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1. What are the arguments of the DOF article?
The high consumption of sugar-added beverages contributes notoriously to excess energy intake
and is an important factor in the development of overweight and obesity.
2. Which consistencies and inconsistencies did you find in the document?
Consistencies: To address obesity, not only public health policy is needed, but other measures.
Inconsistencies: Sometimes, it is mentioned overweight and obesity, but afterwards it is said
“obesity and diabetes control”. There is no causality between obesity and diabetes.
Meanwhile, it is uncertain that fiscal measures can result in consumption decrease of flavored
beverages.
3. What biases or errors did you find in the arguments?
The argument mixed everything up: obesity, overweight, diabetes, etc. It is convinced that there
is a causality between consumption of sugar-added beverages and obesity, and between fiscal
imposition and decrease of obesity. In particular, no data or evidence supports them.
4. Can conclusions be drawn from the arguments?
No, I don’t think so, as the arguments show obvious logical fallacies.
5. Is the person’s point of view derived from his or her research?
Yes, he/she tries to touch every angle of the problem, however, this person lost focus and derived
from the main topic which makes the arguments unstable.
6. How are you ordering your own arguments?
First, I’ll generally introduce the problem to be addressed. Then, I’ll explain the reasons why the
problem incurred. Third, I’ll propose potential solutions by offering solid back-up material, such
as research paper, data, etc. The very last step is to drawa conclusion.

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peer review - Liu.doc

  • 1. 1. What are the arguments of the DOF article? The high consumption of sugar-added beverages contributes notoriously to excess energy intake and is an important factor in the development of overweight and obesity. 2. Which consistencies and inconsistencies did you find in the document? Consistencies: To address obesity, not only public health policy is needed, but other measures. Inconsistencies: Sometimes, it is mentioned overweight and obesity, but afterwards it is said “obesity and diabetes control”. There is no causality between obesity and diabetes. Meanwhile, it is uncertain that fiscal measures can result in consumption decrease of flavored beverages. 3. What biases or errors did you find in the arguments? The argument mixed everything up: obesity, overweight, diabetes, etc. It is convinced that there is a causality between consumption of sugar-added beverages and obesity, and between fiscal imposition and decrease of obesity. In particular, no data or evidence supports them. 4. Can conclusions be drawn from the arguments? No, I don’t think so, as the arguments show obvious logical fallacies. 5. Is the person’s point of view derived from his or her research? Yes, he/she tries to touch every angle of the problem, however, this person lost focus and derived from the main topic which makes the arguments unstable. 6. How are you ordering your own arguments? First, I’ll generally introduce the problem to be addressed. Then, I’ll explain the reasons why the problem incurred. Third, I’ll propose potential solutions by offering solid back-up material, such as research paper, data, etc. The very last step is to drawa conclusion.