Script
Scene 1
Man stands on edge of building – tension builds for few seconds then falls.
Scene 2
Collins and Cox walk in to HQ.
Collins: DCI Collins and Sergeant Cox
Desk Sergeant: There’s been another one
Scene 3
Voiceover: 4 jumps in one week, what’s different? (Over shoulder shot of COX +COLLINS walking to
witness)
(Voiceover) Desk Sergeant: This time… there’s a witness
Witness: I saw who did it.
Scene 4
(Cut to man running away from police)
(Cut to shot of each main good character individually)
(Cut to man in suspicious hood)
(Gunfire/explosion)
Scene 5
Narrator: Copious 9.00 – BBC1

Improved script

  • 1.
    Script Scene 1 Man standson edge of building – tension builds for few seconds then falls. Scene 2 Collins and Cox walk in to HQ. Collins: DCI Collins and Sergeant Cox Desk Sergeant: There’s been another one Scene 3 Voiceover: 4 jumps in one week, what’s different? (Over shoulder shot of COX +COLLINS walking to witness) (Voiceover) Desk Sergeant: This time… there’s a witness Witness: I saw who did it. Scene 4 (Cut to man running away from police) (Cut to shot of each main good character individually) (Cut to man in suspicious hood) (Gunfire/explosion) Scene 5 Narrator: Copious 9.00 – BBC1