PENYERAHAN DAN PENILAIAN TUGASAN
                  ASSIGNMENT SUBMISSION AND ASSESSMENT
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                                   OUMH2203
                 ENGLISH FOR WORKPLACE COMMUNICATION
                                SEPTEMBER 2012
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                 ARAHAN KEPADA PELAJAR / INSTRUCTIONS TO STUDENTS

1. Tugasan ini mengandungi SATU (1) soalan sahaja yang disediakan dalam bahasa modul bercetak
   kursus ini. / This assignment contains only ONE (1) question that is set in the language of the printed
   module for the course.

2. Jawab dalam Bahasa Inggeris. / Answer in English.

3. Muat turunkan templat tugasan versi bahasa yang berkenaan daripada MyVLE untuk penyediaan dan
    penyerahan tugasan anda. Tugasan anda hendaklah ditaip dengan menggunakan saiz fon 12 Times
    New Roman dan langkau baris 1.5. / Download the language version of the assignment template
    concerned from the MyVLE for preparation and submission of your assignment. Your assignment
    should be typed using 12 point Times New Roman font and 1.5 line spacing.

4. Tugasan anda hendaklah antara 2500 hingga 3000 patah perkataan tidak termasuk rujukan. Bilangan
   perkataan hendaklah ditunjukkan di hujung tugasan anda. Jangan menyalin soalan dan arahan
   tugasan dalam jawapan anda. / Your assignment should be between 2500 to 3000 words excluding
   references. The number of words should be shown at the end of your assignment. Do not copy the
   assignment question and instructions to your answer.

5. Anda dikehendaki menghantar tugasan SECARA ON-LINE melalui MyVLE. Sila rujuk kepada portal
    untuk arahan mengenai prosedur menghantar tugasan anda secara on-line. Anda dinasihatkan
    menyimpan senaskah tugasan yang diserahkan untuk rujukan sendiri. / You must submit your
    assignment ON-LINE via the MyVLE. Refer to the portal for instructions on the procedures to
    submit your assignment on-line. You are advised to keep a copy of your submitted assignment for
    personal reference.

6. Anda hanya boleh menghantar tugasan SEKALI sahaja dalam SATU fail. / You can submit your
   assignment ONCE only in a SINGLE file.

7. Tugasan anda hendaklah diserahkan antara 6hb hingga 18hb November 2012 (ONLINE)
   Serahan selepas 18hb November 2012 TIDAK akan diterima. / Your assignment must be
   submitted between 6th until 18th November 2012. Submission after 18th November 2012
   will NOT be accepted.

8. Tugasan hendaklah disiapkan secara individu. Anda dilarang meniru tugasan orang lain. Anda juga
   dilarang sama sekali memplagiat kerja orang lain sebagai kerja sendiri. / Your assignment should be


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prepared individually. You should not copy another person’s assignment. You should also not
plagiarise another person’s work as your own.




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SOALAN TUGASAN /ASSIGNMENT QUESTION



You are asked to write a REPORT based on the situation below.


You have been on a tour of the factory you are working in and are annoyed to discover that
in the Material and Handling department, operators were blatantly ignoring the safety
regulations. As an Occupational Health Manager, it is your responsibility to prepare the
Occupational and Safety standards of your company. Write a report to the Managing
Director on the problems that you saw and recommend measures to be considered to
improve safety standards at your company.


1. Your report should have the following:
   a) INTRODUCTION
       - Presents the purpose of the report and describes the proposal or actions that need
         to be taken;


   b) BODY
       - Describes the present situation, identify at least FOUR problems involved;
       - In this section you can also describe the need for changes, or describe any costs
         and/or benefits that are involved;


   c) CONCLUSIONS
       - Evaluates the changes and provide recommendations


       In writing your report, try to be as detailed as possible by giving in-depth
       descriptions of the problems and recommendations.


2. There should be a very systematic exploration of the topic.
3. The discussion should be thorough and enough to support your stand.
4. Your chain of thoughts must not be faulty and all your paragraphs should be coherent.
5. Your opinion must be supported by your reading and previous research.
6. You must not forget to acknowledge your sources and must abide by the correct method
   of acknowledging using the APA style.




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Assignment Guidelines (Content and Scoring)

   CATEGORY    WEIGHT             LOW                            FAIR                   ABOVE AVERAGE                     EXCELLENT              MARKS
                                     1                              2                               3                             4
INTRODUCTION    1       There is no clear            The introduction states the      The introduction clearly       The introduction is           4
                        introduction of the main     main topic, but does not         states the main topic and      inviting, states the main
                        topic or structure of the    adequately preview the           previews the structure of      topic and previews the
                        paper.                       structure of the paper is        the paper, but is not          structure of the paper.
                                                     particularly inviting to the     particularly inviting to the
                                                     reader.                          reader.

CONTENT         2.5     The main idea is not         Main idea is somewhat            Main idea is clear but the     Main idea is clear, well     10
                        clear. There is a            clear but there is a need for    supporting information is      focused stands out and is
                        seemingly random             more supporting                  general.                       supported by detailed
                        collection of                information.                                                    information.
                        information.
CONCLUSION      1.5     There is no clear            The conclusion is                The conclusion is              The conclusion is strong      6
                        conclusion, the paper        recognizable, but does not       recognisable and ties up       and leaves the readers
                        just ends without            tie up several loose ends.       almost all the loose ends.     with a feeling that they
                        closure.                                                                                     understand what the
                                                                                                                     writer is getting at.

ORGANISATION    1       Many details are not in      Some details are not in a        Details are placed in a        Details are placed in a       4
                        a logical or expected        logical or expected order,       logical order, but the way     logical order and the
                        order. There is little       and this distracts the reader.   in which they are              way they are presented
                        sense that the writing is                                     introduced/ presented          effectively keeps the
                        organised.                                                    sometimes makes the            interest of the reader.
                                                                                      writing less interesting.

LANGUAGE/       1.5     Writer makes more than       Writer makes 3-4 errors in       Writer makes 1-2 errors        Writer makes no errors        6
GRAMMAR                 4 errors in grammar or       grammar or spelling that         in grammar or spelling         in grammar or spelling
                        spelling that distract the   distract the reader from the     that distract the reader       that distracts the reader
                        reader from the content.     content.                         from the content.              from the content.

                                                         TOTAL                                                                                    30
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PENILAIAN / EVALUATION

Tugasan ini akan menyumbangkan 30% markah kepada kursus tersebut dan akan dinilai
berdasarkan kepada Rubrik atau Skema Jawapan. / This assignment accounts for 30 % of
the marks for the course mentioned and shall be assessed based on the Rubrics or Answer
Scheme.

Anda akan dimaklumkan tentang markah tugasan ini sebelum Peperiksaan Akhir Semester
bermula / You would be informed of the assignment mark before the Final Semester
Examination commences.

PLAGIARISME : POTONGAN MARKAH / PLAGIARISM : MARKS DEDUCTION

Amaran : Tugasan yang diserahkan secara automatik akan disemak untuk persamaan. Jika
plagiarisme dikesan, markah akan dipotong seperti berikut: / Warning: The submitted
assignment will automatically undergo a similarity check. If plagiarism is detected, marks
would be deducted as follows:

   Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan antara 10 - 30 % : potongan 20% daripada
    jumlah markah yang diperoleh.
   Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan antara 31 - 50 % : potongan 40% daripada
    jumlah markah yang diperoleh.
   Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan lebih daripada 50%: Markah sifar akan
    diberikan.
•   Assignments with 10 - 30 % overlap with others: 20% deduction from the total marks
    scored.
•   Assignments with 31 - 50 % overlap with others: 40% deduction from the total marks
    scored.
•   Assignments with more than 50% overlap with others: Zero mark would be given.




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    PENYERAHAN DAN PENILAIANTUGASAN ASSIGNMENT SUBMISSION AND ASSESSMENT _______________________________________________________________________ _ OUMH2203 ENGLISH FOR WORKPLACE COMMUNICATION SEPTEMBER 2012 _______________________________________________________________________ _ ARAHAN KEPADA PELAJAR / INSTRUCTIONS TO STUDENTS 1. Tugasan ini mengandungi SATU (1) soalan sahaja yang disediakan dalam bahasa modul bercetak kursus ini. / This assignment contains only ONE (1) question that is set in the language of the printed module for the course. 2. Jawab dalam Bahasa Inggeris. / Answer in English. 3. Muat turunkan templat tugasan versi bahasa yang berkenaan daripada MyVLE untuk penyediaan dan penyerahan tugasan anda. Tugasan anda hendaklah ditaip dengan menggunakan saiz fon 12 Times New Roman dan langkau baris 1.5. / Download the language version of the assignment template concerned from the MyVLE for preparation and submission of your assignment. Your assignment should be typed using 12 point Times New Roman font and 1.5 line spacing. 4. Tugasan anda hendaklah antara 2500 hingga 3000 patah perkataan tidak termasuk rujukan. Bilangan perkataan hendaklah ditunjukkan di hujung tugasan anda. Jangan menyalin soalan dan arahan tugasan dalam jawapan anda. / Your assignment should be between 2500 to 3000 words excluding references. The number of words should be shown at the end of your assignment. Do not copy the assignment question and instructions to your answer. 5. Anda dikehendaki menghantar tugasan SECARA ON-LINE melalui MyVLE. Sila rujuk kepada portal untuk arahan mengenai prosedur menghantar tugasan anda secara on-line. Anda dinasihatkan menyimpan senaskah tugasan yang diserahkan untuk rujukan sendiri. / You must submit your assignment ON-LINE via the MyVLE. Refer to the portal for instructions on the procedures to submit your assignment on-line. You are advised to keep a copy of your submitted assignment for personal reference. 6. Anda hanya boleh menghantar tugasan SEKALI sahaja dalam SATU fail. / You can submit your assignment ONCE only in a SINGLE file. 7. Tugasan anda hendaklah diserahkan antara 6hb hingga 18hb November 2012 (ONLINE) Serahan selepas 18hb November 2012 TIDAK akan diterima. / Your assignment must be submitted between 6th until 18th November 2012. Submission after 18th November 2012 will NOT be accepted. 8. Tugasan hendaklah disiapkan secara individu. Anda dilarang meniru tugasan orang lain. Anda juga dilarang sama sekali memplagiat kerja orang lain sebagai kerja sendiri. / Your assignment should be 1
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    prepared individually. Youshould not copy another person’s assignment. You should also not plagiarise another person’s work as your own. 2
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    SOALAN TUGASAN /ASSIGNMENTQUESTION You are asked to write a REPORT based on the situation below. You have been on a tour of the factory you are working in and are annoyed to discover that in the Material and Handling department, operators were blatantly ignoring the safety regulations. As an Occupational Health Manager, it is your responsibility to prepare the Occupational and Safety standards of your company. Write a report to the Managing Director on the problems that you saw and recommend measures to be considered to improve safety standards at your company. 1. Your report should have the following: a) INTRODUCTION - Presents the purpose of the report and describes the proposal or actions that need to be taken; b) BODY - Describes the present situation, identify at least FOUR problems involved; - In this section you can also describe the need for changes, or describe any costs and/or benefits that are involved; c) CONCLUSIONS - Evaluates the changes and provide recommendations In writing your report, try to be as detailed as possible by giving in-depth descriptions of the problems and recommendations. 2. There should be a very systematic exploration of the topic. 3. The discussion should be thorough and enough to support your stand. 4. Your chain of thoughts must not be faulty and all your paragraphs should be coherent. 5. Your opinion must be supported by your reading and previous research.
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    6. You mustnot forget to acknowledge your sources and must abide by the correct method of acknowledging using the APA style. 4
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    Assignment Guidelines (Contentand Scoring) CATEGORY WEIGHT LOW FAIR ABOVE AVERAGE EXCELLENT MARKS 1 2 3 4 INTRODUCTION 1 There is no clear The introduction states the The introduction clearly The introduction is 4 introduction of the main main topic, but does not states the main topic and inviting, states the main topic or structure of the adequately preview the previews the structure of topic and previews the paper. structure of the paper is the paper, but is not structure of the paper. particularly inviting to the particularly inviting to the reader. reader. CONTENT 2.5 The main idea is not Main idea is somewhat Main idea is clear but the Main idea is clear, well 10 clear. There is a clear but there is a need for supporting information is focused stands out and is seemingly random more supporting general. supported by detailed collection of information. information. information. CONCLUSION 1.5 There is no clear The conclusion is The conclusion is The conclusion is strong 6 conclusion, the paper recognizable, but does not recognisable and ties up and leaves the readers just ends without tie up several loose ends. almost all the loose ends. with a feeling that they closure. understand what the writer is getting at. ORGANISATION 1 Many details are not in Some details are not in a Details are placed in a Details are placed in a 4 a logical or expected logical or expected order, logical order, but the way logical order and the order. There is little and this distracts the reader. in which they are way they are presented sense that the writing is introduced/ presented effectively keeps the organised. sometimes makes the interest of the reader. writing less interesting. LANGUAGE/ 1.5 Writer makes more than Writer makes 3-4 errors in Writer makes 1-2 errors Writer makes no errors 6 GRAMMAR 4 errors in grammar or grammar or spelling that in grammar or spelling in grammar or spelling spelling that distract the distract the reader from the that distract the reader that distracts the reader reader from the content. content. from the content. from the content. TOTAL 30
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    __________________________________________________________________________ PENILAIAN / EVALUATION Tugasanini akan menyumbangkan 30% markah kepada kursus tersebut dan akan dinilai berdasarkan kepada Rubrik atau Skema Jawapan. / This assignment accounts for 30 % of the marks for the course mentioned and shall be assessed based on the Rubrics or Answer Scheme. Anda akan dimaklumkan tentang markah tugasan ini sebelum Peperiksaan Akhir Semester bermula / You would be informed of the assignment mark before the Final Semester Examination commences. PLAGIARISME : POTONGAN MARKAH / PLAGIARISM : MARKS DEDUCTION Amaran : Tugasan yang diserahkan secara automatik akan disemak untuk persamaan. Jika plagiarisme dikesan, markah akan dipotong seperti berikut: / Warning: The submitted assignment will automatically undergo a similarity check. If plagiarism is detected, marks would be deducted as follows:  Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan antara 10 - 30 % : potongan 20% daripada jumlah markah yang diperoleh.  Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan antara 31 - 50 % : potongan 40% daripada jumlah markah yang diperoleh.  Tugasan dengan pertindihan kandungan lebih daripada 50%: Markah sifar akan diberikan. • Assignments with 10 - 30 % overlap with others: 20% deduction from the total marks scored. • Assignments with 31 - 50 % overlap with others: 40% deduction from the total marks scored. • Assignments with more than 50% overlap with others: Zero mark would be given. MUKA SURAT TAMAT / END OF PAGE