JAKE

1. Proposal
The premise of my story is that two teenagers that are having difficult times
with family and friends. However, thegirl and the boy both feel like
everywherethey go there is something or someonewatching them. Anyway,
they decide to meet up to talk about their struggles in life, they meet up in a
park and the girl tells the boy that shefeels like someoneis always watching
her and then the boy doesn’tbelieve her. They finish talking and the girl
decides to walk home and then the boy walks away as well. As soon as the girl
is out of sightthe boy sees a mask staring at him and then he chucks it on the
ground and walks away and then when he turns the corner he see’s someone
wearing the mask walking towards him and then they startto run at him
shouting “COME HERE”. The person wearing the mask catches up to the boy
and pins him down and murders him. The scene ends with the boy screaming.
My target audience is ranged from 14 – 20-year old’s becauseit is quite a short
and catchy film and if I can get their attention I will be able to widen my
audience in the next shortfilm I do. I chosethis audience group because this
group because this group is normally into horrors and comedy movies. My
unique selling point for this shortfilm will be that it is a shortand catchy and it
will have an incredible amountof tension and suspense.
Characters
Joe – Joe is a male who is 17 years old and I having problems at home and in
school, his family and friends don’t really listen to him or understand him. Joe
is also stressing aboutwhat he is going to do with his life.
Charlotte – Charlotte is justthe female version of Joe, she is 17 years old and is
having family problems and problems at school and is worrying abouther
exams.
Screenplay Structure
Act 1 – Joe and Charlotte are texting each other about there problems at home
and they are saying they should meet sometime justto clear their heads.
Act 2 – Joe and Charlotte finally meet and everywherethey go there is a mask
that is watching them and they both feel uncomfortable, so they decide to go
home.

2. Act 3 – As soon as Charlotte leaves Joe he is walking through the park and all of
a sudden he turns a corner and someonewearing the mask is running after
him. The mask finally catches him and kills him.