Does your story come to a screeching halt every time there’s a fight scene? Do readers think your fight scenes are…tedious…instead of exciting? How realistic should your fight be? Discover how real people react to violence, and how you can use this information to make your conflict more believable. Learn how to craft fight scenes that engage your readers, advance your plot and reveal character.
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This issue includes a holiday letter from COL Emerson and CSM Craig, and an article on loyalty from COL Sullivan, as well as input from the staff sections.
Published by The United States Army Garrison Humphreys Public Affairs Office in coordination with USAG Red Cloud, USAG Yongsan and USAG Daegu Public Affairs Offices
This Army newspaper is an authorized publication for members of the Department of Defense. Contents of The Morning Calm are not necessarily official views of, or endorsed by, the U.S. Government, Department of Defense, or Department of the Army. The editorial content of this biweekly publication is the responsibility of U.S. Army Garrisons in Korea. Circulation: 9,500
Printed by Pyeongtaek Culture Newspaper, a private firm in no way connected with the U.S. Government, under exclusive written contract with the Contracting Command. The civilian printer is responsible for commercial advertising. The appearance of advertising in this publication, including inserts or supplements, does not constitute endorsement by the U.S. Army or Pyeongtaek Culture Newspaper of the products or service advertised. Everything advertised in this publication shall be made available for purchase, use or patronage without regard to race, religion, gender, national origin, age, marital status, physical handicap, political affiliation, or any other non-merit factor of the purchaser, user or patron. If an violation or rejection of this equal opportunity policy by an advertiser is confirmed, the printer shall refuse to
print advertising from that source until the violation of the equal opportunity policy is corrected.
Submitting stories or photos to The Morning Calm Biweekly
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Published by The United States Army Garrison Humphreys Public Affairs Office in coordination with USAG Red Cloud, USAG Yongsan and USAG Daegu Public Affairs Offices
This Army newspaper is an authorized publication for members of the Department of Defense. Contents of The Morning Calm are not necessarily official views of, or endorsed by, the U.S. Government, Department of Defense, or Department of the Army. The editorial content of this biweekly publication is the responsibility of U.S. Army Garrisons in Korea. Circulation: 9,500
Printed by Pyeongtaek Culture Newspaper, a private firm in no way connected with the U.S. Government, under exclusive written contract with the Contracting Command. The civilian printer is responsible for commercial advertising. The appearance of advertising in this publication, including inserts or supplements, does not constitute endorsement by the U.S. Army or Pyeongtaek Culture Newspaper of the products or service advertised. Everything advertised in this publication shall be made available for purchase, use or patronage without regard to race, religion, gender, national origin, age, marital status, physical handicap, political affiliation, or any other non-merit factor of the purchaser, user or patron. If an violation or rejection of this equal opportunity policy by an advertiser is confirmed, the printer shall refuse to
print advertising from that source until the violation of the equal opportunity policy is corrected.
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Send your Letters to the Managing Editor, guest Commentaries, story submissions, photos and Other items to: clint.l.stone.civ@mail.mil. All items are subject to editing for content and to Insure they conform with DoD guidelines.
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Early Life and Backgrounds
Orpah Winfrey: From Humble Beginnings to Media Mogul
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Winfrey's journey to success began with a scholarship to Tennessee State University. where she studied communication. Her first job in media was as a co-anchor for the local evening news in Nashville. This role paved the way for her eventual transition to talk show hosting. where she found her true calling.
Dwayne Johnson: From Wrestling Royalty to Hollywood Superstar
Dwayne Johnson, also known by his ring name "The Rock," was born on May 2, 1972, in Hayward, California. He comes from a family of professional wrestlers, with both his father, Rocky Johnson. and his grandfather, Peter Maivia, being notable figures in the wrestling world. Johnson's early life was spent moving between New Zealand and the United States. experiencing a variety of cultural influences.
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Early Life and Background
Family Roots and Childhood
Thomas William Selleck was born in Detroit, Michigan, on January 29, 1945. He was the second of four children in a close-knit family. His father, Robert Dean Selleck, was a real estate investor and executive. while his mother, Martha Selleck, was a homemaker. The Selleck family relocated to Sherman Oaks, California. when Tom was a child, setting the stage for his future in the entertainment industry.
Education and Early Interests
Growing up, young Tom Selleck was an active and athletic child. He attended Grant High School in Van Nuys, California. where he excelled in sports, particularly basketball. His tall and athletic build made him a standout player, and he earned a basketball scholarship to the University of Southern California (U.S.C.). While at U.S.C., Selleck studied business administration. but his interests shifted toward acting.
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Breaking Into the Industry
The path to stardom was a challenging one for young Tom Selleck. Like many aspiring actors, he faced many rejections and struggled to find steady work. A series of minor roles and guest appearances on television shows marked his early career. In 1965, he debuted on the syndicated show "The Dating Game." which gave him some exposure but did not lead to immediate success.
The Commercial Breakthrough
During the late 1960s and early 1970s, Selleck began appearing in television commercials. His rugged good looks and charismatic presence made him a popular brand choice. He starred in advertisements for Pepsi-Cola, Revlon, and Close-Up toothpaste. These commercials provided financial stability and helped him gain visibility in the industry.
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Over several decades, Tom Selleck, a name synonymous with charisma. From his iconic role as Thomas Magnum in the television series "Magnum, P.I." to his enduring presence in "Blue Bloods," Selleck has captivated audiences with his versatility and charm. As a result, "Tom Selleck net worth" has become a topic of great interest among fans. and financial enthusiasts alike. This article delves deep into Tom Selleck's wealth, exploring his career, assets, endorsements. and business ventures that contribute to his impressive economic standing.
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Early Life and Career Beginnings
The Foundation of Tom Selleck's Wealth
Born on January 29, 1945, in Detroit, Michigan, Tom Selleck grew up in Sherman Oaks, California. His journey towards building a large net worth began with humble origins. , Selleck pursued a business administration degree at the University of Southern California (USC) on a basketball scholarship. But, his interest shifted towards acting. leading him to study at the Hills Playhouse under Milton Katselas.
Minor roles in television and films marked Selleck's early career. He appeared in commercials and took on small parts in T.V. series such as "The Dating Game" and "Lancer." These initial steps, although modest. laid the groundwork for his future success and the growth of Tom Selleck net worth. Breakthrough with "Magnum, P.I."
The Role that Defined Tom Selleck's Career
Tom Selleck's breakthrough came with the role of Thomas Magnum in the CBS television series "Magnum, P.I." (1980-1988). This role made him a household name and boosted his net worth. The series' popularity resulted in Selleck earning large salaries. leading to financial stability and increased recognition in Hollywood.
"Magnum P.I." garnered high ratings and critical acclaim during its run. Selleck's portrayal of the charming and resourceful private investigator resonated with audiences. making him one of the most beloved television actors of the 1980s. The success of "Magnum P.I." played a pivotal role in shaping Tom Selleck net worth, establishing him as a major star.
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Expanding Tom Selleck's Financial Portfolio
While "Magnum, P.I." was a cornerstone of Selleck's career, he did not limit himself to television. He ventured into films, further enhancing Tom Selleck net worth. His filmography includes notable movies such as "Three Men and a Baby" (1987). which became the highest-grossing film of the year, and its sequel, "Three Men and a Little Lady" (1990). These box office successes contributed to his wealth.
Selleck's versatility allowed him to transition between genres. from comedies like "Mr. Baseball" (1992) to westerns such as "Quigley Down Under" (1990). This diversification showcased his acting range. and provided many income streams, reinforcing Tom Selleck net worth.
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Writing Killer Fight Scenes
1.
2. Agenda
PART 1: All About Violence
- Myths About Violence
- How We React to Danger
- How We Handle Violence
PART 2: Crafting Fighting Scenes
- A Useful Framework
- Maximizing Impact
- Writing Tips for Action Scenes
• Totally Shameless Plug
• Workshop Evaluation Form
4. Who Am I?
David Keener
• I Write Genre Mashups…
• Most of them with Fighting,
Crime or Military Combat
• Novelettes/Novellas
• Anthology Editor
• Defensive training with an
ex-SEAL
5. Exercise 1: Who Dies?
Cop vs. Man with Knife
• They’re 21 feet apart
• The Cop’s gun is in his holster
• The Man’s knife is drawn
Who lives and who dies?
6. Answer 1: Who Dies?
The Cop Dies
• “How Close is Too Close?”
- By Dennis Tueller
- An article in SWAT magazine from 1983
• Modern “triple-retention” holsters are
even slower
7. Myths About Violence
• Violence Never Solves Anything
• Only the Ignorant Engage in Violence
• Only Men are Really Violent
• Violence is the Result of an Improper
Upbringing
10. Rape Stats
Rape is just one type of
violent crime. Consider
other crimes such as:
• Robberies
• Murders
• Muggings
• Car Jackings
• Violent Abuse
• Intimidation
• Others
It’s frightening how
often violence works for
perpetrators.
11. Types of Fights
• Monkey Dance
• Group Monkey Dance
• Attack from Advantage
• Ritual Fight
• A Fair Fight (very rare)
12. Monkey Dance
• So universal it’s clearly instinctive
• Two guys trading escalating insults…
• Pushing on each other’s chests…
• Until one of them throws a roundhouse punch.
• Then they punch and wrestle…
• Until people around them intervene.
It’s (usually) a male dominance fight
13. Group Monkey Dance
• Going into “danger” with your tribe…
- A bonding experience
• Examples:
- Tribal hunters venturing out on a hunt
- Soldiers on a combat mission
- Mugging a tourist…to get into a gang
- Becoming a “made” man in the Mafia
- Enforcing group rules, e.g. punishing traitors
14. Attack from Advantage
• Why start a fight you might not win?
• It’s called “self-defense” for a reason…
- You’re already losing when the fight starts
- The enemy has picked the location, the
odds, the weapons, etc.
15. Ritual Fight
• A Fight with well-defined “Rules”
- Boxing, wrestling, kickboxing
- A duel with swords or pistols
- A bar fight
- “Let’s take it outside, bucko!”
- Can be a more organized “Monkey Dance”
16. A Fair Fight
• Not as rare as a Unicorn but…
• Ex. – A chance meeting of two evenly
matched military units
17. Women and the Monkey Dance
• Not hard-wired like men
- Can exhibit it as a learned behavior…
• Can decide how to react
- Men tend to punch; women can do anything
- Makes women more unpredictable in a fight
• Men also tend to underestimate women
18. Adrenaline and Men
• “Adrenaline” is a built-in reaction to Danger
• It’s very much a mixed bag
- It promotes Raw Power and Speed…
- But Depresses usable Intelligence…
- And can cause Clumsiness and Tunnel Vision
• Takes training and experience to overcome
the downsides of adrenaline
19. Adrenaline and Women
• For Women, “adrenaline” builds slowly…
- Then peaks and trails off
- Never peaks as high as Men
• Men peak early and high…
- Men can go into a “combat rage”
• Since Women build more slowly…
- They have time to plan their “combat rage”
20. Exercise 2: Who Wins?
Female Jogger vs. Male Attacker
• 25-ish female jogger
- With some self-defense training
• Early 30’s attacker: A Bodybuilder
• He attacks, she fends him off and even
kicks him in the crotch
Does she attack or run?
21. Answer 2: Who Dies?
She RUNS for her life
• He’s stronger and faster at short distances
• If he grapples her, she’s DEAD
In real life, she runs and gets away. Identifies
the man to the police; he’s a serial rapist out
on parole. He’s already killed two other
joggers in the area.
22. Cognitive Bias
• People don’t expect to be in danger
• Often don’t recognize danger when it appears
- May not realize pop-pop-pop is gunfire
- May rationalize away what they see…
• Difficult to “win” when you don’t realize
what’s happening until it’s too late
- Active shooter scenarios, muggings, etc.
• Bias is typically overcome by training
25. Looping
In a fight…
• You act physically based on your OODA Loop
• As does your opponent
• Your actions are his observations
• His actions are your observations
• Decide faster to disrupt his OODA Loop
- And take control of the fight
26. Exercise 3: Beach Attack
Water
Hotel
Shops
Beach
Shooter’s
Path
A
B
CD
E
(Shooter does not
look at them)
o
Pulls out
Weapon
27. Answer 3: Beach Attack
A. Flight (into the water)
B. Doesn’t matter – They’re Dead
C. Freeze or Fight (actually Freeze)
D. Flight (or play dead)
E. Flight
If you survived, you either did something
right…or you just got lucky
29. Level of Realism
Your First Decision is…
How real do you want it?
RealisticAbsurd Antiseptic Cinematic Pseudo
Saving
Private
Ryan
The
Rifleman
Three
Stooges
The
Princess
Bride
Commando
The
Terminator
Rocky
The
Departed
31. Paradigm
• Setup
• Opening Moves
• Middle Game
• End Game
• Aftermath
A Simple Paradigm for Fight Scenes
The complexity is in the Details…
32. 1. Setup
• Establish context, e.g. – local geography
• Establish Stakes
• Establish Rules, e.g. – “first blood” in a duel
• Tell what we need to know before fighting starts
- You won’t be able to later on
- Don’t be afraid of “shorthand”
• If the opponents are talking, it’s usually here
33. 2. Opening Moves
• The Fight begins…
• Opponents feel each other out
- Some trickery may start here
- Ex. – Faking an injury, etc.
• The “plan” gets tested for the first time
• Terse Dialogue, if any
- Unless aiming at Absurd or Cinematic
• If the opponents are talking, it’s sometimes here
34. 3. Middle Game
• The Fight really kicks into gear…
• Surprise: (Optional) – “I’m not left-handed”
- May cause transition to the End Game
• Most likely No Dialogue
• Takes hero to the edge of his/her abilities
• Throwing in some details adds to the realism
- Can’t do a full sword swing in a stairway
• Do NOT do blow-by-blow descriptions
35. 4. End Game
• The Conclusion of the Fight…
- Win, Lose, Draw, Delayed
• Payoffs: From any surprises or trickery
• Minimal Dialogue (but Key)
- “Luke, I am Your Father.”
- “I told you you’d never amount to anything.”
Goal: Organic outgrowth from activities, but
hopefully surprising in its details
36. 5. Aftermath
• What happens because of this Fight?
• How does Life change for those involved?
• If the Fight matters, it’s got to have consequences
- Otherwise, cut it out
• Opportunity for more dialogue
37. Writing Action
• Typically written tightly
- No extraneous words (inc. adverbs)
• Short sentences, short paragraphs
• Dynamic words
• Only absolutely necessary descriptions
• No dialogue (or very little)
• Your Fight scene is probably under 1000 words
- With Setup the longest
- Aftermath can be short or long…
38. Exercise 4: The Duel
• Blaze Conner – son of a minor noble (age 22)
- Some sword training; not a duelist
• Caught with Esme Yavin (19), Duke’s daughter
• Patriarch offended at Blaze’s marriage proposal
• Challenges Blaze to a duel, using the top
duelist in the city…the dreaded Payter
Blaze wins the duel. Write the action where
Blaze wins. In 100 words, tell us how he did it…
39. Answer 4: The Duel
• The right answer is “anything that your
readers find entertaining and plausible”
• Most Likely: Blaze wins by accident
• Still not common, but the biggest threat
to a master duelist is an amateur…
- They do stupid, unexpected things
- Sometimes they get lucky
40. My Answer 4: The Duel
Somehow, Blaze parried Payter’s thrust, only
realizing too late that it was feint.
Off-balance, he saw Payter’s blade line up for the
killing thrust he had no way to stop. He moved—not
enough—and then stumbled.
Payter’s blade took him in the shoulder. He
screamed, dropped his sword and fell to his knees.
As his opponent tried to pull his sword out, Blaze
drew his dagger and stabbed him in the stomach again
and again and again until the dagger became too slick
with blood and slipped out of his hands. 93 Words
41. Make it Matter
• Fights must move story forward, not interrupt
• Fights should reveal character
- And not just the hero
• Something about the Fight should be unexpected
- Don’t be too predictable
• Amp up the Stakes
- Make us care what happens
42. Exercise 5: How?
• What can we do to make this Duel matter?
• What do we want to show about characters?
• Where does the story go after the Duel
43. Back to Blaze (examples)
• Fights between nobles officiated by a Judge
- From the Society of the Blade
- Gives speech: “Gods reveal Right through
the outcome of the sacred Duel.”
- Duel is to the death
• Patriarch tells duelist to make Blaze “suffer”
- Duelist: “As you wish.”
- Daughter is horrified
44. Back to Blaze (2)
• Judge asks Blaze for choice of weapon
- Duelist: “I’ll use my sword. He can use whatever
he wants. It won’t matter, anyway.”
Reveals character for Patriarch, daughter,
Duelist and Judge. And legitimizes Blaze’s use
of sword & dagger
45. “Chaining”
• With an extended conflict, you can chain your
Fight scenes…
• The Aftermath of one Fight…
• Becomes the Setup for the next Fight
• Gives you rising and falling action
- You can’t peg the needle all the time
46. My Story: Clash By Night (Chaining)
Basic Setup: Monumentalists rescue lost artwork.
On a retrieval mission in a war zone. Unexpectedly
opposed by Mercs hired to move the artwork.
• Initial Contact
- Light skirmishing and
electronic warfare
• Rearguard Action
- Fighting while heroes
rescue/load treasure
• Break Containment
- Heroes escape initial effort
to surround them
• Ambush
- Heroes ambush bad
guys during chase
• Bait and Switch
- Heroes run a scam
and escape with the
treasure
47. Beats for a Fight
• Can be useful to outline the beats in a Fight
• What facts need to be communicated in Setup?
- Ex. - Blaze has a dagger
- Ex. – Opponent said he could use “anything”
• What actions represent the ebb & flow?
- Do not provide blow-by-blow commentary
- Just enough for flavor and beat coverage
48. Conclusion
• Fights don’t just happen
• They develop for a reason
• Structure them to accomplish what your story
needs
• Real-world actions and reactions make your
story work
49. Totally Shameless Plug
Editor; also contains
one of my “Royal
Defender” stories
Contains a “Roadwerks”
story: urban fantasy,
Faerie, law enforcement,
paramilitary mash-up
“Die Hard” on the roof
of a castle tower…
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Bitter Days: Novelette. A crime story
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Road Trip: Urban fantasy with crime
Overtones.
Editor's Notes
All of these things ignore one major fact…Violence Works. It’s worked throughout most of history.
All of these things ignore one major fact…Violence Works. It’s worked throughout most of history.
Ender’s Game: Ender Wiggin gets bullied at school and demolishes the bully as an example. We find out later that he killed the kid – “Monkey Dance” meets utterly ruthless fighter.
Yeah, I was with Jimmy the Quick when he got made.
Note: I’m using “adrenaline” as a catch-all phrase for all the chemical changes that result from exposure to “danger”
Biggest impediment to dealing with situations. What writers often get wrong.
A paradigm for decision making in a dangerous situation. Basis for a LOT of military thinking. Lots of information out on the Internet.
A paradigm for decision making in a dangerous situation. Basis for a LOT of military thinking. Lots of information out on the Internet.
What should the people in locations A – E do? Fight, Flight or Freeze? This was a real attack in Tunisia. At C, the shooter was looking away from them; at B, he was looking right at them.
UDT – Underwater Demolitions Team…the precursors to modern day SEALs, from WWII
Princess Bride, My Books
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
Don’t take as Gospel
UDT – Underwater Demolitions Team…the precursors to modern day SEALs, from WWII
UDT – Underwater Demolitions Team…the precursors to modern day SEALs, from WWII