This study analyzed writing samples from two Malaysian English language learner bloggers to identify common errors and determine if first language interference affects second language writing. A total of 77 errors across 10 categories were detected, with the most errors in verb tenses, indicating it is a major challenge. Blogger 1 made more sentence structure and mother tongue interference errors, while Blogger 2 struggled more with vocabulary. The findings provide insights into how first language affects second language acquisition and can help improve writing instruction for English language learners.
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Blog-Assisted Learning in ESL Classrooms
1.
2. TITLE: “Blog-Assisted Learning in the ESL
Writing Classroom: A Phenomenological
Analysis”
AUTHORS: Ming Huei Lin, Nicholas Groom and
Chin-Ying Lin
JOURNAL: Lin, M. H., Groom, N., & Lin, C.-Y.
(2013). Blog-Assisted Learning in the ESL
Writing Classroom: A Phenomenological
Analysis. Educational Technology & Society, 16
(3), 130–139.
4. PURPOSE OF STUDY: To explore the
experiences of a group of Taiwanese ESL
student writers on a course of study that
used a blog-assisted language learning
(BALL) methodology.
STATEMENT OF PROBLEM: Second language
writing students are enthusiastic about BALL
in principle, but are not motivated to
engage voluntarily in second language
blogging activities in practice.
PARTICIPANT: 25 Taiwanese students of ESL
majoring.
5. What do the participants think about learning by using
blogs?
How do the participants describe their learning attitude
and motivation when learning writing through using
blogs?
How do the participants evaluate the effectiveness of the
blogging activities used in these writing lessons?
Are the participants willing to attend more lessons
supported with BALL like this? Why?/Why not?
6. Research setting and participants
Course design
Data collection
Data analysis
7. This study explores the experiences of a group of
Taiwanese ESL student writers on a course of study that
used a blog-assisted language learning (BALL)
methodology.
Data from in-depth interviews with eight participants
were studied qualitatively using a phenomenological
method of analysis.
Participants’ blogging activities were found to be
inhibited by low L2 proficiency levels, by feelings of
anxiety and embarrassment about possible peer reactions
to their work, and by the slow pace at which completed
compulsory blogging tasks were completed.
8. It is argued that these findings help to explain the
observation made in a number of previous studies,
that second language writing students are
enthusiastic about BALL in principle, but are not
motivated to engage voluntarily in second language
blogging activities in practice.
The paper concludes by offering suggestions for
ameliorating the problems identified in their
analysis, and by identifying avenues for further
research.
9. The purpose of the study was too general because it only studies
the students’ behavior towards BALL and it only wanted to
prove previous research studies.
Lots of improvement should be done for this research, especially
by specifying more on the research objectives and questions.
One limitation of this research is that it only focuses on one
teaching approach where students work on their writings alone
with time constraints, leading to their negative attitudes towards
blogging. Hence, researchers should include other teaching
approaches like working in groups, giving them relevant time to
finish their work, for more quality ones and spending some
hours for teacher-student consultation.
10. To some degree, the classroom setting may have
affected the results of the study where many students
said that they often got distracted. Hence, before the
research is conducted, the researchers should block
all access to irrelevant sites especially the social
media and YouTube. The arrangement of computers
should also follow the traditional classroom setting
so that students see some similarities between both
settings.
Future researchers can help to improve this research
for more accurate results.
11.
12. RESEARCH OBJECTIVES
The research aims to:
1. Identify the common errors done in blogs by second
language learners.
2. Identify whether one’s writing is affected by their first
language and culture.
LITERATURE REVIEW
According to James, C (1980), CAH is understood as
the principle barrier to second language acquisition is
the interference of the first language system with the
second language system. “Those elements that are
similar through (a learner’s) native language will be
simple for him or her and those elements that are
different will be difficult (Lado, R., 1968)
13. METHODOLOGY
› Finding blogs: The research starts by finding 2-4
blogs that are suitable to be analyzed. The chosen
bloggers are Malaysian English second language
learners and English is chosen as the medium in
writing their blog entries. Their English level is
intermediate.
› Data collection: All the data being collected is
analyzed to find the avoidance strategies and types of
transfer that these bloggers usually use. All the results
will be presented in the form of a table in an
organized manner to be easily understood.
14.
15.
16. Items Error Correction
Singular-
plural B1
1. I do know that long posts is
2. one of the main reason
3. Stores
4. he tend
1. I do know that long posts are
2. one of the main reasons
3. Store
4. he tends
B2 1. blog 1. blogs
Article
B1
1. But problem is
2. and best part is
3. previous blog I
1. But the problem is
2. and the best part is
3. previous blog that I
B2
1. I was one of subcommittees
2. And that's wrap
3. since last few months
4. will be on semester break
5. watching movies I have in my hard disk
1. I was one of the subcommittees
2. And that's a wrap
3. since the last few months
4. will be on a semester break
5. watching movies that I have in my
hard disk
Diction
B1
1. a job is to make end meets
2. still hoping some kind of miracle do
exists
3. I believe I have short memory
4. a lot comments
5. they're surviving well with kids some
more.
1. a job is to make ends meet
2. still hoping some miracle to exist
3. I believe I have short term memory
4. a lot of comments
5. they're surviving well even with kids.
B2
1. it is us who will be living to it
2. And I must make his easy too
3. a perfect medium
4. I am feeling more sorry.
5. Please tune in to my Twitter
1. it is us who will be living it
2. And I must make his life easy
3. A perfect platform
4. I am feeling very sorry.
5. Please follow my Twitter
17. Tenses B1 1. I felt obliged
2. My worrying heart won't stop pressures
me
3. I do not expect it coming straight up
4. I hadn't been getting more positive
support than I did
5. why the hell would they followed what I
wrote
6. I felt the need to express myself
7. hasn't achieve anything
8. She hasn't contribute to
9. Well, he have to.
10. he takes them as they is
11. I haven't quite enjoy my life yet
12. He knows what I wanted
13. If two persons truly want to be together
14. But no matter what they said how things
will be
15. he have taught me
1. I feel obliged
2. My worrying heart won’t stop pressuring
me
3. I do not expect it to come straight up
4. I hadn’t been getting much positive
support than I did
5. why the hell would they follow what I
wrote
6. I feel the need to express myself
7. hasn't achieved anything
8. She hasn't contributed to
9. Well, he has to.
10. he takes them as they are
11. I haven't quite enjoyed my life yet
12. He knows what I want
13. If two person truly wants to be together
14. But no matter what they say how things
will be
15. he has taught me
B2 1. I seriously not lying about being busy
2. we still have fun
3. taking selfie
4. I haven't share
5. It my
6. we're already
7. guys following
8. haven't post
1. I am seriously not lying about
2. we still had fun
3. selfie-ing
4. I haven’t shared
5. It is my
6. We’ve already
7. guys are following
8. haven't posted
18. Conjunction
B1
1. And hence,
2. As for people my age
1. Hence,
2. As for people of my age
B2
Punctuation
marks
B1
1. all teens must have got to
admit
2. I used to call my pet
3. we got engaged mid April
4. 'Young people they tend
5. Why that’s very mean of
anybody to say things
6. I believe that. As for those
who are divorced
7. Its
1. all teens must have (.) Got to
admit
2. I used to call ‘my pet’
3. we got engaged mid(-)April
4. 'Young people(,) they tend
5. Why (,) that's very mean of
anybody to say things
6. I believed that (,)for those who
are divorced
7. it(’)s
B2 1. few categories okay
maybe
1. few categories(,) okay(,)
maybe
Interferences
of mother
tongue
B1
1. hehe happy happy me.
2. 'Are you serious you letting
her marry off so young?’
3. 'How will you guys live after
marriage? Both not stable
yet, financially and
mentally.'
1. Hehe..I’m happy
2. 'Are you serious marrying her
off so young?’
3. 'How will you guys live after
marriage? Both of you are not
stable, financially and
mentally.'
B2 - -
19. Spellin
g
B1 1. Extend
2. Does one writing
3. Thoughts and nonsenses
1. Extent
2. Does one’s writing
3. Thought and nonsense
B2 1. Careless 1. Care less
Sentence
structure B1
1. going on in my mind of late
2. I just yet to have
3. but reality is that
4. I wish and hope and cross fingers
hoping intensively
5. It's 23 days into January 2014
6. I'll only write things be going great after
the 14th of Feb
7. I blog because I love writing actually.
8. to read my life events back
9. I certainly will enjoy it more
10. 'Are you serious you letting her marry off
11. 'Young people they tend to not think
12. inevitable really
13. and to not repeat
1. going out in my mind lately
2. I have just yet to
3. but that is the reality
4. I wish and cross my fingers, hoping
intensively
5. it’s 23 days in January 2014
6. I’ll only write things that are great
after the 14th of Feb
7. Actually, I blog because I love writing.
8. to read back my life events
9. I will certainly enjoy it more
10. ‘Are you serious marrying her off
11. 'Young people they tend not to think
12. really inevitable
13. and not to repeat
B2 - -
Preposition B1 1. we got engaged mid April 1. we got engaged in mid-April
B2 - -
20. There are 77 errors detected which are further classified into 10
categories.
Those categories are:-
1) Singular-plural
2) Articles/Determiner
3) Diction
4) Tenses
5) Conjunction
6) Punctuation marks
7) Interferences of mother tongue
8) Spelling
9) Sentence structure
10) Prepositions.
21. The top highest The top lowest
Categories Numbe
r of
error
Categories Number
of error
Blogger 1 Tenses 15 Article 3
Spelling 3
Sentence
Structure
13 Preposition 1
Punctuation
Marks
7 Conjunction 2
Blogger 2 Tenses 8 Singular –
Plural
1
Diction 5 Punctuation
Marks
1
Article 5 Spelling 1
22. The interference of the mother tongue can be
seen in Blogger 1, where 3 interferences were
being detected. While in Blogger 2, there is no
such interference happening.
It can be seen that both bloggers had committed
the most error in tenses which proof that tenses
are the major problem for ESL students.
This problem is considered as a global error
according to CAH. It is a more serious error
because it usually impedes understanding.
23. The second highest error recorded for blogger 1 is sentence structure. This is
because the blogger tends to write long sentences without the using
punctuation marks when needed to do so. This causes the structure of the
sentence to be unorganized or incomplete.
On the other hand, blogger 2 tense to do a lot of diction mistakes due to lack
of vocab.
The result also shows that blogger 1 committed the least errors in preposition,
conjunction, article and spelling while Blogger 2 did least errors in Singular-
plural, punctuation marks and spelling.
They committed least in these categories because they have already passed the
stage where these categories are considered as an easy level for them. Those
who commit a lot of errors in these categories are usually from the beginner
level.
The first blogger’s writings tend to be influence by her mother tongue due to
the uses of Manglish in her writing. Being a mix child of Chinese and Malay
causes her to use Malay and Mandarin as her mother tongues. These
languages have influence her writing in English.
24. CONCLUSION
All in all, this study managed to answer the research objectives
which are:-
1) to identify the common errors done in blogs by
ESL learners
2) to identify whether one’s writing is affected by
their first language and culture.
Second-language learners tend make the most mistakes in
Tenses while the least mistakes are in preposition, singular-
plural, conjunction and spelling.
The learner’s L1 does influence their writings.
More in-depth research can be done by future researchers.