1-21
PAIBOCPAIBOC continuedcontinuedPAIBOCPAIBOC continuedcontinued
BB What reasons or readerWhat reasons or reader
benefitsbenefits can you use to supportcan you use to support
your position?your position?
OO WhatWhat objectionsobjections can youcan you
expect your reader(s) to have?expect your reader(s) to have?
CC How will theHow will the contextcontext affectaffect
reader response?reader response?
22. 1-22
The Communication ProcessThe Communication ProcessThe Communication ProcessThe Communication Process
The Communication ModelThe Communication Model
♦PerceptionPerception
♦InterpretationInterpretation
♦Choice/Choice/
SelectionSelection
♦Encoding/Encoding/
DecodingDecoding
♦ChannelChannel
♦NoiseNoise
24. 1-24
Discourse CommunityDiscourse CommunityDiscourse CommunityDiscourse Community
♦A group of people who shareA group of people who share
assumptions aboutassumptions about
What channels, formats, and stylesWhat channels, formats, and styles
to use.to use.
What topics to discuss.What topics to discuss.
How to discuss topics.How to discuss topics.
What constitutes evidence.What constitutes evidence.
25. 1-25
Organizational (Corporate)Organizational (Corporate)
CultureCulture
Organizational (Corporate)Organizational (Corporate)
CultureCulture
♦Norms of behavior inNorms of behavior in
an organization arean organization are
revealedrevealed
Verbally through theVerbally through the
organization’s myths,organization’s myths,
stories, and heroes.stories, and heroes.
Nonverbally through theNonverbally through the
allocation of space,allocation of space,
money, and power.money, and power.
26. 1-26
Adapting Messages to anAdapting Messages to an
AudienceAudience
Adapting Messages to anAdapting Messages to an
AudienceAudience
♦StrategyStrategy
♦OrganizationOrganization
♦Word ChoiceWord Choice
♦Document DesignDocument Design
♦Photographs and VisualsPhotographs and Visuals
27. 1-27
Gatekeepers and PrimaryGatekeepers and Primary
AudienceAudience
Gatekeepers and PrimaryGatekeepers and Primary
AudienceAudience
♦To reach, focus onTo reach, focus on
Content and choice ofContent and choice of
details.details.
Organization.Organization.
Level of formality.Level of formality.
Use of technical termsUse of technical terms
and theory.and theory.
28. 1-28
Written MessagesWritten MessagesWritten MessagesWritten Messages
♦Make it easier toMake it easier to
Present many specificPresent many specific
details.details.
Present extensive orPresent extensive or
complex financial data.complex financial data.
Minimize undesirableMinimize undesirable
emotions.emotions.
29. 1-29
Oral MessagesOral MessagesOral MessagesOral Messages
♦Make it easier toMake it easier to
Answer questions, resolveAnswer questions, resolve
conflicts, and buildconflicts, and build
consensus.consensus.
Use emotion to persuade.Use emotion to persuade.
Get immediate action orGet immediate action or
response.response.
Focus the reader’sFocus the reader’s
attention.attention.
Modify a proposalModify a proposal
unacceptable in its originalunacceptable in its original
form.form.
30. 1-30
Communication ChannelsCommunication ChannelsCommunication ChannelsCommunication Channels
♦Channels vary according
to
Speed.
Accuracy of transmission.
Cost.
Number of messages
carried.
Number of people reached.
Efficiency.
Ability to promote goodwill.
31. 1-31
For WrittenFor Written andand Oral MessagesOral MessagesFor WrittenFor Written andand Oral MessagesOral Messages
♦Adapt the message to theAdapt the message to the
audience.audience.
♦Show the audience how it willShow the audience how it will
benefit from the idea, policy,benefit from the idea, policy,
service, or product.service, or product.
♦Overcome any objections theOvercome any objections the
audience may have.audience may have.
32. 1-32
For WrittenFor Written andand Oral MessagesOral Messages
continuedcontinued
For WrittenFor Written andand Oral MessagesOral Messages
continuedcontinued
♦Use you-attitude and positiveUse you-attitude and positive
emphasis.emphasis.
♦Use visuals to clarify orUse visuals to clarify or
emphasize material.emphasize material.
♦Specify what the audience shouldSpecify what the audience should
do.do.
34. 1-34
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Consider diversity as part ofConsider diversity as part of
audience analysis.audience analysis.
Begin to be aware of the values,Begin to be aware of the values,
beliefs, and practices in otherbeliefs, and practices in other
cultures.cultures.
Become even more sensitive toBecome even more sensitive to
verbal and nonverbal behavior.verbal and nonverbal behavior.
35. 1-35
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Deal with discrimination.Deal with discrimination.
Adapt to different expectations in theAdapt to different expectations in the
workplace.workplace.
Use bias-free language and photos.Use bias-free language and photos.
36. 1-36
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
What is “culture”?What is “culture”?
How does culture affect businessHow does culture affect business
communication?communication?
There are so many differentThere are so many different
cultures! How can I know enough tocultures! How can I know enough to
communicate?communicate?
37. 1-37
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Communicating AcrossCommunicating Across
CulturesCultures
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Are differences among generationsAre differences among generations
changing the workplace and how wechanging the workplace and how we
communicate?communicate?
How can I make my documentsHow can I make my documents
bias-free?bias-free?
38. 1-38
Diversity and Culture BasicsDiversity and Culture BasicsDiversity and Culture BasicsDiversity and Culture Basics
♦Diversity has always been with us—Diversity has always been with us—
even if people didn’t recognize it or itseven if people didn’t recognize it or its
value.value.
♦No “one-size-fits-all” approach toNo “one-size-fits-all” approach to
working with cultural differencesworking with cultural differences
exists.exists.
Use information here as guidelines.Use information here as guidelines.
Remember that people are individualsRemember that people are individuals
as well as group members.as well as group members.
39. 1-39
Diversity and Culture BasicsDiversity and Culture Basics
continued
Diversity and Culture BasicsDiversity and Culture Basics
continued
♦Be open to change and difference.Be open to change and difference.
♦Globalization is changing how we doGlobalization is changing how we do
business.business.
Services performed by non-U.S.Services performed by non-U.S.
workers are increasingly common.workers are increasingly common.
♦Offshoring of jobs will continue.Offshoring of jobs will continue.
Forrester Research predicts 3.3 millionForrester Research predicts 3.3 million
white-collar jobs to leave in the next 15white-collar jobs to leave in the next 15
years.years.
40. 1-40
Diversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace
♦GenderGender
♦Race and ethnicityRace and ethnicity
♦Regional and national originRegional and national origin
♦Social classSocial class
♦ReligionReligion
♦AgeAge
♦Sexual orientationSexual orientation
♦Physical abilityPhysical ability
41. 1-41
Diversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace
continuedcontinued
Diversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace
continuedcontinued
♦High-Context CulturesHigh-Context Cultures
Most information isMost information is
inferred from theinferred from the
context of a message.context of a message.
Little is “spelled out.”Little is “spelled out.”
Examples: Japanese,Examples: Japanese,
Arabic, and LatinArabic, and Latin
American cultures.American cultures.
42. 1-42
Diversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace continuedcontinuedDiversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace continuedcontinued
♦Low-Context CulturesLow-Context Cultures
Context is lessContext is less
important than words.important than words.
Most information isMost information is
spelled out; words arespelled out; words are
privileged.privileged.
Examples: German,Examples: German,
Scandinavian, andScandinavian, and
dominant U.S. cultures.dominant U.S. cultures.
43. 1-43
Diversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace continuedcontinuedDiversity in the WorkplaceDiversity in the Workplace continuedcontinued
♦RememberRemember
In nations like the U.S., Canada,In nations like the U.S., Canada,
and Brazil, multiple cultures exist.and Brazil, multiple cultures exist.
While the dominant culture may beWhile the dominant culture may be
privileged, recognize that minorityprivileged, recognize that minority
cultures may have different normscultures may have different norms
with regard to behavior.with regard to behavior.
44. 1-44
Dimensions of CultureDimensions of CultureDimensions of CultureDimensions of Culture
♦ Values, Beliefs, andValues, Beliefs, and
PracticesPractices
♦ NonverbalNonverbal
CommunicationCommunication
♦ Body LanguageBody Language
♦ Eye ContactEye Contact
♦ GesturesGestures
♦ SpaceSpace
♦ SpatialSpatial
ArrangementsArrangements
♦ TimeTime
♦ DressDress
♦ ColorsColors
♦ HeightHeight
♦ OralOral
CommunicationCommunication
♦ Understatement,Understatement,
Exaggeration, andExaggeration, and
SilenceSilence
45. 1-45
Conversational StyleConversational StyleConversational StyleConversational Style
♦How long a pause tellsHow long a pause tells
you that it’s your turn toyou that it’s your turn to
speak?speak?
♦Do you see interruptionDo you see interruption
as rude?as rude?
♦Do you show interest byDo you show interest by
asking lots ofasking lots of
questions?questions?
46. 1-46
Communicating with DifferentCommunicating with Different
CulturesCultures
Communicating with DifferentCommunicating with Different
CulturesCultures
♦Brenda Arbalaez suggests beingBrenda Arbalaez suggests being
Aware that values and behaviorsAware that values and behaviors
are influenced by culture.are influenced by culture.
Flexible.Flexible.
Sensitive.Sensitive.
Aware of the others’ values, beliefs,Aware of the others’ values, beliefs,
and practices.and practices.
Sensitive to differences amongSensitive to differences among
individuals.individuals.
47. 1-47
Generational DifferencesGenerational DifferencesGenerational DifferencesGenerational Differences
♦Different opinions on birth years, butDifferent opinions on birth years, but
in general:in general:
Baby Boomers (post-WWII to middleBaby Boomers (post-WWII to middle
1960s).1960s).
Generation X (middle 1960s to earlyGeneration X (middle 1960s to early
1980s).1980s).
Millennials (Early 1980s to middleMillennials (Early 1980s to middle
1990s).1990s).
♦Some observers see challenges.Some observers see challenges.
48. 1-48
Generational DifferencesGenerational Differences
continuedcontinued
Generational DifferencesGenerational Differences
continuedcontinued
♦ Baby Boomers and MillennialsBaby Boomers and Millennials
Two largest U.S. generations.Two largest U.S. generations.
MayMay differ in opinion on appropriate workplacediffer in opinion on appropriate workplace
• Dress.Dress.
• Ethics.Ethics.
• Hierarchies.Hierarchies.
• Expectations.Expectations.
• Responsiveness.Responsiveness.
• Autonomy.Autonomy.
• Goals.Goals.
• Technology.Technology.
• Communication.Communication.
50. 1-50
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist
♦UseUse
Words that treat bothWords that treat both
sexes respectfully.sexes respectfully.
Titles that do not implyTitles that do not imply
one sex “ought” to do aone sex “ought” to do a
certain job.certain job.
The appropriate genderThe appropriate gender
pronoun when referringpronoun when referring
to a specific person.to a specific person.
51. 1-51
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist continuedcontinued
♦UseUse
““Ms.” As theMs.” As the
courtesy title forcourtesy title for
a woman unlessa woman unless
• The woman has aThe woman has a
professional title.professional title.
• You know that aYou know that a
woman prefers towoman prefers to
be addressed by abe addressed by a
traditional title.traditional title.
52. 1-52
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonsexistNonsexist continuedcontinued
♦When you write about anyone whoWhen you write about anyone who
may be in a job or position, makemay be in a job or position, make
pronouns nonsexist.pronouns nonsexist.
Use plurals.Use plurals.
UseUse youyou..
Revise the sentence to omit theRevise the sentence to omit the
pronounpronoun
Use pronoun pairs.Use pronoun pairs.
53. 1-53
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist
♦Eliminate adjectives that reinforceEliminate adjectives that reinforce
negative stereotypes.negative stereotypes.
Biased:Biased: The motivated black studentsThe motivated black students
were assigned to internship positionswere assigned to internship positions
throughout the company.throughout the company.
Bias-free:Bias-free: The students were assigned toThe students were assigned to
internship positions throughout theinternship positions throughout the
company.company.
54. 1-54
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
♦Identify race or ethnic origin only ifIdentify race or ethnic origin only if
it’s relevant.it’s relevant.
Biased:Biased: Paloma Esteban, a Latino, hasPaloma Esteban, a Latino, has
been appointed Vice-President ofbeen appointed Vice-President of
Finance.Finance.
Bias-free:Bias-free: Mike Waters, a Sioux,Mike Waters, a Sioux,
translated the governor’s speech into thetranslated the governor’s speech into the
Lakota language.Lakota language.
55. 1-55
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
♦Eliminate words and phrases withEliminate words and phrases with
negative connotations.negative connotations.
Biased:Biased: Many of our managers who comeMany of our managers who come
from culturally deprived backgrounds nowfrom culturally deprived backgrounds now
function as role models for young peoplefunction as role models for young people
through our mentoring program.through our mentoring program.
56. 1-56
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonracistNonracist continuedcontinued
Bias-free:Bias-free: Many of our managers whoseMany of our managers whose
family heritage is African, Asian, Spanish,family heritage is African, Asian, Spanish,
or Appalachian now function as roleor Appalachian now function as role
models for young people through ourmodels for young people through our
mentoring program.mentoring program.
57. 1-57
Talking about People withTalking about People with
Diseases or DisabilitiesDiseases or Disabilities
Talking about People withTalking about People with
Diseases or DisabilitiesDiseases or Disabilities
♦Use “people first” language andUse “people first” language and
avoid using adjectives as nouns.avoid using adjectives as nouns.
Biased:
• the alcoholic
• the drug addict
• the handicapped
Bias-free:
• the woman who is an alcoholic
• the man who abuses drugs
• people with disabilities
58. 1-58
Talking about People withTalking about People with
Diseases or DisabilitiesDiseases or Disabilities continuedcontinued
Talking about People withTalking about People with
Diseases or DisabilitiesDiseases or Disabilities continuedcontinued
♦Emphasize people’s abilities, notEmphasize people’s abilities, not
their limits or disabilities.their limits or disabilities.
Biased:Biased: Jenny Ling has done anJenny Ling has done an
outstanding job as ouroutstanding job as our
spokesperson, even though she hasspokesperson, even though she has
diabetes.diabetes.
Bias-free:Bias-free: Jenny Ling has done anJenny Ling has done an
outstanding job as our spokespersonoutstanding job as our spokesperson
for the past seven years.for the past seven years.
59. 1-59
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist
♦Refer to age only if it’s trulyRefer to age only if it’s truly
relevant.relevant.
Biased:Biased: Tomoko Watanabe, 67, isTomoko Watanabe, 67, is
president of Competitive Datapresident of Competitive Data
Management.Management.
Bias-free:Bias-free: Tomoko Watanabe isTomoko Watanabe is
president of Competitive Datapresident of Competitive Data
Management.Management.
60. 1-60
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist continuedcontinued
♦Avoid stereotypes.Avoid stereotypes.
Biased:Biased: With her grandmotherlyWith her grandmotherly
ways, good old Mary Grace makesways, good old Mary Grace makes
everyone in Unit 2 feel special.everyone in Unit 2 feel special.
Bias-free:Bias-free: For the past 35 years,For the past 35 years,
Mary Grace has been helping toMary Grace has been helping to
create team spirit in Unit 2.create team spirit in Unit 2.
61. 1-61
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist continuedcontinued
Ways to Make LanguageWays to Make Language
NonagistNonagist continuedcontinued
♦Avoid negative labels for children,Avoid negative labels for children,
such assuch as “children from broken“children from broken
homes.”homes.”
♦Remember families can be single-Remember families can be single-
parent and diverse.parent and diverse.
♦Use nonsexist descriptions andUse nonsexist descriptions and
images of children.images of children.
62. 1-62
Bias Free Photos andBias Free Photos and
IllustrationsIllustrations
Bias Free Photos andBias Free Photos and
IllustrationsIllustrations
♦Check visuals for
bias.
Are the people diverse?
Are power relationships
balanced?
Can you create your
own visuals rather than
rely on biased clip art?
64. 1-64
Planning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and Revising
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Increase the number of expertIncrease the number of expert
processes you use.processes you use.
Use your time effectively.Use your time effectively.
Revise after feedback.Revise after feedback.
65. 1-65
Planning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and Revising
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
Does it matter what process I use?Does it matter what process I use?
I don’t have much time. How should II don’t have much time. How should I
use it?use it?
What planning should I do before IWhat planning should I do before I
begin writing or speaking?begin writing or speaking?
What is revision? How do I do it?What is revision? How do I do it?
66. 1-66
Planning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and RevisingPlanning, Writing, and Revising
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
What is revision? How do I do it?What is revision? How do I do it?
Can a grammar checker do editingCan a grammar checker do editing
for me?for me?
I spell check. Do I still need toI spell check. Do I still need to
proofread?proofread?
How can I overcome writer’s block?How can I overcome writer’s block?
Can I use form letters?Can I use form letters?
How can I get better feedback?How can I get better feedback?
67. 1-67
Expert WritersExpert WritersExpert WritersExpert Writers
♦Realize that the first draft can beRealize that the first draft can be
revised.revised.
♦Write regularly.Write regularly.
♦Break big jobs into smallerBreak big jobs into smaller
chunks.chunks.
♦Have clear goals for purpose andHave clear goals for purpose and
audience.audience.
68. 1-68
Expert WritersExpert Writers continuedcontinuedExpert WritersExpert Writers continuedcontinued
♦Have several different strategiesHave several different strategies
to choose from.to choose from.
♦Use rules flexibly.Use rules flexibly.
♦Edit after the draft is complete.Edit after the draft is complete.
69. 1-69
A Formula for Using TimeA Formula for Using TimeA Formula for Using TimeA Formula for Using Time
A Model for WritingA Model for Writing ♦ ONE THIRDONE THIRD
analyzing,analyzing,
gathering, andgathering, and
organizing.organizing.
♦ ONE THIRDONE THIRD
drafting/writing.drafting/writing.
♦ ONE THIRDONE THIRD
evaluating, revising,evaluating, revising,
editing, andediting, and
proofreading.proofreading.
Revising Writing Analyzing
70. 1-70
Activities of WritingActivities of WritingActivities of WritingActivities of Writing
♦PlanningPlanning
♦GatheringGathering
♦WritingWriting
♦EvaluatingEvaluating
♦Getting FeedbackGetting Feedback
♦RevisingRevising
♦EditingEditing
♦ProofreadingProofreading
73. 1-73
Overcoming Writer’s BlockOvercoming Writer’s BlockOvercoming Writer’s BlockOvercoming Writer’s Block
♦Participate actively in theParticipate actively in the
organization and the community.organization and the community.
♦Practice writing regularly and inPractice writing regularly and in
moderation.moderation.
♦Learn as many strategies as youLearn as many strategies as you
can.can.
♦Talk positively to yourself.Talk positively to yourself.
♦Talk about writing to other people.Talk about writing to other people.
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Overcoming ProcrastinationOvercoming ProcrastinationOvercoming ProcrastinationOvercoming Procrastination
♦Set a regular time to write.
♦Develop a ritual for writing.
♦Try freewriting.
♦Write down the thoughts and fears
you have as you write.
♦Identify the problem that keeps you
from writing.
♦Set modest goals and reward yourself
for reaching them.
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Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
♦To learn how toTo learn how to
Develop visual literacy.Develop visual literacy.
Apply design principles to paperApply design principles to paper
pages, presentation slides, and Webpages, presentation slides, and Web
pages.pages.
Use computers to create headings,Use computers to create headings,
lists, and other features to makelists, and other features to make
documents easy to read.documents easy to read.
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Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
How should I design paper pages?How should I design paper pages?
How should I design presentationHow should I design presentation
slides?slides?
How should I design Web pages?How should I design Web pages?
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Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
Designing Documents, Slides,
and Screens
Start by answering these questions:Start by answering these questions:
How do I know whether my designHow do I know whether my design
works?works?
When should I think about design?When should I think about design?
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Good Document DesignGood Document DesignGood Document DesignGood Document Design
♦Saves time and money.Saves time and money.
♦Reduces legal problems.Reduces legal problems.
♦Builds goodwill.Builds goodwill.
♦Looks inviting, friendly, andLooks inviting, friendly, and
easy-to-read.easy-to-read.
♦Enhances your credibility.Enhances your credibility.
♦Builds an image of you asBuilds an image of you as
professional andprofessional and
competent.competent.
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To Design Paper PagesTo Design Paper PagesTo Design Paper PagesTo Design Paper Pages
♦Use white space for separationUse white space for separation
and emphasis.and emphasis.
♦Use headings to group points.Use headings to group points.
♦Limit the use of capital letters.Limit the use of capital letters.
♦Use no more than two typefaces.Use no more than two typefaces.
♦Use justification appropriate to theUse justification appropriate to the
audience.audience.
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To Create Effective White SpaceTo Create Effective White SpaceTo Create Effective White SpaceTo Create Effective White Space
♦To create effective white
space, use
Headings.
A mix of paragraph lengths.
Lists by using
• Tabs or indents to align things
vertically.
• Numbered lists when the number
or sequence of items is exact.
• Bullets when the number and
sequence don’t matter.
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Choice of MarginsChoice of MarginsChoice of MarginsChoice of Margins
♦Use justified margins when you
Can use proportional typefaces.
Want a more formal look.
Want to use as few pages as possible.
Write to skilled readers.
♦Use ragged margins when you
Do not have proportional typefaces.
Want a less formal look.
Want to revise one page without reprinting all.
Use very short line lengths.
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To Design Presentation SlidesTo Design Presentation SlidesTo Design Presentation SlidesTo Design Presentation Slides
♦ Use a big font.Use a big font.
♦ Use bullet-point phrases.Use bullet-point phrases.
♦ Use clear, concise languageUse clear, concise language
and appropriate clip art.and appropriate clip art.
♦ Make only three to five pointsMake only three to five points
per slide.per slide.
♦ Choose a consistentChoose a consistent
template, customizing slidestemplate, customizing slides
where necessary.where necessary.
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To Design Web PagesTo Design Web PagesTo Design Web PagesTo Design Web Pages
♦Provide an introductory statementProvide an introductory statement
on the first screen.on the first screen.
♦Offer an overview of the content ofOffer an overview of the content of
your page.your page.
♦Put interesting and usefulPut interesting and useful
information up front.information up front.
♦Minimize large graphics andMinimize large graphics and
animation.animation.
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To Design Web PagesTo Design Web Pages continuedcontinuedTo Design Web PagesTo Design Web Pages continuedcontinued
♦Include an “off” button for animationInclude an “off” button for animation
and music on introduction pages.and music on introduction pages.
♦Provide visual variety.Provide visual variety.
♦Unify multiple pages.Unify multiple pages.
♦On each page, provide a link to theOn each page, provide a link to the
home page.home page.
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To Incorporate Good DesignTo Incorporate Good DesignTo Incorporate Good DesignTo Incorporate Good Design
♦Follow These GuidelinesFollow These Guidelines
As you plan, think about yourAs you plan, think about your
audience.audience.
As you write, incorporate listsAs you write, incorporate lists
and headings.and headings.
Get feedback from people whoGet feedback from people who
will be using your document.will be using your document.
As you revise, check your draftAs you revise, check your draft
against the guidelines in thisagainst the guidelines in this
module.module.
Editor's Notes
Work requires communication. People communicate to plan products and services; hire, train, and motivate workers; coordinate manufacturing and delivery; persuade customers to buy; and bill them for sale. These are just some of the ways communication helps the modern work world. In every organization, communication is the way people get their points across, get work done, and get recognized for their contributions.
The workplace requires writing. However, 40 million people in the U.S. alone have limited literacy skills, including some college graduates. States and corporations spend millions to dollars to train employees or to fix problems due to poor writing, and the cost is $22.13 per page for a typical one-page letter.
Globalization is creating greater competition for jobs, with more companies turning to labor pools overseas and elsewhere to find workers. At the same time, millions of Baby Boomers are becoming eligible to retire. Millennial, or Generation Y, employees now entering the workplace may have very different expectations about dress, behavior, hierarchies, technology, and other issues than their predecessors.
Verbal communication uses words, and includes face-to-face and phone conversations, e-mail messages, and letters, memos, and reports. Nonverbal communication includes gestures, body language, where someone sits, and company logos.
Employees today should expect to write, edit, and send their own messages. Form letters can work, provided they are well written, but rarely can form letters meet all needs. Regardless of their field, employees can expect to write on the job, and even though much business is done on the phone, writing is still a common means of communication.
While all good writing shares basic principles, business writing is often different than other school writing. For instance, business writing prefers shorter sentences and paragraphs, a more conversational tone, and more dynamic document designs than a typical college essay. While essays may be written primarily for instructors, business writing often has multiple audiences.
Communication—oral, nonverbal, and written—goes to both internal and external audiences. Analyze each carefully when composing your message.
Consider the purpose of your message—to inform, to request or persuade, or to build goodwill. Many messages have more than one purpose.
Make sure the meaning of your message is clear, all of the information needed to understand or act on the message is included, and that the information is accurate. The message should build goodwill and be organized so the reader can act on the information as quickly as possible.
Use PAIBOC when writing and revising your messages. Carefully analyze each of the PAIBOC components: Purpose, Audience, Information, Benefits, Objections, and Context.
The initial audience first sees your message and routes it to others. A gatekeeper is someone who can stop your message from getting to the primary audience and may be the initial audience. Secondary audiences may be asked to comment on your message or implement its ideas once they are approved. Watchdog audiences have no power to stop a message or act directly on it but have political, social, or economic power.
Your purposes come from you and your organization. Your audience determines how you achieve those purposes, but not what the purposes are.
To communicate, a person must first perceive a stimulus and then interpret what has been perceived. The person then chooses the information he or she wishes to send and puts it into a form for the audience. That action is called encoding. The message is transmitted through a channel, such as a memo, a phone call, or an e-mail message. The audience receives the message and decodes, or makes sense, of it. At any stage of the process, noise may interfere with communication. Noise can be physical, such as illegible handwriting, or psychological, such as the audience disliking the speaker.
There is no “one size fits all” approach to analyzing audiences, but key factors are important. Empathy is the ability to put yourself in someone else’s shoes and to feel with that person. Even people in your own organization won’t share all of your knowledge, so anticipate what audiences will need to know. Demographic factors include such measurable features as age, race, income, and educational level. Values and beliefs, or psychographics, include habits, hobbies, and lifestyles. The Myers-Briggs Type Indicator is one of several popular assessments to gauge personality. Studying how audiences have behaved in the past may suggest how they will react in the future.
Your reader’s reaction is affected by his or her personal preferences as well as by the discourse communities to which he or she belongs. Each person is a member of several discourse communities, which may or may not overlap.
Two companies in the same field may have completely different organizational cultures, and organizations may even have subcultures. Observe your own organizational culture to understand how to analyze others. Look for how people behave and dress, what the organization values, and why some people are considered heroes.
Adapt your message carefully to the needs of your audience. For instance, a good strategy is to make action on the message as easy as possible and to protect the reader’s ego. Messages should be organized to help the reader understand the message immediately. Choose words your audience will know, and avoid words that sound negative, defensive, or arrogant. Good design in business writing uses lists, headings, and a mix of paragraph lengths to create white space. Photographs and visuals, if any, should be bias free and more than simply decorative.
When you write to multiple audiences, use the primary audience and the gatekeeper to determine the level of detail, organization, level of formality, and use of technical terms and theory.
Paper messages are more formal than e-mail messages, and many spoken messages are followed up with written ones.
Oral messages are common in business, but scheduled meetings and oral presentations are more formal than chats in the hall or a phone call.
Paper messages are more formal than e-mail messages, and many spoken messages are followed up with written ones.
Even when everyone in the organization has access to the same channels, different discourse communities may prefer different ones. Choose the written or oral channel that best serves your audience.
Diversity in the workplace comes from many sources. In the U.S., for instance, a third of Americans are Native Americans or of African, Latino, or Asian descent. Familiarize yourself with all of the dimensions of diversity in the workplace and use sensitivity and respect when working with people with backgrounds different than your own. Rather than expect easy answers, use research and experience to guide you.
Globalization is changing the way we do things – fast! While the U.S. has always been a diverse country, Americans now face even more dimensions of diversity than ever before. Be open to change and difference. Also, expect to see who does work and from where to continue to change throughout this century.
Familiarize yourself with the many dimensions of diversity in the workplace, which can include but are not limited to gender, race, ethnicity, regional and national origin, social class, religion, age, sexual orientation, and physical ability..
Compared to low-context cultures, high-context cultures often prefer politeness and indirectness in messages.
Context is less important in low-context cultures, which prefer direct approaches and privilege the written word.
Many countries are multicultural. Even if a single culture is dominant, subcultures may prefer different forms of communication. Analyze your audience carefully to understand cultural norms.
Culture influences every single aspect of business communication, including how to show politeness and respect, how much information to give, and how to motivate people. Understanding culture is a complex process with many variables.
Deborah Tannen coined the term “conversational style” to denote our conversational pattens and the meaning we give to them. Different conversational styles are no better or worse than each other, but people with different conversational styles may feel uncomfortable without knowing why. Analyze your own conversational style to begin to understand the style of others.
If you plan to travel to a specific country, or if you work with people from other cultures, read about that country or culture to learn more about the language. Also, talk to people from that country or culture. By being open-minded, you may find these experiences best prepare you to communicate with different cultures. Brenda Arbalaez also suggests these principles.
Generational differences – and the potential conflicts because of them – have made headlines lately. The three generations involved are Baby Boomers, Generation X, and Millennials (sometimes called Generation Y).
Conflicts among Baby Boomers and Millennials have made headlines lately. Members of these generations may differ on a variety of workplace issues including dress, ethics, responsiveness, technology, and communication.
Millennials’ strengths include multitasking, optimism, confidence, ethnusiasm, goal orientation, and technology use.
Nonsexist language treats both sexes neutrally. Check to be sure that your writing is free from sexism in four areas: words and phrases, job titles, pronouns, and courtesy titles.
Language is nonracist when it treats all races fairly, avoiding negative stereotypes. Many groups have their own preferred terms when being referenced. In situations that call for mentioning race, use the preferred term.
One is six people in the U.S. has a disability, and the number of people with disabilities is expected to rise as the population ages. When writing or speaking about someone with a disability or disease, put the emphasis on the person unless the situation calls for discussing the disability or disease.
In most situations, a person’s age, race, disability, or disease is irrelevant. If you must discuss any of these qualities, avoid negative stereotypes, and use a respectful term. For instance, while senior citizens and golden agers may be acceptable to some audiences, more generally accepted terms are older people and mature customers.
Visuals may reflect bias, especially clip art. Be sure to review the content of visuals carefully—are the visuals accurate for your message and for your organization? Will they offend people?
Study expert writers to better understand how to approach the writing process. No single writing process works for all writers all of the time, but expert writers seem to use these processes.
Breaking tasks into thirds is a good way to organize your time when composing a message. Save at least two-thirds of your time for planning and revising.
Depending on the task, expert writers may use some or all of these activities when writing. The activities can come in any order, may be done more than once, and can be started while others are still being done.
To brainstorm, think of all of the ideas you can, and write them down as they come to you. To freewrite, follow a similar plan, only write in sentences without stopping for a period of time, even if that means writing, “I can’t think of anything.” Cluster by writing your ideas down and drawing circles around them. Then use different colored pens to group ideas, looking for patterns. Where possible, talk to your audiences formally or informally to involve readers in the planning process. For an oral presentation, meeting, or document with lots of visuals, storyboard using a rectangle for each page or unit. Draw a box with a visual for each main point.
Revising means making changes that will better satisfy your purposes and your audiences. Editing means improving grammar. Proofreading means checking to make sure the document is free of typos.
Try these five activities to overcome writer’s block. You can also “warm up” for the writing process by using invention techniques.
Procrastination is the enemy of many writers! To avoid procrastinating, develop good work habits, including setting a regular time to write and modest goals to reach.
Good document design helps reduce noise, which interferes with your audience’s ability to read and understand your message. It saves times and money and makes you and your organization look more credible.
While individual documents and companies may require specific designs, most paper messages in business should follow these guidelines for good readability.
While individual documents and companies may require specific designs, most paper messages in business should follow these guidelines for good readability.
Justified margins line up type. Ragged margins do not. Your choice of which to use should be governed by the look you want and by your audience’s expectations.
Like all guidelines, these ones can be altered when the situation calls for it. In general, though, follow these principles when creating presentation slides. Remember, the slides should support what you have to say rather than replace it.
Standards for Web pages continue to evolve. Use these guidelines as a start, but also review Web pages that you believe work well for inspiration. Remember that the first page is critical. As most readers skim, “hooking” them early may determine whether they continue on to the rest of your Web site.
Think about design at every step of the process. Where possible, involve members of the audience, or work with professionals who may provide assistance in creating good layouts.