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Content: 40-some organizational issues; you spent more time
discussing the effects than presenting your examples and your
evaluation seemed to spread out over the whole essay instead of
one concentrated paragraph
MLA Format/Citations: 12-Works Cited page is correctly
formatted but you are still using APA for your in-text citations;
date in the header is incorrect
Grammar and Mechanics: 4
^^ These are the problems in my essay,
can someone correct them in two hours ?
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