Darkness
by
Brandon Wood
FADE IN:
EXT. MAIN HOUSE. NIGHT
We start with a wide shot of the house a bright light in
the corner of the screen as the camera slowly moves
closer and closer to the house the street is silent.
INT. MAIN HOUSE. NIGHT
The camera slowly moves through the door way a close up
of Dave (eighteen) shaking and sweating a shadow towering
over his bed.
EXT. DREAM WORLD HOUSE. NIGHT
A third person view of Dave staring at his house
everything is pitch black except from his house and a
lamp post shining bright out side of the house. Dave
looks around confused wondering what was going on. Dave
slowly walk towards the front door and steps inside.
INT. DEATH SCENE. NIGHT
Dave turns into the living room he sees a black siloutte
hanging from the roof.
DAVE
Hello are you alright. Hello.
INT. DEATH SCENE. NIGHT
Dave runs over and places the dark figure on the ground
he realises that its his next door neighbour. He runs to
the front door scared. (Bang) Dave hears a nock on the
door behind him he turns around he sees a shadow. The
shadow looked like a reaper holding a sharp scythe with
rugged cloak after seeing the shadow he awoke sweating in
his bed.
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EXT. COLLEGE STREET. 3 A.M.
This is a wide shot of Dave with some of his friends we
see Dave split up from his friend to walk home.
DAVE
Bye guys
As he says bye he hears a scream from down the street and
he sees smoke pouring from the house windows he runs over
and enters the house.
EXT. BURNING HOUSE. 3 A.M.
Dave runs into the house and covers his face with his t-
shirt he sees someone lying on the floor (you hear a
heart beat in the background) he runs to see if the
person is ok as he touches the person to see if they are
ok. Camera cuts to view of Dave’s shadow as he touches
the person the shadow swings the scythe at the person
(The heartbeat in the background stops). Dave checks for
a pulse but feels nothing he carry’s the person out of
the house and calls 911.
INT. PSYCHOLOGIST OFFICE. 3:30 P.M.
Dave goes to see a Psychologist to talk about the visions
and dream he has been having he also tells the
psychologist what happened with the person he touched in
the burning house about the sound of the heartbeat.
(Knock Knock)
DAVE
Hello
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PSYCHOLOGIST
Come in. Can i help you.
DAVE
Yes I have been having visions and dreams
of people dying. I have also gone to help
people and when I touch them their heart
stops and in one of my dreams my shadow
was the Grim reaper. The people that die
I have seen in my dreams. I think that Im
the reason people are dying.
PSYCHOLOGIST
How long have you been having these
dreams and visions for.
DAVE
I only started having them last night.
PSYCHOLOGIST
How do they make you feel?
DAVE
They scare me and make me feel guilty as
I blame myself for their deaths as it has
to be my fault my dreams and visions have
come true and innocent people are dying.
PSYCHOLOGIST
Well I can give you some medication take
two before you go to sleep and see how
that helps.
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DAVE
Ok thanks for seeing me i will be back if
I have any problems.
EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE. 4:50 P.M.
As Dave walks to his front door he notices yellow tape
around his neighbours house and police cars he sees a
body being carried out of the house in a body bag.
INT. HOUSE/HOME. 5:00 P.M.
DAVE
Mom? Mom?


MOTHER
Yes. What do you want?
DAVE
What happened to the neighbour?
MOTHER
Im not to sure I heard one of the
officers say something about a heart
attack, apparently it happened some time
last night.
DAVE
I dreamt about his death I know it sounds
weird but I did. I must be the reason
he’s dead.
MOTHER
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Don’t be silly you cant have done this to
him all that you had was a dream.
INT. HOUSE. 5:20 P.M.
Dave walked up stairs and entered his room he started
having visions of people dying and as he didn't want
anyone else to get hurt so he tried to kill him self.
Dave swallows all of the pills he was given by the
PSYCHOLOGIST he passes out.
Dave's mom find him on the floor with the empty pill
bottle.
INT. MENTAL ASYLEM. NEXT 8 A.M.
Door opens and the camera slowly moves into the room as
the camera turns you see Dave sitting in the corner of a
white room restricted. His mother walks in


MOTHER
O I'm so sorry Dave but this is for your
own good i cant bare to see you kill
yourself and this is the only place that
you will be safe.
Dave's mom walks out the room and the door closes the
camera fades to black.
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    FADE IN: EXT. MAINHOUSE. NIGHT We start with a wide shot of the house a bright light in the corner of the screen as the camera slowly moves closer and closer to the house the street is silent. INT. MAIN HOUSE. NIGHT The camera slowly moves through the door way a close up of Dave (eighteen) shaking and sweating a shadow towering over his bed. EXT. DREAM WORLD HOUSE. NIGHT A third person view of Dave staring at his house everything is pitch black except from his house and a lamp post shining bright out side of the house. Dave looks around confused wondering what was going on. Dave slowly walk towards the front door and steps inside. INT. DEATH SCENE. NIGHT Dave turns into the living room he sees a black siloutte hanging from the roof. DAVE Hello are you alright. Hello. INT. DEATH SCENE. NIGHT Dave runs over and places the dark figure on the ground he realises that its his next door neighbour. He runs to the front door scared. (Bang) Dave hears a nock on the door behind him he turns around he sees a shadow. The shadow looked like a reaper holding a sharp scythe with rugged cloak after seeing the shadow he awoke sweating in his bed.
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    .2 EXT. COLLEGE STREET.3 A.M. This is a wide shot of Dave with some of his friends we see Dave split up from his friend to walk home. DAVE Bye guys As he says bye he hears a scream from down the street and he sees smoke pouring from the house windows he runs over and enters the house. EXT. BURNING HOUSE. 3 A.M. Dave runs into the house and covers his face with his t- shirt he sees someone lying on the floor (you hear a heart beat in the background) he runs to see if the person is ok as he touches the person to see if they are ok. Camera cuts to view of Dave’s shadow as he touches the person the shadow swings the scythe at the person (The heartbeat in the background stops). Dave checks for a pulse but feels nothing he carry’s the person out of the house and calls 911. INT. PSYCHOLOGIST OFFICE. 3:30 P.M. Dave goes to see a Psychologist to talk about the visions and dream he has been having he also tells the psychologist what happened with the person he touched in the burning house about the sound of the heartbeat. (Knock Knock) DAVE Hello
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    .3 PSYCHOLOGIST Come in. Cani help you. DAVE Yes I have been having visions and dreams of people dying. I have also gone to help people and when I touch them their heart stops and in one of my dreams my shadow was the Grim reaper. The people that die I have seen in my dreams. I think that Im the reason people are dying. PSYCHOLOGIST How long have you been having these dreams and visions for. DAVE I only started having them last night. PSYCHOLOGIST How do they make you feel? DAVE They scare me and make me feel guilty as I blame myself for their deaths as it has to be my fault my dreams and visions have come true and innocent people are dying. PSYCHOLOGIST Well I can give you some medication take two before you go to sleep and see how that helps.
  • 5.
    .4 DAVE Ok thanks forseeing me i will be back if I have any problems. EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE. 4:50 P.M. As Dave walks to his front door he notices yellow tape around his neighbours house and police cars he sees a body being carried out of the house in a body bag. INT. HOUSE/HOME. 5:00 P.M. DAVE Mom? Mom? 
 MOTHER Yes. What do you want? DAVE What happened to the neighbour? MOTHER Im not to sure I heard one of the officers say something about a heart attack, apparently it happened some time last night. DAVE I dreamt about his death I know it sounds weird but I did. I must be the reason he’s dead. MOTHER
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    .5 Don’t be sillyyou cant have done this to him all that you had was a dream. INT. HOUSE. 5:20 P.M. Dave walked up stairs and entered his room he started having visions of people dying and as he didn't want anyone else to get hurt so he tried to kill him self. Dave swallows all of the pills he was given by the PSYCHOLOGIST he passes out. Dave's mom find him on the floor with the empty pill bottle. INT. MENTAL ASYLEM. NEXT 8 A.M. Door opens and the camera slowly moves into the room as the camera turns you see Dave sitting in the corner of a white room restricted. His mother walks in 
 MOTHER O I'm so sorry Dave but this is for your own good i cant bare to see you kill yourself and this is the only place that you will be safe. Dave's mom walks out the room and the door closes the camera fades to black.
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