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Invisible rivalry Second Draft

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Invisible rivalry Second Draft

  1. 1. Invisible Rivalry Written By Curtis Groombridge PRODUCTION DRAFT Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013
  2. 2. 1 Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 1. EXT. CITY ACADEMY CAR PARK - MORNING Panning across the carpark, following Alex as he walks towards the Academy Entrance. NARRATOR This is Alex Smith; A very shy, and individual person with a gift, a gift that no-one else has. But we'll come back to that later. It's his first day at this new College, The City Academy. His parents have recently split, so he is very edgy and depressed. Oh and did i mention that he gets bullied for his height? * * Alex slows down, opens his bag, pulls out a letter and starts briefly reading it quietly to himself. * ALEX (Whispers) Dear Alex Smith ... Monday the 12th of October ... Go straight to reception and collect your things to start your day. So i go to reception, where's that? 2. INT. CITY ACADEMY RECEPTION * * * - CONTINUOUS Alex walks up to the reception desk where a rather large and strange looking woman is sitting in a chair looking at him with a friendly smile on her face * * ALEX (Shyly) Hi, I'm Alex Smith, I'm new here He gazes around the room, with a look of awe on his face because of how amazing the place looks. * * RECEPTIONIST (Peacefully) Ah i see. Welcome to The City Academy, Alex; I'm certain you'll enjoy your education here. Just wait one moment while i collect your planner and timetable from the office * * The Receptionist gets up and walks through a room at the other end of the reception. Alex stands very still. Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013
  3. 3. 2 Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 A FEW MINUTES PASS The Receptionist returns back with a book and a piece of paper. RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D) Right Alex, here is your planner. This is your guide to the Academy, it will tell you everything you need to know. Also this is your timetable; it looks like your first lesson is Maths in the D block The Receptionist points to the way towards the D Block Alex nods his head as the Receptionist directs him RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D) Just continue down this corridor and go out of the door on the left, The D block is the building directly in front of you. ALEX Thank you very much. RECEPTIONIST Hurry up, you don't want to be late! Alex smiles and quickly walks down the corridor. Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 * * * *

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