2. I made the main heading
article larger as it’s what
attracts the reader
Draft 1: Draft 2:
Also I moved the model
to the middle, again to
place emphasis on the
headline
I also added a tint to
change the image, by
increasing the
background, to highlight
the model
I made many changes to the first draft:
- The emphasis on the headline article (Text and positioning of the image)
- Added the lure (Top right)
- Added features
- Changed the secondary heading
- Added Barcode
3. I enlarged the
masthead to make it Changed the style: As it
clearer and bolder to suited the house style
set the brand of the magazine better
than the previous
choice
Draft 3:
I have moved the
features to the side of
the magazine, due to
them being placed in
the centre, when in
fact I had researched
them being on the side
of the magazine
I have moved the lure
to the bottom, which
was shown in research
and professional
magazines
4. Removed the
secondary heading:
Changed the features: this was because it
I decided to this as they didn’t follow
followed the house-style research, but also
better than the previous. Draft 4: over complicated the
magazine and made it
In addition, the different too full up. Whereas, I
font allows the readers to was aiming for a
differentiate between the simplistic style.
features
I changed the colour of
the lure, so the font I changed the headline
inside could be read to white, so it’s more
easier, as the previous visible for the audience
choice was hard to read to see the name of the
with the black writing artist.
5. I have enlarged the masthead to
make the brand look better and
Draft 5: bigger
- Metaphor – I made it bigger
and the brand is getting bigger
I have moved the features to
I have moved the headline the right of the magazine to
picture to the left of the consume the space.
screen
- To consume space
- To add emphasis to the
article
Made the lure a bit lighter
to make it even more
visibile.
Added the barcode to use
conventions and also it
shows the date and price of
the magazine
