1. B Y M A D I H A H H U S S A I N
Rough cut>Final Version

2. What we kept the same:
 We kept the praying scenes the same, the changing
scenes. We also kept the hugging scene and when
they meet up.

3. What we added:
 We added the distribution and the two idents and
also a scene where we see the quran. W also added
the sound- ( Newline cinema, instruments, Azaan,
voice over, nasheed and rebel music.) We added all
the titles- names etc. We added extra scenes for
when they wake up- getting their clothes out the
wardrobe etc.

4. Improvements:
 If we had longer time, we probably might have
changed the music for the beginning as it doesn’t
really seem to go well. We also might have added
extra few shots and made shots more slower. We
probably would have made the words come in with
motion, so it looks more like a film opening.