This document summarizes changes made to a print music album advertisement based on feedback. The advertiser added a colored box around text on the right to improve readability of the font. Magazine reviews and white stars were also added to the left of the ad to showcase album ratings and help the ratings stand out against the background. The advertiser presents the finalized print ad with these improvements incorporated based on received feedback.

1. Print Advert
Amendment
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2. This was my First draft of my Print Advert. Since then I have been
given feedback based on the advert and I have now added
improvements to advert.

3. To improve the font issue on the information on the right I
decided to add a box over the text. By doing this it has colour
which has been faded. This allows you to see the text fine.

4. I have also decided to add reviews from magazines on the left.
This helps show to people what ratings the album has. I have
used white for the stars as I believe it stands out better against
the background.

5. This is my final Print Advert.