5. What did I change?
As this is only a storyboard, I could not show
the full effect of what I decided to
differently, although I have a brief visual.
1) All of the shots on my storyboard are
planned to be framed right, and frame
5 and 6 shows the student’s heads are
in frame.
2) I have added a few more shots which
was the planned finish version. This
was from the arrival of the teacher and
the students panicking,
3) I added a high angle in frame number
10 which shows the vulnerability of the
student.
4) I added some more dialogue and the
editing looks more continuous as the
props are placed in correct positions
throughout my drawings.