3. Pitch Feedback Analysis
After getting feedback from my peers about my pitch, it is clear that the thing
that they think I should improve/change about my pitch is the age range. At
the moment my age range for my audience is 16-20 year olds. The reason that
my peers think that this age range needs thinking about and possibly changing
is because of the gap being small. With only a four year age gap, it does not
attract a lot of people and restricts people from buying it/wanting to buy it.
However, with advice from my peers and the feedback that they have given
me, I have decided to age my age range to 16-25. By making the age range
bigger I am then open to attract a wider range of audience and therefore add
more in to my magazine.
