Emily Donaldson gave her maiden speech focusing on education, employment, and family. She discussed improving state schools and reducing unemployment. Donaldson also advocated for more government support for troubled families through financial, health, and domestic programs. Throughout her speech, she linked these issues back to her central vision and tied them to personal anecdotes.

1. Maiden Speech
Emily Donaldson
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2. Introduction
• Acknowledgement of Country
• Persona background information
• Acknowledgements
• Anecdote/s

3. Central idea
• Introduce vision for Keppel

4. Body
• Introduce key messages
• Discuss briefly and link back to central idea

5. Key Message 1: Education
• Will talk about state schools and why we need to improve them
• Personal relations
• Why good education is important

6. Key Message 2: Employment
• Address large issue of unemployment
• Personal relations
• Link back to previous key message

7. Key Message 3: Family
• Better support from government to troubled families
- Financial support
- Health support
- Inter-family/domestic support
• Personal relations
• Link back to previous key messages

8. Conclusion
• Brief summary of Key Messages and final thanks.