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   Peer editing is working with someone your
        own age to improve and edit your writing.
       3 steps: Compliments, Suggestions, Corrections




What is Peer Editing?
   Tell the writer what they have done well after
        looking at their word choice, sentence fluency
        and voice.
       Stay positive with the peer editing process.




Compliments
   Find some compliments you could give this
        writer:
       We where all over my aunts house when my
        dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
        was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
        I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
        in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
        that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
        pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
        pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
        all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
        glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.




Example: Compliments
   Giving the author specific and positive
        suggestions on how they can make their
        writing better.
       Example: I think if you added some more detail
        that part could be more clear.
       You will all be using the thesaurus to suggest a
        change in word choice.




Suggestions
   What suggestions do you have for this author?
       We where all over my aunts house when my
        dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
        was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
        I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
        in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
        that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
        pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
        pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
        all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
        glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.




Example: Suggestions
   This is the time where you will help fix any
        grammar or conventions that you see need to
        be fixed.
       Remember to stay positive. This is a time to
        help not a time to be negative toward
        someone’s writing.




Corrections
   What corrections would you make?
       We where all over my aunts house when my
        dog Riley was running around like crazy. He
        was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden
        I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming
        in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes
        that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the
        pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and
        pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook
        all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was
        glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him.




Example: Corrections
Pair up and edit!

         Remember to use the online thesaurus to find a
          word choice suggestion you want to make, and
          write that suggestion on a piece of paper to
          turn in at the end of class.
         Write at least 3 compliments and 3 suggestions
          to share with your partner.

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Lesson 10 pres

  • 2. Peer editing is working with someone your own age to improve and edit your writing.  3 steps: Compliments, Suggestions, Corrections What is Peer Editing?
  • 3. Tell the writer what they have done well after looking at their word choice, sentence fluency and voice.  Stay positive with the peer editing process. Compliments
  • 4. Find some compliments you could give this writer:  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Example: Compliments
  • 5. Giving the author specific and positive suggestions on how they can make their writing better.  Example: I think if you added some more detail that part could be more clear.  You will all be using the thesaurus to suggest a change in word choice. Suggestions
  • 6. What suggestions do you have for this author?  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Example: Suggestions
  • 7. This is the time where you will help fix any grammar or conventions that you see need to be fixed.  Remember to stay positive. This is a time to help not a time to be negative toward someone’s writing. Corrections
  • 8. What corrections would you make?  We where all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and riley he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldn’t believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Example: Corrections
  • 9. Pair up and edit!  Remember to use the online thesaurus to find a word choice suggestion you want to make, and write that suggestion on a piece of paper to turn in at the end of class.  Write at least 3 compliments and 3 suggestions to share with your partner.