Paragraph writing,Topic Sentences

1. Institute of Technology of Cambodia
Topic:
The advantages of transportation
Student: Kam Channraksmee
ID e20140229
Class I3D
Lecturer: Chea Sophea
Deadline: 30 December 2016
Year of Study: 2015 – 2016

2. Brainstorm my ideas here:
fast
Long distances
Safety and Comfortable
Reduced a time

3. The advantages of transportation
I. Introduction
Transportation refers to the movement of people or goods from one location to another. It
is useful for human working nowadays include the investments, goods delivery etc.
II. Body
 Advantage
2.1 Improve the progressing of economics or finances
2.2 Take a short time
2.3 Travel in long distance (railway, air, water)
III. Conclusion
We need the transport system mainly to complete our daily working. It has got a major role to
play in helping our global if we use it in right way.

4. My first draft
Strat my writing here:
advantages of transportation
Transportation refers to the movement of people or goods from one location to another.
There are three advantages of transportation to support our life style. First of all, it can improve
the progressing of economics or finances sectors, currently it helps to create employments and
reduces the cost of manufactured goods and lowers the price in the markets. On the other,
transport system does not base on good weather condition or not, in contrast the travels are safety
and comfortable. Thirdly, it promotes tourism system or services all over the country and the
passengers can travel in long distance and reduce time or the cost. All these advantages, it helps
develop our awesome life when we understood its causes and consequences