Peer editing involves working with another student to improve writing. It follows three steps: compliments, suggestions, and corrections. For compliments, the editor identifies what the author did well in areas like word choice and sentence fluency. Suggestions provide specific recommendations for how the author could make the writing clearer or stronger. Corrections address any grammar or formatting issues. The process aims to help authors through positive feedback rather than criticism.
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Instructions for reading comprehension
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Show, Don't Tell: Tips and Examples of The Golden Rule
Drawing the readers in with action
4 Practical 'Show, Don’t Tell' Tips
'Show, Don’t Tell' Examples
"Telling" is sometimes a better option
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Show, Don't Tell: Tips and Examples of The Golden Rule
Show, don’t tell is a writing technique in which story and characters are related through sensory details and actions rather than exposition. It fosters a more immersive writing style for the reader, allowing them to “be in the room” with the characters.
In his oft-repeated quoted, Anton Chekhov said, “Don’t tell me the moon is shining. Show me the glint of light on broken glass."
In short: showing illustrates, while telling merely states. Here’s a quick example:
Showing: As his mother switched off the light and left the room, Michael tensed. He huddled under the covers, gripped the sheets, and held his breath as the wind brushed past the curtain.
Telling: Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.
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In this post, we'll show you why Show Don't Tell is the most popular "rule" in creative writing and show you how you can add some "showing" skills to your toolkit.
Showing also helps develop characters in a way that isn't just listing their traits. For instance, rather than telling your readers that “Gina was selfish and immature,” you could show this side of her by writing a scene where she whines about how everyone forgot her half-birthday. Or if you have a character who’s extremely determined, show her actually persisting through something — don’t just say “she was persistent.”
When done right, showing draws readers into the narrative with truly immersive description. It contributes to story development but also leaves certain things up to the reader’s interpretation, which is much more interesting than making everything explicit. (Though of course, you can still use language to alter their perception).
The bottom line: telling might be quicker, and it’s certainly necessary to have some telling in every story (more on that later), but showing should almost always be your prime strategy.
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2. Peer editing is working with someone your
own age to improve and edit your writing.
3 steps: Compliments, Suggestions, Corrections
What is Peer Editing?
3. Tell the writer what they have done well after
looking at their word choice, sentence fluency
and voice.
Stay positive with the peer editing process.
Compliments
4. Find some compliments you could give this
writer:
We where all over my aunts house when my
dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
Example: Compliments
5. Giving the author specific and positive
suggestions on how they can make their
writing better.
Example: I think if you added some more detail
that part could be more clear.
You will all be using the thesaurus to suggest a
change in word choice.
Suggestions
6. What suggestions do you have for this author?
We where all over my aunts house when my
dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
Example: Suggestions
7. This is the time where you will help fix any
grammar or conventions that you see need to
be fixed.
Remember to stay positive. This is a time to
help not a time to be negative toward
someone’s writing.
Corrections
8. What corrections would you make?
We where all over my aunts house when my
dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.
Example: Corrections
9. Pair up and edit!
Remember to use the online thesaurus to find a
word choice suggestion you want to make, and
write that suggestion on a piece of paper to
turn in at the end of class.
Write at least 3 compliments and 3 suggestions
to share with your partner.