ART 
CRITICISM 
SM2273 
CHARLOTTE FROST
LAST WEEK 
We went to Asia Art Archive and learned about primary or original 
sources (literal evidence of creativity: an artwork, a letter by an 
artist) and secondary sources (information or writing about the 
evidence a book about the artist). We discovered how to 
research artists using the archive and prepared for a week of work 
researching the biography of a Hong Kong artist all in preparation 
for today’s task. This week we’re thinking about tertiary sources 
(places where primary and secondary sources are aggregated or 
indexed: Wikipedia!)
Before we can write an informed work of art criticism, we need to 
be good at finding out more about the artwork we are looking at. 
In previous weeks we have focused mainly in internal evidence 
(what we could see in front of us, the details of the artwork itself). 
We have also touched upon external evidence by thinking about 
what the title of an artwork might tell us. 
Sometimes however we might need to dig even deeper to 
understand the meaning of an artwork.
We might need to find more about the artist him/herself or the time 
in which the artwork was made – what was the political or 
economic situation for example? 
We call this type of information ‘contextual’, it provides further 
context or background information on the conditions under which 
the artwork was made. 
So far we’ve just described and analysed the work in front of us, 
but if we’re going to interpret the meaning of an artwork (next 
week), this background information can help.
Sometimes this ‘contextual’ information will be the writing of 
other art critics. For example we might read a critique written 
by someone else and decide if we think their description or 
even judgment of an artwork fits. But so far in this course we 
have avoided this because we need to first develop our own 
abilities. 
We need to be able to describe and analyse artworks as we 
see them and we need to be able to do our own research – in 
particular we need to be good at researching areas of the arts 
that do not get enough coverage in the rest of the world.
TODAY 
We are going to write artist biographies about artists who are little-known 
beyond Asia. To up the stakes and make you consider how 
be a good researcher and writer we’re going to write Wikipedia 
entries. 
This means you need to be good at: 
Clearly communicating with an unknown public 
and 
Clearly citing the sources of the information you have gathered
PREPARATION 
You will now have: 
Created an account on Wikipedia (more information on signing up and 
choosing an appropriate username) 
Read this guide on writing your first Wikipedia article 
Watched this video on writing your first Wikipedia article 
And in your pairs: 
Returned to the Asia Art Archive and or 
Used the CityU begin to research your allocated artist.
You will have discovered things like: 
1. A copy of the artist’s CV. 
2. The artist’s birth city/state and the country they were born in. 
3. The artist’s date of birth. 
4. The artist’s full name (including middle name). 
5. How to best describe the art they are most noted for? 
6. The exhibitions the artist has been featured in and the awards 
they’ve received and the dates for each. 
7. References to articles, book chapters and catalogues the 
artist is featured in (these are essential!).
Now we need to work out how this information can be made 
available on Wikipedia by producing Wikipedia articles that 
conform to their guidelines, share information with a global 
audience and don’t get taken down for any reason. 
Let’s look at what Wikipedia articles are made up of…
ANATOMY OF A 
WIKIPEDIA ARTICLE 
Most likely you’re used to reading Wikipedia, not writing it, so we 
need to be familiar with elements of Wikipedia pages you might 
not have looked at before. 
Here is a good guide to the Anatomy of Wikipedia Article 
Now let’s look at those elements on a topical article.
LAYING THE 
FOUNDATIONS 
Justify. Make sure the justification for your article is implicit. Ensure it 
is clear in the opening sentence of the article that the artist you are 
writing about is significant/has had an impact. But as we are writing 
biography articles is important they don’t sound promotional, this is a 
factual resource not an advertisement. 
Citation. Citation. Citation. Wikipedia loves citations, the more and 
the better, literally, the better. Try and clearly reference as many 
statements as possible. If using a Chinese resource, at least 
translate the title to English as well so that English-speaking 
Wikipedians can verify it. 
Don’t forget the footnotes. It’s easy to use the ‘cite’ button and then 
‘templates’ to help you create citations, but it’s easy to forget that you 
need to add a footnote section at the end of the document to display 
the citations. Just include the text <references /> at the end of the 
page you create and you’ll be fine.
RESOURCES 
1. Here are some examples of ‘good’ articles on Wikipedia: 
Scottish art 
National treasures of Japan 
Barack Obama ‘Hope’ poster 
Examples of ‘featured’ articles on Wikipedia: 
Bronwyn Bancroft 
Daisy Jugadai Napaltjarri
RESOURCES 
2. Here’s a Wikipedia style guide for biography entries. And here 
is a template for writing biography entries in Wikipedia which 
we’ve made for you in advance. 
3. Here are the Google Docs we’ve also made ahead of time so 
you’ve got somewhere to put your notes.
RESOURCES 
4. Here are some more in depth guides to editing Wikipedia for 
further reference: 
Wikipedia training for students: 
Welcome, a short introduction; 
The Core, an overview of Wikipedia's core principles; 
Editing, a tutorial on the basic mechanics of editing pages and 
communicating with others; and Advanced, some selected 
advanced topics to help you get off to a good start with your first 
article.
STEP 1. 
When you have gathered your information and read about how to 
write a Wikipedia article, log into Wikipedia and do a search for 
the name of the artist you are going to write about. When the 
search shows up no results you will see the sentence: 
‘You may create the page ”Name of Artist” 
Click on the “Name of Artist” 
This will take you to a page where you can create the Wikipedia 
article on that artist.
STEP 2 
Either use the template we made for you (and copy and paste into 
the Google Docs we made for you) or a new document, or follow 
the steps using the article wizard in your ‘sandbox’ and add 
information on the artist you have researched. 
If you need help: 
1. Try to find the solution using the resources provided 
2. Ask people sitting near you (this task is about being 
resourceful) 
3. Ask Charlotte
Warning: 
Write your entire Wikipedia article in the Google Doc provided, or 
your own document, or your Wikipedia ‘Sandbox’ and only when 
you’re ready, then paste it into live Wikipedia and publish it. Do 
not publish it and then make changes as this will mean your 
article looks suspicious and it will be flagged for checking or even 
deleted.
STEP 3 
When you think you have created your Wikipedia article 
publish it. Then go to the ‘talk’ page and summarise what you 
did so that Wikipedian’s checking the page know who you 
are and why you have made the page this way. It’s as simple 
as saying ‘I made this basic page as part of a class 
assignment.’ Then you need to sign this statement with you 
Wikipedia signature, you do that by typing 4 of this 
character: ~~~~ 
Here’s some more advice on talk pages
STEP 4 
Email me the link to your Wikipedia page 
clfrost@cityu.edu.hk
PRIZES!!! 
Between this class and next week you both need to keep an eye 
on your Wikipedia page. It might get flagged by a Wikipedian for 
mistakes or they might request more content or citations. Try to 
communicate with them using the talk page (and signing your 
name) and try to resolve the problems they find with the article. 
There will be prizes for those who manage to keep their Wikipedia 
article live and resolve all the issues flagged by Wikipedians. 
I will award 1st prize to the best Wikipedia article.
NEXT WEEK 
No laptops needed. Come to class as usual.

How do you research art part 2

  • 1.
    ART CRITICISM SM2273 CHARLOTTE FROST
  • 2.
    LAST WEEK Wewent to Asia Art Archive and learned about primary or original sources (literal evidence of creativity: an artwork, a letter by an artist) and secondary sources (information or writing about the evidence a book about the artist). We discovered how to research artists using the archive and prepared for a week of work researching the biography of a Hong Kong artist all in preparation for today’s task. This week we’re thinking about tertiary sources (places where primary and secondary sources are aggregated or indexed: Wikipedia!)
  • 3.
    Before we canwrite an informed work of art criticism, we need to be good at finding out more about the artwork we are looking at. In previous weeks we have focused mainly in internal evidence (what we could see in front of us, the details of the artwork itself). We have also touched upon external evidence by thinking about what the title of an artwork might tell us. Sometimes however we might need to dig even deeper to understand the meaning of an artwork.
  • 4.
    We might needto find more about the artist him/herself or the time in which the artwork was made – what was the political or economic situation for example? We call this type of information ‘contextual’, it provides further context or background information on the conditions under which the artwork was made. So far we’ve just described and analysed the work in front of us, but if we’re going to interpret the meaning of an artwork (next week), this background information can help.
  • 5.
    Sometimes this ‘contextual’information will be the writing of other art critics. For example we might read a critique written by someone else and decide if we think their description or even judgment of an artwork fits. But so far in this course we have avoided this because we need to first develop our own abilities. We need to be able to describe and analyse artworks as we see them and we need to be able to do our own research – in particular we need to be good at researching areas of the arts that do not get enough coverage in the rest of the world.
  • 6.
    TODAY We aregoing to write artist biographies about artists who are little-known beyond Asia. To up the stakes and make you consider how be a good researcher and writer we’re going to write Wikipedia entries. This means you need to be good at: Clearly communicating with an unknown public and Clearly citing the sources of the information you have gathered
  • 7.
    PREPARATION You willnow have: Created an account on Wikipedia (more information on signing up and choosing an appropriate username) Read this guide on writing your first Wikipedia article Watched this video on writing your first Wikipedia article And in your pairs: Returned to the Asia Art Archive and or Used the CityU begin to research your allocated artist.
  • 8.
    You will havediscovered things like: 1. A copy of the artist’s CV. 2. The artist’s birth city/state and the country they were born in. 3. The artist’s date of birth. 4. The artist’s full name (including middle name). 5. How to best describe the art they are most noted for? 6. The exhibitions the artist has been featured in and the awards they’ve received and the dates for each. 7. References to articles, book chapters and catalogues the artist is featured in (these are essential!).
  • 9.
    Now we needto work out how this information can be made available on Wikipedia by producing Wikipedia articles that conform to their guidelines, share information with a global audience and don’t get taken down for any reason. Let’s look at what Wikipedia articles are made up of…
  • 10.
    ANATOMY OF A WIKIPEDIA ARTICLE Most likely you’re used to reading Wikipedia, not writing it, so we need to be familiar with elements of Wikipedia pages you might not have looked at before. Here is a good guide to the Anatomy of Wikipedia Article Now let’s look at those elements on a topical article.
  • 11.
    LAYING THE FOUNDATIONS Justify. Make sure the justification for your article is implicit. Ensure it is clear in the opening sentence of the article that the artist you are writing about is significant/has had an impact. But as we are writing biography articles is important they don’t sound promotional, this is a factual resource not an advertisement. Citation. Citation. Citation. Wikipedia loves citations, the more and the better, literally, the better. Try and clearly reference as many statements as possible. If using a Chinese resource, at least translate the title to English as well so that English-speaking Wikipedians can verify it. Don’t forget the footnotes. It’s easy to use the ‘cite’ button and then ‘templates’ to help you create citations, but it’s easy to forget that you need to add a footnote section at the end of the document to display the citations. Just include the text <references /> at the end of the page you create and you’ll be fine.
  • 12.
    RESOURCES 1. Hereare some examples of ‘good’ articles on Wikipedia: Scottish art National treasures of Japan Barack Obama ‘Hope’ poster Examples of ‘featured’ articles on Wikipedia: Bronwyn Bancroft Daisy Jugadai Napaltjarri
  • 13.
    RESOURCES 2. Here’sa Wikipedia style guide for biography entries. And here is a template for writing biography entries in Wikipedia which we’ve made for you in advance. 3. Here are the Google Docs we’ve also made ahead of time so you’ve got somewhere to put your notes.
  • 14.
    RESOURCES 4. Hereare some more in depth guides to editing Wikipedia for further reference: Wikipedia training for students: Welcome, a short introduction; The Core, an overview of Wikipedia's core principles; Editing, a tutorial on the basic mechanics of editing pages and communicating with others; and Advanced, some selected advanced topics to help you get off to a good start with your first article.
  • 15.
    STEP 1. Whenyou have gathered your information and read about how to write a Wikipedia article, log into Wikipedia and do a search for the name of the artist you are going to write about. When the search shows up no results you will see the sentence: ‘You may create the page ”Name of Artist” Click on the “Name of Artist” This will take you to a page where you can create the Wikipedia article on that artist.
  • 16.
    STEP 2 Eitheruse the template we made for you (and copy and paste into the Google Docs we made for you) or a new document, or follow the steps using the article wizard in your ‘sandbox’ and add information on the artist you have researched. If you need help: 1. Try to find the solution using the resources provided 2. Ask people sitting near you (this task is about being resourceful) 3. Ask Charlotte
  • 17.
    Warning: Write yourentire Wikipedia article in the Google Doc provided, or your own document, or your Wikipedia ‘Sandbox’ and only when you’re ready, then paste it into live Wikipedia and publish it. Do not publish it and then make changes as this will mean your article looks suspicious and it will be flagged for checking or even deleted.
  • 18.
    STEP 3 Whenyou think you have created your Wikipedia article publish it. Then go to the ‘talk’ page and summarise what you did so that Wikipedian’s checking the page know who you are and why you have made the page this way. It’s as simple as saying ‘I made this basic page as part of a class assignment.’ Then you need to sign this statement with you Wikipedia signature, you do that by typing 4 of this character: ~~~~ Here’s some more advice on talk pages
  • 19.
    STEP 4 Emailme the link to your Wikipedia page clfrost@cityu.edu.hk
  • 20.
    PRIZES!!! Between thisclass and next week you both need to keep an eye on your Wikipedia page. It might get flagged by a Wikipedian for mistakes or they might request more content or citations. Try to communicate with them using the talk page (and signing your name) and try to resolve the problems they find with the article. There will be prizes for those who manage to keep their Wikipedia article live and resolve all the issues flagged by Wikipedians. I will award 1st prize to the best Wikipedia article.
  • 21.
    NEXT WEEK Nolaptops needed. Come to class as usual.