Before	
  Improvements	
  

A/er	
  Improvements	
  
As	
  you	
  can	
  see	
  nothing	
  much	
  has	
  changed	
  except	
  the	
  review	
  at	
  the	
  bo;om.	
  I	
  was	
  advised	
  to	
  
change	
  the	
  font	
  for	
  it	
  and	
  put	
  who	
  the	
  review	
  is	
  by	
  on	
  a	
  different	
  line.	
  I	
  also	
  removed	
  the	
  outline	
  
from	
  the	
  stars.	
  
A/er	
  Improvements	
  
Before	
  Improvements	
  

Again,	
  as	
  you	
  can	
  see	
  nothing	
  much	
  has	
  
changed	
  except	
  the	
  review	
  at	
  the	
  
bo;om.	
  I	
  was	
  advised	
  to	
  change	
  the	
  
font	
  for	
  it	
  and	
  put	
  who	
  the	
  review	
  is	
  by	
  
on	
  a	
  different	
  line.	
  I	
  also	
  removed	
  the	
  
outline	
  from	
  the	
  stars.	
  
Before	
  Improvements	
  

A/er	
  Improvements	
  

Nothing	
  has	
  been	
  changed	
  here	
  as	
  feedback	
  said	
  it	
  looked	
  perfect	
  as	
  it	
  is	
  so	
  plain	
  
and	
  simple	
  yet	
  effecBve.	
  
Before	
  Improvements	
  
A	
  lot	
  of	
  improvements	
  have	
  
been	
  made	
  on	
  this	
  page.	
  I	
  have	
  
reduced	
  the	
  number	
  of	
  red	
  
petals	
  and	
  instead	
  of	
  a	
  lyrics	
  
line	
  I	
  have	
  included	
  a	
  message	
  
to	
  the	
  fans.	
  I	
  have	
  also	
  put	
  that	
  
as	
  the	
  background	
  by	
  zoomed	
  
in	
  and	
  the	
  opacity	
  lowered	
  as	
  
the	
  background	
  as	
  white	
  
looked	
  too	
  plain.	
  I	
  also	
  made	
  
the	
  image	
  of	
  my	
  model	
  bigger	
  
so	
  her	
  head	
  is	
  a	
  bit	
  cut	
  off	
  from	
  
the	
  top.	
  

A/er	
  Improvements	
  
Before	
  Improvements	
  

As	
  you	
  can	
  see	
  there	
  isn’t	
  an	
  a/er	
  improvements	
  image	
  of	
  this	
  page	
  due	
  to	
  feedback	
  received	
  
which	
  was	
  that	
  these	
  were	
  a	
  waste	
  of	
  pages	
  and	
  also	
  a	
  waste	
  of	
  a	
  good	
  image	
  in	
  the	
  
background.	
  So	
  I	
  decided	
  to	
  get	
  rid	
  of	
  the	
  pages	
  altogether.	
  	
  
Before	
  Improvements	
  

A/er	
  Improvements	
  

Quite	
  a	
  few	
  changes	
  were	
  made	
  on	
  the	
  back	
  page	
  to	
  make	
  it	
  look	
  more	
  professional	
  and	
  
realisBc.	
  I	
  added	
  the	
  barcode	
  and	
  the	
  tracklist	
  and	
  got	
  rid	
  of	
  the	
  image	
  of	
  model	
  and	
  it	
  felt	
  like	
  I	
  
had	
  too	
  many.	
  I	
  wanted	
  to	
  keep	
  the	
  last	
  page	
  simple	
  as	
  the	
  front	
  cover	
  was	
  simple	
  as	
  well.	
  

Improvements Made On Ancillary Tasks

  • 1.
    Before  Improvements   A/er  Improvements   As  you  can  see  nothing  much  has  changed  except  the  review  at  the  bo;om.  I  was  advised  to   change  the  font  for  it  and  put  who  the  review  is  by  on  a  different  line.  I  also  removed  the  outline   from  the  stars.  
  • 2.
    A/er  Improvements   Before  Improvements   Again,  as  you  can  see  nothing  much  has   changed  except  the  review  at  the   bo;om.  I  was  advised  to  change  the   font  for  it  and  put  who  the  review  is  by   on  a  different  line.  I  also  removed  the   outline  from  the  stars.  
  • 3.
    Before  Improvements   A/er  Improvements   Nothing  has  been  changed  here  as  feedback  said  it  looked  perfect  as  it  is  so  plain   and  simple  yet  effecBve.  
  • 4.
    Before  Improvements   A  lot  of  improvements  have   been  made  on  this  page.  I  have   reduced  the  number  of  red   petals  and  instead  of  a  lyrics   line  I  have  included  a  message   to  the  fans.  I  have  also  put  that   as  the  background  by  zoomed   in  and  the  opacity  lowered  as   the  background  as  white   looked  too  plain.  I  also  made   the  image  of  my  model  bigger   so  her  head  is  a  bit  cut  off  from   the  top.   A/er  Improvements  
  • 5.
    Before  Improvements   As  you  can  see  there  isn’t  an  a/er  improvements  image  of  this  page  due  to  feedback  received   which  was  that  these  were  a  waste  of  pages  and  also  a  waste  of  a  good  image  in  the   background.  So  I  decided  to  get  rid  of  the  pages  altogether.    
  • 6.
    Before  Improvements   A/er  Improvements   Quite  a  few  changes  were  made  on  the  back  page  to  make  it  look  more  professional  and   realisBc.  I  added  the  barcode  and  the  tracklist  and  got  rid  of  the  image  of  model  and  it  felt  like  I   had  too  many.  I  wanted  to  keep  the  last  page  simple  as  the  front  cover  was  simple  as  well.