Essay, argumentative kids should be paid for good graders

1. Kids Should be Paid for Good Graders
Nowdays, education becomes number one for everyone in this world. Education is needed
for making a good future of life. Many people think that they should give a good education for
their kids. Good education means good grader in their kids’ school. They will do everything to
make their kids become good graders even they should pay them. I personally agree that kids
should be paid for good graders because of some reasons.
One of the reasons is kids love money. Kids like to romp, enjoy theirselves, or play with
their toys. They will be glad if they have money because they think that having money means
new toys or lollipop. Therefore, they will be enthusiastic if someone ask them to do something
for getting some money. If they are paid for good graders, they will try to make better graders in
the hope of getting money.
By paying kids who get good graders in their school, they will also learn about
responsibility and the value of money. They won’t beg to their parents if they want to buy
something they want, like toys or snack, because they have money by theirselves. They will
work harder to get the money and save up for their purchase.
Other reasons is more focus on school. As we know that focus is an important thing which
had by the students in school. Kids will focus more on school if they know that they are getting
paid for studying, listening their teacher’s explanation, and doing their homework. They know if
they were getting paid for doing something well in school, they would try their hardest on
everything to get the money. If they were doing something well in school, they would be
smarter. They would also have a better chance at getting a good college education or having a
good job.
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2. As result, I agree that kids should be paid for good graders because they will be
enthusiastic to study and more focus on school, so they will be smarter and have a chance at
getting a good college education or good job.
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