1) The document outlines 6 scenes of a story involving a schoolgirl, an older man, and his wife. In scene 1, the girl gets into the man's car after school. 2) In scene 2, in the car, they kiss flirtatiously but the girl seems upset about something. 3) In scene 3, at the man's home, the girl tells him she is pregnant, angering him. They later go to the sauna. 4) In scene 4, the man secretly locks the girl in the sauna and turns up the heat, killing her, while he relaxes with music. 5) In scene 5, the man puts the girl's body

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Scene No 1 Page No 1
Slugline Exterior – Daytime – Collingham Gardens
Endpoint of last scene (first scene)
Characters in scene Girl, Older Man
Point of scene Establish Characters
Conflict n/a
Ending / central
question
What is the relatinship between the man and the girl?
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
The girl leaves the school, sees the older man parked on the corner in his car. She approaches
the man sitting in his car. She then gets into the car. The older man touches her flirtuously.
Cinematography – Over the shoulder
Editing – Match on action (getting into car)
Lighting - Naturalistic

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Scene No 2 Page No 2
Slugline Interior – daytime – car
Endpoint of last scene Girl gets into the car
Characters in scene Girl, Older Man
Point of scene Establish their relationship
Conflict She has something to tell him
Ending / central
question
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
They share a quick kiss in the car then get into a conversation. They are both acting
flirtuously but the girl seems agitated.
Lighting - Naturalistic
Sound – diegetic – music

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Scene No 3 Page No 3
Slugline Interior – Daytime – Living Room
Endpoint of last scene The man and the girl drive off.
Characters in scene Girl, Older Man
Point of scene Schoolgirl reveals she is pregnant to the man.
Conflict The man is upset by the music
Ending / central
question
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
They arrive at his house/apartment, they are sitting in the living area. She tells him she is
pregnant. He reacts aggressively. After some time they go into the sauna. Low key lighting
matching
Lighting - Low key

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Scene No 4 Page No
Slugline 4 o’clock winter, dark
Endpoint of last scene Girl and man entering the sauna
Characters in scene Girl and man
Point of scene Girl getting killed
Conflict She's pregnant and told married partner
Ending / central
question
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
Within this scene the man and girl are awkwardly sat in the sauna, the man suspiciously tells
the girl he's getting towels as he secretly locks the sauna trapping the girl while turning up
the heat to deadly levels. He calming in a motionless way puts on a dressing gown andsits on
his living room sofa pouring himself a drink. As this occurs the girl is seen panicing as she
has noticed the she's been trapped as he's starts to scream, the man gets up and blasts
classical music while relaxing on the sofa drinking his whiskey. The scene ends with the girl
going mad slamming the doors lots of quick changes of angles to create tension, with the end
of the scene is her hand whipping down the sauna door.
This lighting is low key. The man and the woman are dressed in swimwear but man changes
later on in the scene.

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Scene No 5 Page No 5
Slugline Interior – dusk – Around the flat
Endpoint of last scene She dies in the sauna
Characters in scene Girl, Older Man
Point of scene He puts the dead body in the body bag.
Conflict She is dead
Ending / central
question
She is left in the sauna.
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
He realises she is dead and turns off the sauna. She has collapsed on the floor. He happens to
have a body bag left over from Halloween. He puts the girl in the body bag and leaves her in
the sauna. He puts some music on and gets a drink.
Lighting - Low key
Sound – diegetic - music

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Scene No 6 Page No
Slugline INT. Early Evening
Endpoint of last scene Man is drinking a glass of whiskey
Characters in scene Man, Wife
Point of scene Wife Returns Home
Conflict She tells him she is pregnant.
Ending / central
question
Scene description (without dialogue) focusing on key micro aspects (mise-en-scène,
camera, sound, editing, etc)
His wife arrives home and tells him she is pregnant as she can't drink the glass of wine he
poured her. He is happy. She tells him to stop the affair then says she wants to go into the
sauna. He distracts her as the schoolgirls body is still in there.