The document provides an outline for writing a paragraph that analyzes trends and makes comparisons across timelines and objects. It includes guidance on focusing on the timeline, trends and comparisons, introduction with topic and overview, and body paragraphs with multiple sentences describing data points and comparisons. The outline describes analyzing objects and trends within two different timeframes, with an introduction giving the paragraph topic and overview of trends and comparisons, followed by two body paragraphs, each with several sentences analyzing data within that timeframe.

2. outline :
Pay attention to:
- TIMELINE: trends +
comparisons
- 2 Objects:
Intro: 1 sen
- Para topic
Overview 2 sen
- Trends
- comparison
Body : 3 sen each
Body 1: first timeframe
Body 2: 2nd timeframe

3. outline :
Pay attention to:
- TIMELINE: tenses
- Trends + compare
- Objects: 2
Intro: 1 sen
- Para topic
Overview 2 sen
- Trends
- Comparison
Body : 3 sen each
Body 1: 1st timeline (1980 vs
1990)
Body 2: 2nd timeline (2000 vs
2010)

4. outline :
Pay attention to:
- TIMELINE: tenses
- Trends + compare
- Objects: 5
Intro: 1 sen
- Para topic
Overview 2 sen
- Trends
- Comparison
Body : 3 sen each
Body 1: 1st group of obj (YA, C, M)
Body 2: 2nd group (remainders)

5. outline :
Pay attention to:
- TIMELINE: tense
- compare
- Objects: 2
Intro: 1 sen
- Para topic
Overview 2 sen
- Comparison ( group 1 vs group2)
- Highest / lowest
Body : 3 sen each
Body 1:
Body 2:

6. outline :
Pay attention to:
- TIMELINE: tense
- compare
- Objects: 5
Intro: 1 sen
- Para topic
Overview 2 sen
- Trends
- Compare
Body : 3 sen each
Body 1:
- Housing J - Transport J
- Housing M- Transport M
- Food J - Food M
Body 2:
- Health J- Healthcare M
- Others J - Others M

7. Intro + overview:
Intro :
The line graph analyses views of music
websites during a 15-day period.
+ The … of
+ Timeline: from...to => …-... period
Overview:
- Trend: M: Fluc, PP: Fluc
- 1-11: PP>MC
Overall, MC and PP websites follow a
volatile pattern/ share a fluctuation.. In
addition, MC is invariably dwarfed by PP
from 1st day to 11th day/ during the first
11 days, PP is more popular than MC.

8. BODY PARAGRAPHS
Body 1: 1-9
- 1 day, compare
- MC 1-9
- PP 1-9, compare
Body 2: 10-15
- 10 day, compare
- MC: 10-15
- PP: 10- 15,
compare

9. BODY PARAGRAPHS
DESCRIBING POINTS OF DATA
- PP: 120K VISITS
S + V + Obj. when? Sub? What happened?
1. In the first day, 120k visitors accessed
PP.
2. In the first day, PP was accessed by 120
visitors
3. In the first day, PP was entered by 120k
visitors
4. In the first day, 120 visitors entered PP
5. In the first day, the number of visits to PP
is 120k.
6. In the first day, PP reached (the point of)
120k visits.
7. The starting point of 120k visits is
recorded at PP site
8. There were nearly 120k visitors
that/who accessed PP in the third day.

10. BODY PARAGRAPHS
COMPARISON
=: as...as, the same as...
>:
- Adverb: a little higher, minimally
higher slightly lower, mildly lower,
- Multiplication: two times higher than,
two times as high as, double,
_fold + N
- Ranking: is ranked first
- DIfference: _____ higher than
I: the most, the least...

11. BODY PARAGRAPHS
DESCRIBING TRENDS
VERB/NOUN
In the first day, about 120k visitors accessed
PP, triple the figure for MC. 9 days later, THE
VISITS TO MC fluctuated around 40k. During
that same time, PP witnessed a downward
variation to 40k on day 9, slightly higher than
that of MC.