2. sentence shifts
be consistent with person and number
be consistent in subject, voice and mood
be consistent in verb tense
3. sentence shifts
I enjoy reading financial forecasts, but you wonder
which will be correct.
People complain about sugary, high-fat foods, but
donuts by the millions are eaten for breakfast every
day.
The campaign to clean up the movies began in the late
1940s when civic and religious groups try to ban sex
and violence from films.
4. coordination and subordination
help communicate
relationships bet ween
ideas
coordination shows ideas
that are equal, or balanced
subordination shows one
idea is more important
than the other
5. coordination and subordination
make sure the t wo ideas fit
together, and conjunction
used shows correct
relationship
don’t add too many ideas
with and, but, for, or, nor,
yet, so
6. coordination and subordination
make sure the t wo ideas fit
together, and conjunction
used shows correct
relationship
don’t add too many ideas
with and, but, for, or, nor,
yet, so
7. quiz review
what kinds of things can
you add if you’re writing a
description about someone?
why is an introductory
paragraph important?
what does it do?
when does an essay need a
title?
8. quiz review
how does APA style work?
what is a run-on sentence?
how do you use commas in
a short quotation?