2. Why I created feedback
• I created the feedback document as I wanted to hear
what audiences had to say about our film. The reasons
for this is so that we could hopefully make our film
better from the feedback we received. I designed the
questions so that we would know what the audiences
do and do not like about our film. I had handed out the
feedback to various consumers within college in paper
form. When I had received the feedback I typed it up
into a word document so that I could easily upload it to
the blog. I thought this would be practical at first but
then realised it would take up a lot of space, so
decided to create the form in a PowerPoint slide so
that I could upload it to ‘SlideShare’.
3. Name: Chloe Appleby
“Enemies Closer”
What did you enjoy about our film opening?
• I enjoyed the storyline of the film opening, it instantly grabbed me and I want to know what happens in
the end now.
What did you dislike about our film?
• I didn’t enjoy the music, I don’t think it was strong enough, and was too stereotypical of the genre.
Do you have any suggestions on how we could improve the film?
• Change the music. Other than that, not much else.
What do you think the target audience for our film should be?
• Teenagers/young adults, aged between 15-25 who are interested in horror/thriller.
From 1 to 10 (10 being very good) what would you rate our film?
• 9
4. Name: Talith Walker
“Enemies Closer”
What did you enjoy about our film opening?
• I liked how the music went together with the film nicely, it seemed perfectly in time with the visuals.
What did you dislike about our film?
• It could have had a faster pace, at times it was a little boring for example when the presumed murderer was walking out the
garage door.
Do you have any suggestions on how we could improve the film?
• To improve the film you could possibly increase the level of action to make the audience more interested by it.
What do you think the target audience for our film should be?
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• I would market the target audience at around 15-24 as I believe this is around the age of people that would want to see a
thriller. I think that males would prefer this film to females.
From 1 to 10 (10 being very good) what would you rate our film?
• I would rate this film with an 8 out of 10.
5. Name: Cameron Ryan
“Enemies Closer”
What did you enjoy about our film opening?
• I enjoyed the plot of the opening of the film, as I liked how the possible murderer was following in the footsteps of the
possible victim and you don’t know whether he is going to kill him or not. It leaves the audience with something to think
about.
What did you dislike about our film?
• The only thing I didn’t like was the way the titles entered and exited. Some of them were on for too long but then some
were on for not so long. I didn’t like the font of the film either. It looked plain and basic.
Do you have any suggestions on how we could improve the film?
• You should shorten the scene where the man is walking through the forest, as it is quite long and could make the audience a
bit bored.
What do you think the target audience for our film should be?
• I think the target audience for your film should be an 18 as it looks like the film could be really violent and gory.
From 1 to 10 (10 being very good) what would you rate our film?
• I would rate it a 9 out of 10.
