1. Naomi gets into an argument with her mother and storms off to her bedroom, slamming doors. She sits on her bed screaming into a pillow. 2. Naomi then overhears her mother talking to someone downstairs, complaining about Naomi and saying she is always in the wrong. Naomi gets angry at what she hears. 3. Naomi then hears other voices outside and sees people walking by her window, making faces. This distracts her from her argument with her mother.

1. 1.
The scene begins with the protagonist, Naomi, slamming the living room door on her mum as
she has just had an argument with her.
Shot type – Extreme close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 1 second Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – door slamming Dialogue – N/A

2. 2.
Naomi then quickly and loudly runs upstairs.
Shot type – Close up/low angle Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – feet running upstairs Dialogue – N/A

3. 3.
Naomi carries on running upstairs.
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Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – feet running upstairs Dialogue – N/A

4. 4.
Naomi runs into her room and slams the door behind her leaving the cameraman outside of
her bedroom.
Shot type – long shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 3 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – slamming the door and running Dialogue – N/A

5. 5.
Naomi sat up on her bed screaming into her pillow then falls back onto her bed once finished
screaming.
Shot type – Long shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – muffled screams Dialogue – N/A

6. 6.
Naomi is sat with the pillow covering her face. She begins to here her mum talking, slowly
removes the pillow from her face and sits up looking slightly shocked.
Shot type – Close up/ birds eye view Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 5 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – Faint voiceover “I
don’t know what to do anymore.
She doesn’t listen to me.” - Mum

7. Naomi quickly sits up looking very shocked and rubbing her head.
Shot type – Medium-close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 4 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – Faint voiceover “What
do I do? We’re constantly
arguing.” - Mum
7.

8. 8.
Naomi is still sat on her bed and can still hear her mum talking. She is focusing on her mum
talking.
Shot type – Close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 4 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – Faint voiceover “She
can’t do anything right. It’s always
her in the wrong.

9. 9.
Naomi is shocked and slightly angry at what her mum has just said.
Shot type – Close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 5 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – “What? I’m never in
the wrong! Everything’s always
your fault!” - Naomi

10. 10.
Mum stops talking and Naomi is wondering where her voice has gone. Another voice then
appears.
Shot type – Medium shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 6 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – Faint voiceover “I can’t
wait to get home. It’s been such a
long day at college.

11. 11.
Naomi looks outside the window to see a college girl walking past.
Shot type – long shot/point of view Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – N/A

12. 12.
Naomi sees another woman walk past.
Shot type – long shot/point of view Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – N/A

13. 13.
Naomi looks back at the first woman to see her pulling a horrible face.
Shot type – long shot/point of view Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 4 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue -Faint voiceover “Oh
no! She’s wearing double denim.”

14. 14.
Naomi is smiling/laughing at what the stranger has said and turns away from the window.
Shot type – Medium-close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – birds tweeting Dialogue – N/A

15. 15.
Naomi stands up from her bed.
Shot type – medium shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 second Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

16. 16.
Cat enters her room.
Shot type – Close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – cat meowing Dialogue – N/A

17. 17.
Naomi places her hands on either side of her head as if she is reading the cats mind, whilst
looking at the cat.
Shot type – Extreme close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

18. 18.
The cat stands still gormlessly looking at Naomi.
Shot type – close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

19. 19.
Naomi focuses harder on the cat.
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Shot duration – 1 second Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

20. 20.
The cat is stood in the same place, silently.
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Shot duration – 1 second Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

21. 21.
Naomi stops looking at the camera and releases a lot of hair when she removes her hands
from her head.
Shot type – Medium-close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 3 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

22. 22.
Cat begins to walk across the room.
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Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

23. 23.
Naomi looks quite bored and disappointed.
Shot type – medium shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – “Well aren’t you
boring?” - Naomi

24. 24.
Naomi looks at both of her hands and turns them over.
Shot type – close up Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 2 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – N/A

25. 25.
Shot type – medium shot Sound music – N/A
Shot duration – 4 seconds Sound FX – N/A
Sound atmos – N/A Dialogue – “I can read minds…ok
then” - Naomi