Grading Breakdown Content: 40-some organizational issues; you spent more time discussing the effects than presenting your examples and your evaluation seemed to spread out over the whole essay instead of one concentrated paragraph MLA Format/Citations: 12-Works Cited page is correctly formatted but you are still using APA for your in-text citations; date in the header is incorrect Grammar and Mechanics: 4 ^^ These are the problems in my essay, can someone correct them in two hours ? This is the feedback i got. .