4. Objectives:
At the end of the lesson the students are expected
to:
a. Identify organization as property of a well-written text.
b. Evaluate a written text focusing on its organization.
c. Appreciate the importance of organization in a written
text.
7. INSTRUCTION
Analyze the text given. Evaluate it by
answering the guided questions. You
only have 8 minutes to do the task and
2 minutes to report it.
9. Guided Questions:
1. What is the topic sentence here?
2. Are the ideas in the paragraph well
linked and connected.? Yes or No?
3. Are they logically and/ or chronologically
organized? Why or why not?
4. Did the author used cohesive or
transitional devices to organized the
sentences and ideas?
10. Text
1 Thomas Edison was simply the one who created the first
commercially viable light bulb. It is widely believed that
he invented the light bulb. What made Edison’s light bulb
successful was his use of carbonized bamboo as the
filament. This made the bulb last longer and it was cheap
enough to be available for the masses. He only improved
on previous works of inventors who also worked on the
same project.
11. Text
2 Although it is widely believed that Thomas Edison invented
the light bulb, in reality he was simply the one who created
the first commercially viable light bulb. Along with his team,
Edison improved the previous works of inventors who also
worked on the same project. Compared to previous
versions, what made his light bulb successful was his use
of carbonized bamboo as the filament. This made the bulb
last longer and it was cheap enough to be available for the
masses.
15. Text
1 Thomas Edison was simply the one who created the first
commercially viable light bulb. It is widely believed that
he invented the light bulb. What made Edison’s light bulb
successful was his use of carbonized bamboo as the
filament. This made the bulb last longer and it was cheap
enough to be available for the masses. He only improved
on previous works of inventors who also worked on the
same project.
16. Text
2 Although it is widely believed that Thomas Edison
invented the light bulb, in reality he was simply the one
who created the first commercially viable light bulb. Along
with his team, Edison improved the previous works of
inventors who also worked on the same project.
Compared to previous versions, what made his light bulb
successful was his use of carbonized bamboo as the
filament. This made the bulb last longer and it was cheap
enough to be available for the masses.
17. Text
2 Although it is widely believed that Thomas Edison
invented the light bulb, in reality he was simply the one
who created the first commercially viable light bulb. Along
with his team, Edison improved the previous works of
inventors who also worked on the same project.
Compared to previous versions, what made his light bulb
successful was his use of carbonized bamboo as the
filament. This made the bulb last longer and it was cheap
enough to be available for the masses.
22. Read the following scenario.
You are working as editors for a
national broadsheet. One of the
writers from the opinion section
submitted a text, you are tasked
to evaluate it before editing.
23. THINK- Read the article
silently. (1 minute)
PAIR- With a partner, analyze
the text using the following
notes: (3 minutes)
24. SHARE: I’ll pick a lucky
sharer who will present their
activity to the class.
25. Important Notes:
- Organization of ideas (Are the ideas well
organized?)
- Cohesive devices & Transitional devices (Does
the text makes use of cohesive and transitional
devices? YES or NO?)
- Clarity (Does the sentences Logically and
accurately arranged?)
- Commentaries/ Suggestions/ Recommendation
26. I was glad when the COVID restrictions ended
and the shopping mall was open. Then we all
shopped and bought lots of new outfits and the
most fashionable color this year is pink. When I
got home I immediately went on Facebook to
show off my clothes haul to my social media
followers.
TEXT 1
27. I was glad when the COVID restrictions ended
and the shopping mall was open. At last I
could meet with my friends and hang out at
the food court. I immediately called them
and they agreed to go out with me. Then we
all shopped and bought lots of new outfits.
When I got home I immediately went on
Facebook to show off my clothes haul to my
social media followers.
TEXT 2
29. Direction: Write TRUE if the statement is correct. If the
statement is incorrect, Change the underlined word to
make it correct.
1. Unity is achieved when ideas are logically and
accurately arranged.
2. A text is organized when it helps readers follow
and understand the information presented.
3. Signal words helps readers better comprehend
what they read.
30. 4. A well-written text is clear, concise, and hard
to read.
5. The principal features to consider in
paragraph organization are the topic sentence
and controlling idea, supporting details,
organizational patterns, and signal words.
32. Search for an essay that exudes
ORGANIZATION in it. Evaluate it and
identify its component. State the
reasons why the composition
effective (write at least 3 reasons).
34. Fiction sub-genres
Mercury is the closest planet to the Sun
and the smallest of them all
Venus has a beautiful name and is the
second planet from the Sun
Despite being red, Mars is actually a cold
place. It’s full of iron oxide dust
Thriller
Science
Romance
35. What about non-fiction?
Despite being red, Mars is
actually a cold place
Venus is extremely hot, even
more than Mercury
Jupiter is the biggest planet in
the Solar System
Saturn is a gas giant and has
several rings
Related to reality
Mature topics
Memories
History
36. Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
Neptune is the farthest
planet from the Sun
Books come in various types
Mars is actually a very
cold place
Mercury is the closest
planet to the Sun
Saturn is a gas giant and
has several rings
Jupiter is the biggest
planet of them all
Novels Essays Textbooks
Travel guides Historical Encyclopedias
38. Codex format
Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
Clay tablets
Mercury is the closest
planet to the Sun
Renaissance
Despite being red, Mars
is a very cold place
Digital age
Saturn was named after
a Roman god
Printing press
Jupiter is the biggest
planet of them all
40. A picture always
reinforces
the concept
Images reveal large amounts of data, so
remember: use an image instead of a long text.
Your audience will appreciate it
41. Jupiter’s rotation period
9h 55m 23s
333,000
The Sun’s mass compared to Earth’s
386,000 km
Distance between Earth and the Moon
42. Why do people read?
Mercury is the closest
planet to the Sun and the
smallest of them all
Entertainment
Venus has a beautiful
name and is the second
planet from the Sun
Relaxation
Despite being red, Mars
is actually a cold place.
It’s full of iron oxide dust
Knowledge
50% 80%
30%
43. Tablet
mockup
You can replace the image on the
screen with your own work. Just
right-click on it and select
“Replace image”
44. Phone
mockup
You can replace the image on the
screen with your own work. Just
right-click on it and select
“Replace image”
46. Understanding some concepts
Major genres
Fiction Nonfiction
Biography Self help History
Mystery Science Romance
Mars is a
cold planet
Jupiter is a
big planet
Saturn is a
gas giant
Mercury is
very small
Venus is a
hot planet
We all live
on Earth
47. Important pieces of work
Name Genre Short description Valoration
Mercury Horror
Mercury is the closest planet to
the Sun
4/5
Mars Romance
Despite being red, Mars is
actually a cold place
2/5
Saturn Science fiction
Saturn was named after a
Roman god
5/5
Venus Biography
Venus is the second planet
from the Sun
3/5
48. Choose the correct answer
Read the statements below and choose the answer to the question by coloring the option
with the color fill tool
Which is not a nonfiction genre?
Education Psychology Romance
Stories of knights, dragons, and magical realms belong to which genre?
Essay
Mystery Science fiction Horror
Fantasy
Stories centered around crime-solving and detectives fall into which genre?
Historical fiction Adventure Drama
Thriller
49. People’s favorite genres
Follow the link in the graph to modify its data and then paste
the new one here. For more info, click here
Drama
Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
45%
Comedy
Despite being red, Mars
is very cold
35%
Mystery
Jupiter was named after
a Roman god
20%
50. Reading books’ journey
Choose a book
Despite being red, Mars
is very cold
Use good light
Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
Get comfy
Despite being red, Mars
is very cold
Enjoy
Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
01 03
02 04
51. Reading comprehension
Read the text carefully and answer the questions!
In a vibrant town, Lily cherished books. One
day, she found a golden book at the library,
opening a world of candy trees and playful
dragons. Lily's love for reading soared. Each
page turned brought new adventures, friends,
and lessons. The magic of books filled her with
joy, inspiring the town to gather at the library.
Lily's love for reading transformed the town
into a place where every page held a new
adventure
What is the main character’s name?
Write your answer here…
Which is the genre of the text?
Write your answer here…
Why is reading important?
Write your answer here…
52. Why are books so important?
Development
Mars is full of iron oxide dust
Empathy
Venus has a toxic atmosphere
Historical insight
Earth is the planet with life
Learning
Jupiter is a huge gas giant
Communication skills
Saturn is the ringed planet
Innovation
Neptune is an ice giant
53. Write your own story
Choose a genre of fiction and write your own story. Remember to use the common elements
of this major genre, such as a protagonists, plot, problem and resolution
Your story starts here…
54. Readers prefer digital copies
Follow the link in the graph to modify its data and then paste the new one here. For more info, click here
Digital
Despite being red, Mars
is very cold
Physical
Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
55. Some final conclusions
● Mercury is the closest
planet to the Sun and
the smallest of them all
● Mercury is the closest
planet to the Sun
● Venus has a beautiful
name and is the second
planet from the Sun
● Venus is the second
planet from the Sun
● Jupiter is a gas giant
and the biggest planet
in the Solar System
● Jupiter is the biggest
planet of them all
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Last meeting sir Dan discussed about Coherence and Cohesion as one of the properties of a well-written text.
What is Coherence?
What is Cohesion?
I need 2 groups. This row would be group 1 and this row would be group 2. Do the math!
PROCESS THEIR ANSWERS.
PROPERTIES OF A WELL-WRITTEN TEXT
These are the elements owned/ possessed by a properly and well-written text.
Draw a spider web.
Unity
Coherence and Cohesion
Organization
WHEN YOU HEAR THE WORD ORGANIZATION WHAT COMES INTO YOUR MIND?
Really? Why do you say so?
PROCESS THEIR ANSWERS.
1. What is the topic sentence here?
2. Are the ideas in the paragraph well linked and connected.? Yes or No?
3. Are they logically and/ or chronologically organized? Why or why not?
4. Did the author used cohesive or transitional devices to organized the sentences and ideas?
5. But what do you think is the reason why text 1 isn’t Organize? LET'S FIND OUT.
1. What is the topic sentence here?
2. Are the ideas in the paragraph well linked and connected.? Yes or No?
3. Are they logically and/ or chronologically organized? Why or why not?
4. Did the author used cohesive or transitional devices to organized the sentences and ideas?
1. What are these highlighted words here?
- It is called transitional or cohesive devices.
2. What is its function in a paragraph?
- It linked ideas together and when the ideas are well connected.
3. What will happen if the text is not organize?
- it's confusing and at the same time it can lose interest to the readers.
Now, do you have any questions? Clarifications? How about violent reactions? All good?
EXPLAIN
It helps ensure that the text is effective in communicating its intended message to the reader. As well as, it’s not confusing to us, readers Because it is organized.
So, what you are going to do to is that you are to assume that you are an editor for a national broadsheet. You are going to evaluate the text that I will present. You are to make comments and suggestions on it to improve the Organization of the ideas being presented.
Now, I’ll give you 2 minutes to analyze the text and give comments on how are we going to make the ideas organized.
