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• Imaginative, interesting details
• Appropriate to the audience and purpose
• Have a clear beginning, middle and end
• Paragraphs help structure the story
• Use a mixture of simple, compound, complex
sentences
• A range of punctuation
• Effective vocabulary
• Correct spelling
Simple Sentence
• Simple sentences contain one clause (piece of
information) and has a subject and a verb.
• For example, the cat sat on the mat.
• Look at the following picture and write a
simple sentence about it...
Examples
The ship hit the iceberg.
The sea was black.
The stars were bright.
Compound Sentences
• Compound sentences are two simple
sentences joined together with a conjunction
(and, but, so). The two simple sentences must
make sense on their own.
• E.g. The cat sat on the mat and the fish swam
in the bowl.
• Write a compound sentence about our
picture...
Examples
The sky was dark and the water was cold.
The stars were bright and there were no
clouds in the sky.
Complex Sentences
• Complex sentences have a main clause and a
subordinate clause. This basically means that
they have a separate bit of the sentence that
doesn’t make sense on its own.
• E.g. Looking at the fish bowl, the cat licked its
lips.
• Write a complex sentence about our picture...
Examples
Because it was cold, the water had frozen.
Hitting the iceberg, the ship began to sink.
Despite turning, the ship struck the ice.
Word Bank
• Horrified that he would put himself first – self-centred,
cowardly – he should be ashamed of himself – atrocious
behaviour – chaotic – startling – jolt – thud - scraping
• Terrifying sounds of screams – ear-piercing screams
• Gush of water flooding in – panic-stricken - anxious
• Traumatised – I have lost all hope – hypothermia –
distraught – desperate – dumbfounded - bewildered
• As cold as ice – freezing – the sound of silence – eerie
• Unnerving – distressing - tragic
Adjectives
• Terrified, flabbergasted, angry,
tired, stressed, scared, wanting to
escape, rushed, intimidated,
afraid, confused, alone, no way
out, panicked, worried, petrified,
depressed, bewildered, unsure,
distraught.
George Rowe was one of the quartermasters on the Titanic. This is how he described the crash:
“The first I knew or the disaster was when I felt a peculiar shiver run
through the vessel. It became icy cold and my breath froze in the air.
Then I saw the iceberg -and I shall never forget it. At first I
thought we had hit a windjammer as I caught a glimpse of
something sliding past the ship on the starboard side. In the glare
from the light of thousands of portholes, the smooth surface looked
just like wet canvas. I ran over to the side and realised that I was
looking at an iceberg. It was so big that it seemed to fill the sky. It
was a giant among icebergs and towered menacingly even above
the bridge. For a few seconds I gazed at it unbelievingly. It was just
a few feet away and I felt I could have touched it. Then it was gone -
swallowed up in the blackness.”
It must have been a little after ten o'clock when my husband came in and woke me up. He sat and talked to
me for how long l do not know, before he began to make ready to go to bed. And then the crash! The
sensation to me was as if the ship had been seized by a giant hand and shaken once, twice then stopped
dead in its course: That is to say there was a long backward jerk, followed by a shorter one. I was not thrown
out of my berth and my husband staggered on his feet only slightly. We heard no strange sounds, no rending
of plates and woodwork; but we noticed that the engines had stopped running.
I think my husband would have retired to his berth Without asking any more questions about the accident
but suddenly we heard hundreds of people running along the passageway in front of our door, 'We had
better go on deck and see what's wrong," he said.
When we reached the second cabin promenade deck we found a great many people there: Some officers
were walking up and down; but I want to say that at that time no-one was frightened.
Our party of three stood close together. Suddenly there was a commotion near one of the gangways and we
saw a stoker come climbing up from below. He stopped a few feet away from us. All of the fingers of one
hand had been cut off. Blood was running from the stumps and blood was spattered over his face and over
his clothes; l asked him if there was any danger. “Danger,” he screamed at the top of his voice, I should just
say so! It's hell down below, look at me. This boat will sink like a stone in ten minutes.' He staggered away
and lay down fainting with his head on a coil of rope: At this moment I got my first grip of fear -awful
sickening fear. That poor man with his bleeding hand and his speckled face brought up a picture of smashed
engines and mangled human bodies. I hung on to my husband's arm and although he was very brave, and
not trembling. I saw that his face was as white as paper. We realised that the accident was much worse than
we had supposed, but even then I and all the others about me of whom I have any knowledge did not
believe that the Titanic would go down. I have no clear idea of what happened during the next quarter of an
hour. I saw First Officer Murdock place guards by the gangways to prevent others like the wounded stoker
from coming on deck. He was a masterful man, astoundingly brave and cool. I had met him the day before
when he was inspecting the second cabin quarters, and thought him a bulldog of a man who would not he
afraid of anything. This proved to be true, he kept order to the last, and died at his post. They say he shot
himself. I do not know.
Those in charge must have herded us toward the nearest boat deck for that is where I
presently found myself, still clinging to my husband's arm, and with little Marjorie beside
me. Many women were standing with their husbands and there was no confusion.
Then above the clamour of the people asking questions of each other, there came the
terrible cry “Lower the boats! Women and children first. They struck utter terror into my
heart and now they will ring in my ears until the day I die. They meant my own safety but
they also meant the greatest loss I have ever suffered" - the life of my husband.
The third boat was about half full when a sailor caught Marjorie in his arms, and tore her
away from me and threw her into the boat. The deck seemed to be slipping under my feet.
It was leaning at a sharp angle for the ship was then sinking fast, bows down. I clung
desperately to my husband.
A man seized me by the arm then another threw both his arms about my waist and
dragged me away by main strength. I heard my husband say,
'Go, Lotty, for God's sake be brave and go! I'll get a seat in another boat'
The men who held me rushed me across the deck and hurled me bodily into the lifeboat. I
landed on one shoulder arid bruised it badly. Other women were crowding behind me, but
I stumbled to my feet and saw over their heads my husband's back as he walked steadily
down the deck and disappeared among the men. His face was turned away so that I never
saw it again, but I know that he went unafraid to his death.

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Titanic Eyewitness Stories Material

  • 1. Checklist • Imaginative, interesting details • Appropriate to the audience and purpose • Have a clear beginning, middle and end • Paragraphs help structure the story • Use a mixture of simple, compound, complex sentences • A range of punctuation • Effective vocabulary • Correct spelling
  • 2. Simple Sentence • Simple sentences contain one clause (piece of information) and has a subject and a verb. • For example, the cat sat on the mat. • Look at the following picture and write a simple sentence about it...
  • 3. Examples The ship hit the iceberg. The sea was black. The stars were bright.
  • 4. Compound Sentences • Compound sentences are two simple sentences joined together with a conjunction (and, but, so). The two simple sentences must make sense on their own. • E.g. The cat sat on the mat and the fish swam in the bowl. • Write a compound sentence about our picture...
  • 5. Examples The sky was dark and the water was cold. The stars were bright and there were no clouds in the sky.
  • 6. Complex Sentences • Complex sentences have a main clause and a subordinate clause. This basically means that they have a separate bit of the sentence that doesn’t make sense on its own. • E.g. Looking at the fish bowl, the cat licked its lips. • Write a complex sentence about our picture...
  • 7. Examples Because it was cold, the water had frozen. Hitting the iceberg, the ship began to sink. Despite turning, the ship struck the ice.
  • 8. Word Bank • Horrified that he would put himself first – self-centred, cowardly – he should be ashamed of himself – atrocious behaviour – chaotic – startling – jolt – thud - scraping • Terrifying sounds of screams – ear-piercing screams • Gush of water flooding in – panic-stricken - anxious • Traumatised – I have lost all hope – hypothermia – distraught – desperate – dumbfounded - bewildered • As cold as ice – freezing – the sound of silence – eerie • Unnerving – distressing - tragic
  • 9. Adjectives • Terrified, flabbergasted, angry, tired, stressed, scared, wanting to escape, rushed, intimidated, afraid, confused, alone, no way out, panicked, worried, petrified, depressed, bewildered, unsure, distraught.
  • 10. George Rowe was one of the quartermasters on the Titanic. This is how he described the crash: “The first I knew or the disaster was when I felt a peculiar shiver run through the vessel. It became icy cold and my breath froze in the air. Then I saw the iceberg -and I shall never forget it. At first I thought we had hit a windjammer as I caught a glimpse of something sliding past the ship on the starboard side. In the glare from the light of thousands of portholes, the smooth surface looked just like wet canvas. I ran over to the side and realised that I was looking at an iceberg. It was so big that it seemed to fill the sky. It was a giant among icebergs and towered menacingly even above the bridge. For a few seconds I gazed at it unbelievingly. It was just a few feet away and I felt I could have touched it. Then it was gone - swallowed up in the blackness.”
  • 11. It must have been a little after ten o'clock when my husband came in and woke me up. He sat and talked to me for how long l do not know, before he began to make ready to go to bed. And then the crash! The sensation to me was as if the ship had been seized by a giant hand and shaken once, twice then stopped dead in its course: That is to say there was a long backward jerk, followed by a shorter one. I was not thrown out of my berth and my husband staggered on his feet only slightly. We heard no strange sounds, no rending of plates and woodwork; but we noticed that the engines had stopped running. I think my husband would have retired to his berth Without asking any more questions about the accident but suddenly we heard hundreds of people running along the passageway in front of our door, 'We had better go on deck and see what's wrong," he said. When we reached the second cabin promenade deck we found a great many people there: Some officers were walking up and down; but I want to say that at that time no-one was frightened. Our party of three stood close together. Suddenly there was a commotion near one of the gangways and we saw a stoker come climbing up from below. He stopped a few feet away from us. All of the fingers of one hand had been cut off. Blood was running from the stumps and blood was spattered over his face and over his clothes; l asked him if there was any danger. “Danger,” he screamed at the top of his voice, I should just say so! It's hell down below, look at me. This boat will sink like a stone in ten minutes.' He staggered away and lay down fainting with his head on a coil of rope: At this moment I got my first grip of fear -awful sickening fear. That poor man with his bleeding hand and his speckled face brought up a picture of smashed engines and mangled human bodies. I hung on to my husband's arm and although he was very brave, and not trembling. I saw that his face was as white as paper. We realised that the accident was much worse than we had supposed, but even then I and all the others about me of whom I have any knowledge did not believe that the Titanic would go down. I have no clear idea of what happened during the next quarter of an hour. I saw First Officer Murdock place guards by the gangways to prevent others like the wounded stoker from coming on deck. He was a masterful man, astoundingly brave and cool. I had met him the day before when he was inspecting the second cabin quarters, and thought him a bulldog of a man who would not he afraid of anything. This proved to be true, he kept order to the last, and died at his post. They say he shot himself. I do not know.
  • 12. Those in charge must have herded us toward the nearest boat deck for that is where I presently found myself, still clinging to my husband's arm, and with little Marjorie beside me. Many women were standing with their husbands and there was no confusion. Then above the clamour of the people asking questions of each other, there came the terrible cry “Lower the boats! Women and children first. They struck utter terror into my heart and now they will ring in my ears until the day I die. They meant my own safety but they also meant the greatest loss I have ever suffered" - the life of my husband. The third boat was about half full when a sailor caught Marjorie in his arms, and tore her away from me and threw her into the boat. The deck seemed to be slipping under my feet. It was leaning at a sharp angle for the ship was then sinking fast, bows down. I clung desperately to my husband. A man seized me by the arm then another threw both his arms about my waist and dragged me away by main strength. I heard my husband say, 'Go, Lotty, for God's sake be brave and go! I'll get a seat in another boat' The men who held me rushed me across the deck and hurled me bodily into the lifeboat. I landed on one shoulder arid bruised it badly. Other women were crowding behind me, but I stumbled to my feet and saw over their heads my husband's back as he walked steadily down the deck and disappeared among the men. His face was turned away so that I never saw it again, but I know that he went unafraid to his death.