final

1. Storyboard
Action: an openingshotof Claire’shouse.
Description:thisshot containsClaire’shouse only.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade in.
Action: the camera followsthe tube until it reachesClaire.
Description:the camera slowlypanstoClaire.
Shot: mediumshot.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire looksdownasshe writesinherbook.
Description:the shot showsClaire withall the equipmentshe
reliesontosurvive.
Shot: mediumshot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

2. Action: Claire writesinherletter.
Description:the camera givesa closerview onwhatClaire is
writing.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire andhermothersiton a couch.
Description:inthe firstflashback,Claire andhermotherare
bothwatchingTV and discussingtheirday.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 7 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire andhermothercontinue totalk.
Description:the camera switchestoshow bothClaire and
hermotherduringthe conversation.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

3. Action: Claire andhermothercontinue tolaugh.
Description:the shot showsthe mothersface duringthe
conversationsothe audience cansee how happytheywere.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade
Action: Claire writesinherletter.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the present,where
Claire isrecallinghermemories.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire continuestowrite downhermemories.
Description:the camera showsthe upperpart of Claire’s
bodyso we can get a betterlookat the state she’sin.
Shot: mediumshot.
Duration: 7 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.

4. Action: Claire iswithherfriendRachel atRachel’shouse.
Description:bothgirlslaughand talktogetheras they speak
abouta party.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 8 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire andRachel continue tospeakas theywatcha
TV programme.
Description:the camera givesa closerview onboth of the
girl’sfacial expressions.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire andRachel continue tospeakas theywatch
a TV programme.
Description:the camera givesa closerview onbothof the
girl’sfacial expressions.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

5. Action: Claire looksdownather phone.
Description:inthe middle of herconversationherphone
rings,signallingthatshe’sreceivedatext.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack
Editing:cut.
Action: a message appearsonClaire’sphone.
Description:the camera getsa closerview of the phone.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 3 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: a message appearson Claire’sphone.
Description:the camera getsa closerview of the phone.
Shot: extreme close up.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

6. Action: Claire ignoresthe message andputthe phone
aside.
Description:bothof the girlscontinue like nothing
happened,theycontinue withtheirconversation.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 7 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire writesinherletter.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the present,
where Claire isrecallinghermemories.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire walkstowardshermother.
Description:Claire findshermothersatat a computer
screen.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 10 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

7. Action: Claire’smotherisshownatthe computer.
Description:the shot showsClaire’smotherlooking
throughsome files.
Shot: mediumshot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire’smothercontinuestosearchfor
treatments.
Description:the audience are able tosee the computer
clearerto see whatClaire’smotheris searching.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action:Claire’smotherbringsoutsome papers.
Description:Claire’smotherlooksatsome pastbillsshe
paidwhile lookingfrustrated.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

8. Action: Claire’smotherlooksatabill inparticular.
Description:the billsare more visible sothe audience
can see whythe motheris frustrated.
Shot: POV.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action:a shotof one particularbill.
Description:the shot showsa grand total of the
treatment.
Shot: extreme close up.
Duration: 3 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire writesinherletter.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the present,
where Claire isrecallinghermemories.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.

9. Action: Claire andherfriendIsabel are onthe swingsin
a park.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the past,where
Claire isrecallinghermemories.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: diegeticdialogue andasoundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire and Isabel are on the swingsina park.
Description:Claire andIsabel starttalkingabouttheir
future together.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: diegeticdialogue andasoundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire andherfriendIsabel are onthe swingsina
park.
Description:the scene switchesbackandforth between
Claire andIsabel astheyspeak.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: diegeticdialogue andasoundtrack.
Editing:fade.

10. Action: Claire andherfriendIsabel continuetoswing
on the swings.
Description:the scene blursoutas bothgirlslaugh
together.
Shot: wide shot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: diegeticdialogue andasoundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire writesinherletter.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the present,
where Claire isrecallinghermemories.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire isinherart classroomlookingthroughher
book.
Description:the scene switchesbackto the pastwhere
Claire isrecallingherlastmemory.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

11. Action: Claire goesthroughherbook.
Description:Claire flicksthroughherartbook,looking
back at her work.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 3 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire placesapage in herbook.
Description:Claire reminiscesonthe pastand all the
projectsshe’saccomplished.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire looksatthe lastpiece she had inherart
book.
Description:Claire reminiscesonthe pastand all the
projectsshe’saccomplished.
Shot: POV.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

12. Action: Claire closesherartbook.
Description:Claire’smemorystartstodiminishand
fade as she closesthe book.
Shot: POV.
Duration: 5 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:fade.
Action: Claire continuestowrite.
Description:Claire’smemoryhasgone andshe’s
broughtback intothe presentwhere she’swriting.
Shot: mediumshot.
Duration: 6 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire stopswritingmomentarily.
Description:Claire’shandstartsto shake as she writes.
Shot: overthe shoulder.
Duration: 7 seconds.
Sound: voice overanda soundtrack.
Editing:cut.

13. Action: Claire’seyesfluttershut.
Description:Claire slowlystartstobecome
unconscious.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: voice over,soundtrackandheartmonitor
machine.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire’s handslipsfromherpage.
Description:Claire’shandslowlymovesawayfromher
paperand hangsfrom herbed.
Shot: cantedangle,mediumshot.
Duration: 7 seconds.
Sound: flatline soundeffect.
Editing:cut.
Action: Claire’shanddangles.
Description:Claire loosesgripof the penwhichresults
init dropping.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 3 seconds.
Sound: flatline soundeffect.
Editing:cut.

14. Action: the pendrops.
Description:AfterClaire hasletgo of the penit hitsthe
groundin slow motion.
Shot: close up.
Duration: 4 seconds.
Sound: flatline soundeffect.
Editing:fade.