St. Andrew’s Catholic School
Unit G324: Advanced Portfolio in Media
Script
Name of Production:- ‘Merland Rise’
Group Members (Full names):
 Feargus Bracken– Director
 Bethany Vaughan - Editor
 Keir Speirs- Producer
Scene: 1
Character name: none
Shot type/Camera Angle: ES, LE
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound of
muffled conversation from interior, glasses clinking.
Action: Camera is aimed towards pub sign, name of pub visible.
End
Scene: 2
Character name: All cast ( Named and Extras)
Shot type/Camera Angle: ES,OS
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Previous sound cue, but
louder and clearer as now in the interior.
Action: Camera is static in place, with very slight slow zoom towards
two characters (Maximillian and Shannon)
End
Scene: 3
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: MS, OS
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Dialogue between
Maximillian and Shannon, diegetic background is muffled.
Action: Maximillian starts to ‘hit on’ Shannon. Shannon brushes it off,
initially.
End
Scene: 4
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: MC, OS
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Non diegetic sounds in
background, Bang Bang (Nancy Sinatra) faintly plays in the background.
Not full volume.
Action: Shannon is visibly uncomfortable, Maximillian making uncouth
advances. Reaches forward to touch Shannon.
End
Scene: 5
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound of being
slapped, Nancy Sinatra still playing in the background. Starts to
slowly increase in volume during following shots.
Action: Shannon slapping Maximillian across the face
End
Scene: 6
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: POV, Mid Shot
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Slap, Nancy Sinatra
Action: Repetition of the slap, from a differing angle
End
Scene: 7
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, Low Angle
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Slap, Bang Bang, Nancy
Sinatra
Action: Repetition of slap from a differing angle.
End
Scene: 8
Character name: Extras
Shot type/Camera Angle: LS, HA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Nancy Sinatra, Bang
Bang (Lyrics begin to fade away, become instrumental)
Action: Reaction of other pub goers is shown, humiliation of
Maximillian
End
Scene: 9
Character name: Maximillian
Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU , LA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Laughter in background,
diegetic. LDL – Bang-Bang Nancy Sinatra instrumental
Action: Visible frustration/anger on Maximillian’s face. Visibly tense
End
Scene: 10
Character name: Maximillian, Shannon, and James.
Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, EL
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bang-Bang Nancy Sinatra
Instrumental (Faint)
Action: Shannon turns to Love interest, Maximillian is out of focus in
the background.
End
Scene: 11
Character name: Shannon, James
Shot type/Camera Angle: ES, EL
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound effect,
phone going off. Vibration.
Action: Shannon and James sitting together, Phone goes off. Both look
towards phone.
End
Scene: 12
Character name: Maximillian
Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, HA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bag is making rustling
noise as filled, Bang Bang by Nancy Sinatra is playing instrumental
Action: A mysterious figure (Maximillian) is filling a bag with a
number of items. The last two are a picture of the girl, and a handgun.
End
Scene: 13
Character name: Shannon, James
Shot type/Camera Angle: ECU
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Unsettling low
tone/buzz
Action: Text notification from Shannon’s phone, screen lights up.
End
Scene: 14
Character name: Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: MS
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: notification
Action: Shannon opens and reads text message.
End
Scene: 15
Character name: Shannon, James
Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, EL
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Faint music track in
background but inaudible (Nancy Sinatra Bang Bang)
Action: James and Shannon are sitting together, both characters
comforting the other.
End
Scene: 16
Character name: Shannon
Shot type/Camera Angle: CU
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: SFX for a louder impact
(Drum) when phone hits cushion.
Action: Shannon dropping phone
End
Scene: 17
Character name: none
Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, HA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: iPhone notification
noise
Action: A text message is visible on screen, it says ‘I am coming for
you
End
Scene: 18
Character name: Maximillian
Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU, HA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bang Bang – Nancy
Sinatra Instrumental begins to increase in volume
Action: Antagonist (Maximillian) is seen outside by the window, but not
by Shannon and James.
End
Scene: 19
Character name: Maximillian
Shot type/Camera Angle: LS
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Nancy Sinatra, lyrics
fading in. Chorus
Action: Hooded figure in the dark raises gun towards window.
Voiceover begins – “Murder..”
End
Scene: 20
Character name: Maximillian
Shot type/Camera Angle: LS, LA
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: SFX of gun being
cocked.
Voiceover “Is on the rise...”
Action: Different camera position, Antagonist (Maximillian) cocks and
raises gun.
End
Scene: 21
Character name: None
Shot type/Camera Angle: Point of Call
Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Voiceover – “. Conflict
is on the rise.
Merland Rise. Brand new soap, on BBC 2. Starting 8PM, Monday.”
End

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  • 1.
    St. Andrew’s CatholicSchool Unit G324: Advanced Portfolio in Media Script Name of Production:- ‘Merland Rise’ Group Members (Full names):  Feargus Bracken– Director  Bethany Vaughan - Editor  Keir Speirs- Producer Scene: 1 Character name: none Shot type/Camera Angle: ES, LE Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound of muffled conversation from interior, glasses clinking. Action: Camera is aimed towards pub sign, name of pub visible. End Scene: 2 Character name: All cast ( Named and Extras) Shot type/Camera Angle: ES,OS
  • 2.
    Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:Previous sound cue, but louder and clearer as now in the interior. Action: Camera is static in place, with very slight slow zoom towards two characters (Maximillian and Shannon) End Scene: 3 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: MS, OS Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Dialogue between Maximillian and Shannon, diegetic background is muffled. Action: Maximillian starts to ‘hit on’ Shannon. Shannon brushes it off, initially. End Scene: 4 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: MC, OS Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Non diegetic sounds in background, Bang Bang (Nancy Sinatra) faintly plays in the background. Not full volume. Action: Shannon is visibly uncomfortable, Maximillian making uncouth advances. Reaches forward to touch Shannon. End Scene: 5 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU
  • 3.
    Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:Diegetic sound of being slapped, Nancy Sinatra still playing in the background. Starts to slowly increase in volume during following shots. Action: Shannon slapping Maximillian across the face End Scene: 6 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: POV, Mid Shot Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Slap, Nancy Sinatra Action: Repetition of the slap, from a differing angle End Scene: 7 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, Low Angle Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Slap, Bang Bang, Nancy Sinatra Action: Repetition of slap from a differing angle. End Scene: 8 Character name: Extras Shot type/Camera Angle: LS, HA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Nancy Sinatra, Bang Bang (Lyrics begin to fade away, become instrumental) Action: Reaction of other pub goers is shown, humiliation of Maximillian
  • 4.
    End Scene: 9 Character name:Maximillian Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU , LA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Laughter in background, diegetic. LDL – Bang-Bang Nancy Sinatra instrumental Action: Visible frustration/anger on Maximillian’s face. Visibly tense End Scene: 10 Character name: Maximillian, Shannon, and James. Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, EL Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bang-Bang Nancy Sinatra Instrumental (Faint) Action: Shannon turns to Love interest, Maximillian is out of focus in the background. End Scene: 11 Character name: Shannon, James Shot type/Camera Angle: ES, EL Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound effect, phone going off. Vibration. Action: Shannon and James sitting together, Phone goes off. Both look towards phone. End
  • 5.
    Scene: 12 Character name:Maximillian Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, HA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bag is making rustling noise as filled, Bang Bang by Nancy Sinatra is playing instrumental Action: A mysterious figure (Maximillian) is filling a bag with a number of items. The last two are a picture of the girl, and a handgun. End Scene: 13 Character name: Shannon, James Shot type/Camera Angle: ECU Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Unsettling low tone/buzz Action: Text notification from Shannon’s phone, screen lights up. End Scene: 14 Character name: Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: MS Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: notification Action: Shannon opens and reads text message. End Scene: 15 Character name: Shannon, James Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, EL
  • 6.
    Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:Faint music track in background but inaudible (Nancy Sinatra Bang Bang) Action: James and Shannon are sitting together, both characters comforting the other. End Scene: 16 Character name: Shannon Shot type/Camera Angle: CU Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: SFX for a louder impact (Drum) when phone hits cushion. Action: Shannon dropping phone End Scene: 17 Character name: none Shot type/Camera Angle: CU, HA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: iPhone notification noise Action: A text message is visible on screen, it says ‘I am coming for you End Scene: 18 Character name: Maximillian Shot type/Camera Angle: MCU, HA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Bang Bang – Nancy Sinatra Instrumental begins to increase in volume Action: Antagonist (Maximillian) is seen outside by the window, but not by Shannon and James.
  • 7.
    End Scene: 19 Character name:Maximillian Shot type/Camera Angle: LS Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Nancy Sinatra, lyrics fading in. Chorus Action: Hooded figure in the dark raises gun towards window. Voiceover begins – “Murder..” End Scene: 20 Character name: Maximillian Shot type/Camera Angle: LS, LA Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: SFX of gun being cocked. Voiceover “Is on the rise...” Action: Different camera position, Antagonist (Maximillian) cocks and raises gun. End Scene: 21 Character name: None Shot type/Camera Angle: Point of Call Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Voiceover – “. Conflict is on the rise. Merland Rise. Brand new soap, on BBC 2. Starting 8PM, Monday.” End