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Writing 2
 Fall 2012
 IECP
 Nikki Mattson




HW to be collected:
Please pass your TOEFL responses (all) and your Admire
paragraphs (group 1) to the front.

Please keep your restaurant paragraphs for peer review in class.
Agenda

 Warm up
 Peer review restaurant paragraphs
 Common sentence problems
 Descriptive writing
Peer Editing

 Complete the checklist about your
  partner’s paragraph.
 Discuss your comments with your partner
  and offer suggestions about how your
  partner can improve his/her writing.
Sentence Editing
Descriptive Writing
 Pgs. 61-62
 Pg. 63
Draw 5 objects/things from your picture
dictionary in the box of your paper

Write a descriptive paragraph that
describes the scene/picture that you drew

Make sure to use a topic sentence, spatial
transitions, descriptive adjectives, and a
concluding sentence
My trip to Quebec was very memorable
           because the city seemed very European.
           One small street was particularly quaint
           and interesting. When I approached the
           street, I saw a set of narrow, stone stairs
           winding down to small boutiques below. On
           the right of the stairs, there were small glass
           tables at a café with red plastic chairs for the
           customers. This seemed very European
           since the tables and chairs were very close
           together as they are in European restaurants.
           …….
           Overall, I will remember the feeling that I
           had while visiting Quebec for a long time
           since I felt as though I experienced a little
           piece of Europe while visiting the city.

Entrance
HW
 Type your descriptive paragraph and email it to me by
  Wednesday night at midnight. One paragprah for each
  group is sufficient.


 NLA12@psu.edu

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Day 7

  • 1. Writing 2 Fall 2012 IECP Nikki Mattson HW to be collected: Please pass your TOEFL responses (all) and your Admire paragraphs (group 1) to the front. Please keep your restaurant paragraphs for peer review in class.
  • 2. Agenda  Warm up  Peer review restaurant paragraphs  Common sentence problems  Descriptive writing
  • 3.
  • 4. Peer Editing  Complete the checklist about your partner’s paragraph.  Discuss your comments with your partner and offer suggestions about how your partner can improve his/her writing.
  • 6. Descriptive Writing  Pgs. 61-62  Pg. 63
  • 7. Draw 5 objects/things from your picture dictionary in the box of your paper Write a descriptive paragraph that describes the scene/picture that you drew Make sure to use a topic sentence, spatial transitions, descriptive adjectives, and a concluding sentence
  • 8. My trip to Quebec was very memorable because the city seemed very European. One small street was particularly quaint and interesting. When I approached the street, I saw a set of narrow, stone stairs winding down to small boutiques below. On the right of the stairs, there were small glass tables at a café with red plastic chairs for the customers. This seemed very European since the tables and chairs were very close together as they are in European restaurants. ……. Overall, I will remember the feeling that I had while visiting Quebec for a long time since I felt as though I experienced a little piece of Europe while visiting the city. Entrance
  • 9.
  • 10. HW  Type your descriptive paragraph and email it to me by Wednesday night at midnight. One paragprah for each group is sufficient.  NLA12@psu.edu