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Composition
Question:
You were walking towards the school canteen. Suddenly, you saw
some pupils running out of the canteen.
It was a normal Thursday morning. The sun was rising and as it spread its
warmth, the birds whistled a merry tune. Unfortunately, I was missing out on
all of that. I was sitting in my seat in class, with the teacher boring me to death.
I was counting down the final seconds to recess, my favourite part of the day.
Suddenly, I hearded the bell ringing. It was the sweetest sound to me. I
grabbed my wallet and dashed out of my class. I was yearning for the savoury
taste of Laksa.
I queued up in line for it. I bought a bowl of flaming hot and I could feel
the tingling warmth of it on my hands. I hunted down a place to sit and sat
down. Just then, I sensed something amiss. The usual cheery chatter of the
happy children was clearly absent. Suddenly, I saw some people running out of
the canteen like a herd of buffaloes. Turning a blind eye, to the strange
phenomenon, I took a bite. The taste of the Laksa was pure ecstasy, like I was
floating on cloud nine. I began shoveling everything into my mouth.
Just then, when I was lost in food haven, I smelt something apart from
my Laksa. I smelt him before I saw him. I could feel his stinky breath behind
me. It hit me like a solid fist. I whirled around and saw the face I dreaded to
see. It was the face of the repugnant school bully, Adam. Before I knew it, I saw
his face coming towards me in slow motion. As the fist hit my stomach, my
breath was knocked out of me as I screamed in agony. His henchman formed a
circle around me and started sneering. I looked up, just in time to see a fist
land squarely on my nose. Blood streamed out of my nose. His henchmen
kicked me repeatedly, and I rolled into a ball trying to protect myself, feeling
vulnerable. At last, the kicking stopped and they left. Adam stayed back to spit
on me. After that, he sneered and left .
Knowing that I had to do something to stop Adam, I immideately ran
down to the general office to tell the principal about Adam. The next day,
Adam was caned and warned never to bully anyone again. Although he
sneered at people, he never attacked them. The school was peaceful again.
-

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El compo ca1 draft 2

  • 1. Composition Question: You were walking towards the school canteen. Suddenly, you saw some pupils running out of the canteen. It was a normal Thursday morning. The sun was rising and as it spread its warmth, the birds whistled a merry tune. Unfortunately, I was missing out on all of that. I was sitting in my seat in class, with the teacher boring me to death. I was counting down the final seconds to recess, my favourite part of the day. Suddenly, I hearded the bell ringing. It was the sweetest sound to me. I grabbed my wallet and dashed out of my class. I was yearning for the savoury taste of Laksa. I queued up in line for it. I bought a bowl of flaming hot and I could feel the tingling warmth of it on my hands. I hunted down a place to sit and sat down. Just then, I sensed something amiss. The usual cheery chatter of the happy children was clearly absent. Suddenly, I saw some people running out of the canteen like a herd of buffaloes. Turning a blind eye, to the strange phenomenon, I took a bite. The taste of the Laksa was pure ecstasy, like I was floating on cloud nine. I began shoveling everything into my mouth. Just then, when I was lost in food haven, I smelt something apart from my Laksa. I smelt him before I saw him. I could feel his stinky breath behind me. It hit me like a solid fist. I whirled around and saw the face I dreaded to see. It was the face of the repugnant school bully, Adam. Before I knew it, I saw his face coming towards me in slow motion. As the fist hit my stomach, my breath was knocked out of me as I screamed in agony. His henchman formed a circle around me and started sneering. I looked up, just in time to see a fist land squarely on my nose. Blood streamed out of my nose. His henchmen kicked me repeatedly, and I rolled into a ball trying to protect myself, feeling vulnerable. At last, the kicking stopped and they left. Adam stayed back to spit on me. After that, he sneered and left .
  • 2. Knowing that I had to do something to stop Adam, I immideately ran down to the general office to tell the principal about Adam. The next day, Adam was caned and warned never to bully anyone again. Although he sneered at people, he never attacked them. The school was peaceful again. -