The document provides feedback on improving the music video creation business TuleyMVP. It discusses expanding the target market age range from 16-20 to become more universal. It also recommends investing in music editing software to improve video quality, recreating the showreel and pitch with higher production value, and considering payment plans to help clients afford services. The document emphasizes upholding the brand values of creative expression and independence while avoiding content that promotes illegal or anti-social behavior.