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UNDERPASS
WHAT HAVE YOU
LEARNT FROM YOUR
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK?
165 PEOPLE WATCHED OUR
FILM

THROUGH YOUTUBE AND FACEBOOK
FACEBOOK GARNERED 26 LIKES
24 PEOPLE RESPONDED TO
OUR SURVEY
Q1

CIRCULAR NARRATIVE?
0%
8%

20%

42%

Very successful
Ultimately successful
Just successful
It wasn't successful
Not so successful

30%
63% OF PEOPLE DID
NOT PREDICT OUR
CONCLUSION
37% OF PEOPLE
PREDICTED OUR
CONCLUSION
Q3 RATING OUR FILM ON A WHOLE
0% 0%
4%
4%

34%

Excellent
Great
Alright

29%

Just okay
Bad
Really Bad
Dreadful

29%
Q5 RATING THE EFFECTIVENESS
OF OUR SOUND
0%
4%

20%
Rubbish

42%

Pretty bad
Alright
Very good
Most excellent

34%
37% OF PEOPLE THOUGHT
OUR MAIN CHARACTER
WAS DEVELOPED VERY
WELL
45% THOUGHT OUR USE
OF CAMERA ANGLES WAS
EXTREMELY EFFECTIVE
Q6 RATING THE EDITING
4%
16%

4%

Awful
30%

Not too bad
Good
Great
Perfect

46%
Q8 RATING THE MISÉ EN SCENE
0%
8%
Bad
30%
20%

Ok
Good
Very good but could have used
more work
Excellent

42%
TIPS FOR IMPROVEMENTSUGGESTED BY VIEWERS
• MAKE THE STORYLINE A BIT MORE
UNDERSTANDABLE
• MORE CAMERA ANGLES AND EFFECTS
• A LITTLE BIT MORE CONTEXT ON THE
FLASHBACKS
• THE SOUND COULD USE SOME MORE WORKWITH REGARDS TO HOW WE ARE PUT IN
TENSION
EVALUATION
From the feedback given, the majority loved the
unique location and use of sound. The editing and
execution of the film was well done but if we were
to reshoot it we would focus on how we present
the themes of our film. This could possibly be done
by changing some of shots- possibly including a
dolly shot. This is a shot that is very good at
showing a character’s change in perspective. We
would also focus on the storyline itself- as the final
character at the end- some viewers were very
confused about as there was barely any insight into
his character.
PARODY VIDEO OF COMMENTS ON NEXT SLIDE
CRITICS ON SURVEY MONKEY RAVE

“VERY GOOD FOR A FIRST
SHORT”
“VERY GUID”
“CONTINUE
MORE WORK
GOOD”
“WELL DONE”

“IT WAS ALRIGHT”

“4”

“NICE JOB”
“TWAS
GREAT”

“IS NICE”

“INTERESTING
WITH AMBIGOUS
“NICE
ENDING”
ATMOSPHERE”

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Presentationd

  • 1. UNDERPASS WHAT HAVE YOU LEARNT FROM YOUR AUDIENCE FEEDBACK?
  • 2. 165 PEOPLE WATCHED OUR FILM THROUGH YOUTUBE AND FACEBOOK
  • 4. 24 PEOPLE RESPONDED TO OUR SURVEY
  • 5. Q1 CIRCULAR NARRATIVE? 0% 8% 20% 42% Very successful Ultimately successful Just successful It wasn't successful Not so successful 30%
  • 6. 63% OF PEOPLE DID NOT PREDICT OUR CONCLUSION 37% OF PEOPLE PREDICTED OUR CONCLUSION
  • 7. Q3 RATING OUR FILM ON A WHOLE 0% 0% 4% 4% 34% Excellent Great Alright 29% Just okay Bad Really Bad Dreadful 29%
  • 8. Q5 RATING THE EFFECTIVENESS OF OUR SOUND 0% 4% 20% Rubbish 42% Pretty bad Alright Very good Most excellent 34%
  • 9. 37% OF PEOPLE THOUGHT OUR MAIN CHARACTER WAS DEVELOPED VERY WELL 45% THOUGHT OUR USE OF CAMERA ANGLES WAS EXTREMELY EFFECTIVE
  • 10. Q6 RATING THE EDITING 4% 16% 4% Awful 30% Not too bad Good Great Perfect 46%
  • 11. Q8 RATING THE MISÉ EN SCENE 0% 8% Bad 30% 20% Ok Good Very good but could have used more work Excellent 42%
  • 12. TIPS FOR IMPROVEMENTSUGGESTED BY VIEWERS • MAKE THE STORYLINE A BIT MORE UNDERSTANDABLE • MORE CAMERA ANGLES AND EFFECTS • A LITTLE BIT MORE CONTEXT ON THE FLASHBACKS • THE SOUND COULD USE SOME MORE WORKWITH REGARDS TO HOW WE ARE PUT IN TENSION
  • 13. EVALUATION From the feedback given, the majority loved the unique location and use of sound. The editing and execution of the film was well done but if we were to reshoot it we would focus on how we present the themes of our film. This could possibly be done by changing some of shots- possibly including a dolly shot. This is a shot that is very good at showing a character’s change in perspective. We would also focus on the storyline itself- as the final character at the end- some viewers were very confused about as there was barely any insight into his character.
  • 14. PARODY VIDEO OF COMMENTS ON NEXT SLIDE
  • 15. CRITICS ON SURVEY MONKEY RAVE “VERY GOOD FOR A FIRST SHORT” “VERY GUID” “CONTINUE MORE WORK GOOD” “WELL DONE” “IT WAS ALRIGHT” “4” “NICE JOB” “TWAS GREAT” “IS NICE” “INTERESTING WITH AMBIGOUS “NICE ENDING” ATMOSPHERE”