Alice suffers from social anxiety which makes long-lasting friendships difficult. She receives an invitation to a party but is uncomfortable with social situations. While getting ready, she struggles with applying makeup and chooses an outfit. At the party, Alice hesitates to enter and later feels unseen hands touching her, causing her to leave frightened. The film ends with Alice in the bathroom washing her face and taking pills while feeling a hand on her shoulder but seeing only a silhouette.

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BY LINE : AYESHA WARIND
WRITER : AYESHA WARIND

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Alice is the protagonist, she is very kind and humble. she is
the one who suffer from social anxiety and this doesn't make
friendship long-lasting.
INT:BEDROOM-DAY
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EXTREME LONG SHOT-FROM THE FRONT WHEN SHE WILL ENTER ROOM.
MID MEDIUM SHOT-WHEN SHE WILL CLOSE THE DOOR-FROM THE
LEFT/FRONT/RIGHT
1. I have select these shots because they are going to
represent how Alice will start the day and how is the mood of
her. We will find the protagonist Alice when She will enters
in the room through a simple long and neath frock, her hairs
will be open and necklace in the neck. She seems to be scared
because she is not in the mood to attend the events .
2:POINT OF VIEW SHOT-FROM THE FRONT WHEN SHE WILL MOVE HER
EYES AROUND THE INVITATION CARD
MASTER SHOT-OF ALL THE INVITATIONS TILL WHEN SHE IS GOING TO
SIT ON THE BED
PAN SHOT-FROM LEFT TO RIGHT(STARTING FROM THE MIRROR AND WILL
END WITH THE CHARACTER SITTING)
MID MEDIUM SHOT-OF CLOSING THE DOOR. I WILL TAKE IT FROM THE
BACK.
Alice closes the door and see the invitation card on the
table. This makes her uncomfortable and she sits on the bed.
This evident by the stiffness in her hands. It means that she
was not able to move easily due to her social anxiety problem
which create trouble in present and in future. This made her
depressed.
ALICE
(She will speak this dialogue in
the sad tone)
Oh no! finally invitation week has arrived I am not in the
mood to go.
This specific dialogue will be spoken when she had already
saw the invitation card and after sitting on the bed she will
say these lines because it will connect with other scenes.

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3.MID MEDIUM SHOT-FROM THE BACK
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OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT WHEN SHE WILL SEE THE MESSAGE OR GO
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OVER IT.
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Then Alice mobile beep which divert her attention towards the
attention. It mentions that a what s app group was made by
Aaron and Sophie where they sent the location. Aaron and
Sophie are sideline characters and there faces will not be
shown in this particular scene but shown in later scene.
4.PANNING-STAND UP FROM THE BED,THE CAMERA HORIZONTALLY SO
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THAT IT SWEEPS AROUND THE SCENE.UNTIL WHEN SHE REACHES THE
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MIRROR AND OFF THE MAKEUP ITEMS THAT SHE WILL KEEP ON OTHER
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SIDES
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mid medium shot-from the right side of the character and will
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be taken from front.
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EXTREME CLOSE UP-USED WHEN PICKING UP THE EYELINER,FROM RIGHT
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SIDE
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This scene will start with the panning, Alice just standup
from the bed after reading the message. She brought the
makeup and placed it on her side(right side) in front of
mirror. When she applies eyeliner it goes well on one side,
but on other eye it doesn't look good. When she goes on to
put for eyeshadow, the choices were to overwhelming.
ALICE
(angry mood)
NO!NO! it doesn't look great with my
dress and my eyes will not look
beautiful. Am I the only one who hate
the process of applying eyeliner
?Aghhh!
She was so irritated that she decide to rub it off.
5.PAN-WHEN SHE GOES TO THE CUPBOARD
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MID-MEDIUM SHOT-FROM RIGHT SIDE
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LONG SHOT-FROM RIGHT SIDE-
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After standing up Alice goes to cupboard to takeout a new
dress. As she opens the cupboard , she thinks about what to
wear for five minutes. She chooses a dress, wears it but as
she stares it upside down, but doesn't seem satisfied. As she

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goes to open the doorknob, she feels that someone is stopping
her this is proven through another hand on the wrist. The
hand soon disappears and she leaves the room.
EXT:ANOTHER FLAT-DAY TIME
FADE IN
6.LONG SHOT WHEN THE AARON WILL ENTER THE HOUSE,
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MID MEDIUM SHOT FROM THE LEFT SIDE OF ALICE
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She reaches the place where she was invited, and Aaron sees
her before entering into the house but Alice stands by
doorstep. Two waving hand of unknown person on Alice face but
this identity will not be revealed in this scene. This makes
her body stiff and she hesitates to enter.
A slow party vibe song will be playing
7.MID MEDIUM SHOT FROM THE LEFT SIDE,
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LONG SHOT-ALICE ENTERS THE ROOM-IN HORIZANTLE-TO BE FROM
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FRONT.
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MID MEDIUM SHOT/OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT-WHEN SHE WILL GETUP
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AND THERE IS NOONE(FROM THE BACK).
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TILT-WHEN THERE WILL HANDS ON ALICE LEGS AND THEN SHE RUNS
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AWAYS
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EXTREME CLOSE UP OF SOMEONE HANDS ON ALICE LEGS
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MATCH ON ACTION-OF LEGS FROM LEFT POSITION.
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Alice enter her room and falls to the ground. She feels
someone's hands is pulling her legs. As she gets up to look
for what just happened there was no one. She got even more
anxious and leaves from the frame.
8.LONG SHOT-FROM BACK OR RIGHT
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GOES SAME FOR THE MEDIUM SHOT
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She enters the washroom her head is bent down towards the
sink. Trying to wash face. Staying in that position, she
grabs the nearby pills and eats them. She feels a hand
touching her shoulder. But as she looks up there is a
silhouette. This where the film ends.

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