2. (CONTINUED)
INT- POSH LINGERIE SHOP - DAY
FADE IN:
1. L.S of the lingerie shop with a father and
daughter and a few other people inside it.
2. M.S of a father, DAVE, a 6ft tall man, 42 years
old with brown hair with patchy grey streaking
through it. He is walking through the shop looking
at the items.
3. M.S of Dave's daughter, LIV, a 13 year old girl
with long brown hair, going shopping to buy some
bras. They walk into a posh lingerie shop to
browse the collection.
4. L.S of Dave and Liv walking through the shop,
CAMERA ZOOMS into a M.S of Dave.
DAVE
So, erm, here we are...What
about these lovely and
completely unrevealing
things?
DAVE holds up a pair of large granny pants to his
daughter pulling a convincing smile.
5. M.S of Dave with Liv looking at her dad with a
serious face long enough for him to put the granny
knickers down and back away.
DAVE
No, no? Okay.. I'll leave you
to it, just no 'sexy' items,
or lacy things, or 'strings'
Dave picks up a collection of thongs and throws
them down and walks to the back of the shop.
3. (CONTINUED)
6. L.S of Liv walking to the bra section and starts
to browse at the collection picking up a few
items. CAMERA PANS to a L.S of two girls walking
into the store laughing and chatting loudly.
7. W.S of Liv and the group of girls when Liv turns
round and realises she knows the girls, she tries
to turn her back to the girls and ducks her head
in the collection of underwear to avoid the girls,
but the two girls spot her and walk over to her.
LIV
Hey girls, what's happening?
fancy seeing you here
8. M.S of the M.S of the two girls who are carrying a
large amount of shopping bags, both rich girls
full of fake smiles. Both girls has a fuller
figure than LIV. LIV and the two girls all air
kiss as they great each other.
9. C.U into girl 1 when she starts to speak
GIRL 1
Oh hey, oh we're just have a
little shopping trip, you
should of come with us.
The girl raises her arms up stating the obvious
that they were in a lingerie shop.
10. M.L.S CAMERA PANS out to the two girls as the
group of girls all laughing together, LIV joining
in.
11. M.S CAMERA TACKS the girls as they start browsing
the selection of underwear together, picking out
4. (CONTINUED)
sexy bras that are too old for them with lots of
padding.
12. O.T.S.S of Liv's shoulder to Girl 2.
GIRL 2
Who are you with anyway?
Daddy give you his credit
card for you to go on your
own?
13. M.L.S CAMERA PANS to the girls look shocked and
stunned that her dad could be that cool,
14. M.S eye level with Liv
LIV
Oh erm no.. I urm
15. TWO SHOT of Liv and Dave Before Liv can finish her
sentence her dad comes walking over walking in a
strut pushing his lips together to try and pout
whilst wearing a thong over his eye and pretending
to wear a bra. He walks over to the girls and
starts to talk, mimicking the way the girls talk.
16. M.S of Dave
DAVE
Oh hey girls, how you doing,
like fancy seeing you here.
You think I need the next
size up?
Dave points to the bra he's wearing.
17. W.S of everyone as Liv looks mortified and freezes
from embarrassment; her friends all burst out
laughing and look between Liv and Dave.
5. (CONTINUED)
GIRL 1
wow...
18. O.T.S from Livs shoulder to the girls as the group
of friends walk out of the store without LIV
laughing and giggling about what just happened
19. M.S of the girls
GIRL 2
What on earth was that?
GIRL 1
Oh who knows, how
embarrassing
The two girls all laugh together and walk off.
20. M.L.S CAMERA PANS towards LIV as she stays stood
with her dad looking at him in disbelief.
DAVE
Oh come on that was funny,
okay I'll buy you some food,
happy?
Liv says nothing and carries on staring at him in
silence,
21. Over the shoulder shot from Liv to Dave
DAVE
No? erm a maccies? a new top?
an eye patch?
Dave points to the thong located on his head that
he has over his eye to represent an eye patch.
22. TWO SHOT of Liv and Dave as Liv picks up her
selected underwear and takes them to check out.
Then they both walk back to the car. CRANE SHOT
6. (CONTINUED)
INT- AN OPEN PLANNED LIVING ROOM WITH STAIRS LEADING DOWN TO
THE MIDDLE OF THE LIVING ROOM WITH THE FRONT DOOR AT THE LEFT
SIDE OF THE LIVING ROOM. - NIGHT
23. Establishing shot of the large living area.
24. L.S CAMERA PANS to Dave and his wife, JEN a 40-
year-old woman with short light brown curly hair,
are walking into the living room discussing
previous the events of the day.
25. T.S of Dave and Jen sitting round the lounge area.
DAVE
Captain thong man was just
trying to save her from the
world of sassy lingerie, it's
not my fault, I didn't choose
the captain thong man life,
the captain thong man life
chose me.
26. W.S of the living room and door way as there is a
knock at the door
27. M.L.S CAMERA TRACKS Dave as gets up and starts
walking to the door.
DAVE
This must be Liv’s fella eh?
28. O.T.S view from Dave's shoulder. Dave opens the
door and stares dauntingly at the young boy, NICK,
a 14-year-old boy who’s average height with short
dark brown hair, while looking him up and down.
NICK
Hi sir, erm is Liv here sir?
7. (CONTINUED)
29. TWO SHOT of Nick and Dave
DAVE
How old are you?
NICK
Erm, fourteen sir
DAVE
Sorry no Liv lives here
30. L.S of Dave shutting the door in the boys face and
walks off, JEN quickly walks to the door to open
it for the young boy.
JEN
I’m so sorry for my husband's
behaviour please come in Nick
31. W.S of the living room with the three people sit
in awkward silence waiting for Liv, Dave stares at
Nick from across the room without blinking.
32. L.S of Liv quietly walks down the stairs wearing a
red dress that comes just above her knees that is
low cut revealing cleavage with obvious enhancing
underwear.
33. M.S of Jen turning around to go find Liv then her
face drops when she sees her daughter.
JEN
Oh my goodness..
34. W.S of everybody on scene
DAVE
Holy..wow what. Hey hunny you
going to the kitchen cause
those chicken fillets of
8. (CONTINUED)
yours will be perfect to feed
the family.
LIV gives a fake smile and laughs at her
dads joke.
35. M.S CAMERA TRACKS behind Liv
36. W.S of all the characters
LIV
I'm going out, bye.
DAVE
Could we have the chicken
fillets first though? I'm
rather hungry
JEN
LIV, go upstairs, now.
DAVE
I guess captain thong man
wasn't enough. Better the
bra-man on the job.
LIV looking mortified runs upstairs. JEN walks up
the stairs after LIV.
37. M.S of DAVE and NICK as they are left alone.
DAVE
So boy, what do you plan to
do with the rest of your
entire life?
9. (CONTINUED)
NICK
Well I plan to go to Oxford University and
study Engineering, Economics and Management
to become a management consultant in
financial institutions as well as be in the
manufacturing industry, sir.
38. Close up Shot of Dave looking at Nick in disbelief
and scratches his head trying to think of a good
comeback.
39. M.L.S CAMERA TRACKING Dave walking round the
lounge area.
DAVE
Well I, erm, good luck. So
what you doing tonight?
NICK
Cinemas I think sir
40. M.S of Dave
DAVE
Horror? So she can lean on
your shoulder and pretend to
be scared? Romantic so you
can wipe her tears off her
face and lean in for a kiss?
Or comedy so you can laugh
your way into a kiss? Ey?
41. Over the shoulder shot from Dave to
Nick
NICK
I think we’re going to go see
the new Monsters Ink actually
42. L.S as Dave takes in a deep breath as he walks
round the room being out staged again.
10. (CONTINUED)
43. W.D of everyone as Liv and Jen walk down the
stairs with LIV now wearing more casual and
appropriate clothes.
DAVE
Ah Livvy Loo, now that’s much
better.
44. Over the shoulder shot from have as he walks over
to LIV and gives her a big kiss. Liv pushes her
dad away and looks shyly over towards nick.
45. L.S of the four of them as nick and Liv finally
start to leave the house Dave calls after them.
DAVE
So nine O’Clock right here,
I’ll be waiting not a minute
longer, a lot of minutes
earlier though, if you want
that is.
NICK
Oh, yes sir
JEN
Oh please, call me Jen, and
call him Dave
46. C.U of Dave
DAVE
No no, carry on calling me
sir. See you at nine Livvy
loo loo, and if she's not
home before nine Nicolas...
you don't want to know what's
going to happen.
11. (CONTINUED)
47. O.T.S from Dave to Nick
NICK
oh I, erm, yes sir
48. C.U CAMER TRACKING as Dave walks
over to Nick of whispers closely to
him
DAVE
Oh and how about when you
come back we can go out to
the back and.. Y'know
49. O.T.S from Nick to Dave DAVE
indicates a smoking sign with his
hand
50. C.U of Nick and Dave
NICK
What? oh erm I don't do that
sir
DAVE
Come on, just a few drags,
you know what I'm talking
about
51. M.S of Nick looking around awkwardly
and looking at his mobile phone
NICK
Actually, you know what I
have to go, sorry it's urgent
52. Two shot of Dave and Nick
DAVE
you sure? Oh okay bu'bye now
12. (CONTINUED)
DAVE walks NICK out of the door with a cheery
wave.
53. 53.C.U of Dave brushing of his hands
and walking off.
