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MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Magazine Title: Beats
Summary Comment: Simple butprofessional layout fittingin withtheir chosengenre which is Pop.
The imagesthat have beenchosenlinkalso in with the genre by usinga certain mise enscene and
varied backgrounds. Imageschosen couldbe differentasthe model doesnot look like a music
artist and too many differentfontshave beenused.
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
23 Simpleframing
used
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
30 Used mostly
high angleandmid
shots
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
32 Piano in the
background on the
contents page.No
imagepresenton
doublepage.
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
50 Varity of
differentsettings.
Lots of colour has
been used.
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
37 Useof cropping
on the firstimage.
accurately using
languageand register
52 Text is
appropriateand
linksto music.Hasa
casual language
register
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
32 Placingof text
and images hasnot
been donevery
well.
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
25 Not very well
layoutin certain
areas
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
50 Therehas been a
variety of textand
fontused
throughoutthe
pages.
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
47 Photoshophas
been used to create
layerson front
cover page
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Magazine Title: TOUCHED
Summary Comment: It looks like that it has beenrushed,there issome layout and designbut
looks veryunprofessional due to the imagesbeingstretched.
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framing a shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
35 Clear andsimple
shots
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
35 Not a variety
used
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
20 Looks morelike
a fashion magazine
than a music
magazine
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
34 Different
settings havebeen
used,different
lightinghasalso
been used
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
35 Croppinghas
been used,but
certain images
havebeen
stretched
accurately using
languageand register
39 Not correctuse
of language,very
unnatural
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
35 Has used both
text images,some
may notbe
necessary
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
34 A layouthas
been used,some
layershavenot
been placed for
professional layout
showingawarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
47 Only very basic
usebutan attempt
has been made
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
47 Photoshophas
been used butnot
to a high standard
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
40 Good useof
framingandlighting
MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016
Magazine Title: RNB
Summary Comment: The magazine works well for the chosengenre,layout and designhas been
thought through and looks professional.
Minimal Level1
10 – 23 marks
Basic Level2
24–35 marks
Proficiency
Level3
36–47 marks
Excellence
Level4
48–60 marks
framinga shot,
includingand excluding
elements as
appropriate
40 Good useof
framingandlighting
usinga variety of shot
distancesas
appropriate
50 A variety has
been used
shootingmaterial
appropriateto thetask
set
56 Works well with
genre and are
appropriate
selectingmise-en-
scèneincludingcolour,
figure,lighting,objects
and setting
58 Good useof
settingand lightin
images
manipulating
photographsas
appropriateto the
contextfor
presentation,including
croppingand resizing
40 Not a lotof
editinghastaken
placebuthasbeen
attempted
accurately using
languageand register
40 Simpleuseof
languagediscussion
in articledonev
well
appropriately
integratingillustration
and text
45 Text and images
work well and are
very laid out
showingunderstanding
of conventionsof
layoutand pagedesign
50 Layoutand
design thought
through to fitgenre
of music
showing awarenessof
the need for variety in
fonts and textsize
46 Certain partsof
text could bebigger
usingICTappropriately
for the task set
47 Basicuseof ICT
to createthe
magazine

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AFL 2016

  • 1. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Magazine Title: Beats Summary Comment: Simple butprofessional layout fittingin withtheir chosengenre which is Pop. The imagesthat have beenchosenlinkalso in with the genre by usinga certain mise enscene and varied backgrounds. Imageschosen couldbe differentasthe model doesnot look like a music artist and too many differentfontshave beenused. Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 23 Simpleframing used usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 30 Used mostly high angleandmid shots shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 32 Piano in the background on the contents page.No imagepresenton doublepage. selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 50 Varity of differentsettings. Lots of colour has been used. manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 37 Useof cropping on the firstimage. accurately using languageand register 52 Text is appropriateand linksto music.Hasa casual language register appropriately integratingillustration and text 32 Placingof text and images hasnot been donevery well. showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 25 Not very well layoutin certain areas showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 50 Therehas been a variety of textand fontused throughoutthe pages. usingICTappropriately for the task set 47 Photoshophas been used to create layerson front cover page
  • 2. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Magazine Title: TOUCHED Summary Comment: It looks like that it has beenrushed,there issome layout and designbut looks veryunprofessional due to the imagesbeingstretched. Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framing a shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 35 Clear andsimple shots usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 35 Not a variety used shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 20 Looks morelike a fashion magazine than a music magazine selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 34 Different settings havebeen used,different lightinghasalso been used manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 35 Croppinghas been used,but certain images havebeen stretched accurately using languageand register 39 Not correctuse of language,very unnatural appropriately integratingillustration and text 35 Has used both text images,some may notbe necessary showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 34 A layouthas been used,some layershavenot been placed for professional layout showingawarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 47 Only very basic usebutan attempt has been made usingICTappropriately for the task set 47 Photoshophas been used butnot to a high standard Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 40 Good useof framingandlighting
  • 3. MEDIA STUDIES AFL2016 Magazine Title: RNB Summary Comment: The magazine works well for the chosengenre,layout and designhas been thought through and looks professional. Minimal Level1 10 – 23 marks Basic Level2 24–35 marks Proficiency Level3 36–47 marks Excellence Level4 48–60 marks framinga shot, includingand excluding elements as appropriate 40 Good useof framingandlighting usinga variety of shot distancesas appropriate 50 A variety has been used shootingmaterial appropriateto thetask set 56 Works well with genre and are appropriate selectingmise-en- scèneincludingcolour, figure,lighting,objects and setting 58 Good useof settingand lightin images manipulating photographsas appropriateto the contextfor presentation,including croppingand resizing 40 Not a lotof editinghastaken placebuthasbeen attempted accurately using languageand register 40 Simpleuseof languagediscussion in articledonev well appropriately integratingillustration and text 45 Text and images work well and are very laid out showingunderstanding of conventionsof layoutand pagedesign 50 Layoutand design thought through to fitgenre of music showing awarenessof the need for variety in fonts and textsize 46 Certain partsof text could bebigger usingICTappropriately for the task set 47 Basicuseof ICT to createthe magazine